Chronicals of Tiquan Conley Chapter 1 part 5 Tziah vs ???

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Here it is guys the next part to my fan fiction I hope your enjoying as much as I am :D*
If you missed the last part here it is:
Let's get started

(I can't believe Tiquan taught him the 8 Trigrams...damn i can't get hit by that it time for backup) "Come on Tziah hit me with your best Shot!!
(He's provoking me....he might have something up his sleeve....however that won't stop me) "8 Trigrams!!!!!!! I can't move"
"Showdow Possession complete."
"Damit Jermaine you got me!"
"Well you should've listened yo dad did say 3 of the best now it's 2 on one"
"Who's the third?"
"Haha in your case you better hope you don't get that far or you'll wind up half dead!"
"I see what your doing Maine and it won't work...your trying to get me scared so I loose focus. Well NO! Not this time."(I gotta find a way out damn Tiquan taught me a way I just forgot damn!)
"Release!"
"Huh what why did you release the jutsu?"
"To easy wanna make this a challenge for you and plus...."
"Plus? Plus what?(....what's that noise it's coming from behind JERE)
"LIGHTING BLADE!!!!!"
"Ahhhhh!!!!"(hard breathing) "The shadow possession was just a decoy wasn't it"
"Does it matter?"
"Well as me being your son and you guys are pretty much killing me yeah it does matter."
"Ok then....it was....but f**k that the real battle starts here and now.....Byakugan!!!"
"Shadow sewing jutsu."
"Damn dad has is Byakugan activated Jermaine has his shadows ready and -cough-cough- Jeremy has his Sharingan activated....how do I win agianst these odds?"
(All three) "You don't!"

That it guys for now. Thanks for reading I hope you enjoyed and I hope you continue to enjoy thanks again and I hope you have a nice day.

Stay tuned next time chapter 1 part 6 Tiquan and Darnell vs mysterious ninja
Will they prevail? Who exactly are these ninja? What are grandpas ties with them? Question will answered next time.
 

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That just wrong you kno this guy is a new ff writer and is doing his best....wow really just don't comment if you don't like it just major disrespect right there
 

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Well that disappointing u didn't have to do that :( really and momba chill alrite imma just ignore him

Well I'm sorry he just he just didn't have to do that really its sh!t like that that just pisses me off and to be honest I liked it it was good and I liked how you built up to the next part at the end keep it up buddy
 

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Well I'm sorry he just he just didn't have to do that really its sh!t like that that just pisses me off and to be honest I liked it it was good and I liked how you built up to the next part at the end keep it up buddy

Thank you man imma just use that as motivation....cuz ya kno what they say haters are motivaters :D
 
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