[CFS] Chop Hanging Fist

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So, the basic concept is channeling chakra through each physical strike in order to enhance the damage of physical contact. The release of chakra is released outwardsly, and expands outwards on the target - so what appears to be a small area of effect is increased through the chakra that is released, thus enhancing the damage. I liked the comparison with the pebble and a lake, it creates a great visual to depict something small make contact and release a large rippling-like effect that adds damage over a larger area. Now, for the actual physical combat. The practitioners of this style have movements that are generally slower and more drawn out, but they are still capable of quick fashion. The basic stance is: User crouching low, one leg fully extend frontward, and the arms faced towards the target, with palms up. Main area of movement is pelvis and joint, basically the hip area. The movement along with the actual fighting works together to create a fluid motion in each attack that is quick, concise, and deals a lot of damage.

Looking through the history, I assume you were inspired by Bacchus from FairyTail? :T_T:
 

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Good, and yes. He was my Hyuuga once upon a time, whom this style was created for. <3

Now comes the demanding physical training. This style focuses on movements of the hips. Its important you can shake it.

*tosses you a hula hoop*

GET GOING!
 

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*I take the oddly shaped weapon and put it around my hip. With simple circular motions, I swivel my hip, doing it slowly at first. I learn that the slower I go, the lower the hoop gets. With that in mind, I rotate my hips rapidly, and do so for hours.*

"Sensei, I'm exhausted... Are you sure I'm supposed to do this?" O_<

I accidentally posted on Vision's thread lol
 

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Fool don't question your master!

*tosses you a weighted hula hoop that shatters the earth when it lands*

Now do it some more! Your hips must be strong, like a penguin!
 

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*feels the penguin coming*

OKAY SENSEI!

*Feeling inspired by his master's' speech, I take the weighted hoop and put it around my waist. I begin to rotate my hips quickly, however, after seconds of rotation, I notice that it began to fall yet again. Repeating the proccess, I. Swivel my hips in wider circles with fast speeds, which would allow me to keep the hoop from falling *

"Here sensei! My hips are as strong as penguins!"
(I doubt penguins have hips xD)
 

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Do not underestimate the Penguin young one. Their hips have evolved to such strength that they themselves cannot move them and are forced to waddle! We only reach half their strength in this training, allowing us full movement. :whip:

Good, your hips are ready. But now we must train the mind!

*tosses you a bag of rocks*

Go sit at the end of that pier. Toss the rocks in one by one and observe the ripples they make. Explain them to me, and how they make you feel philosophically.
 

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Yes, mastah!

*I walk over to the pier and sit, meditavely. Grabbing the largest of the rocks, I simply toss it on the water. It makes a rippling effect on the surface of the water, which is what I believed was the goal of the experiment. As for the reason, I was still unaware. I repeat it repeatedly and notice the same rippling effect yet again. It seemed that the rippling effect was more evident in the center and faded away once it goes further.*

"Okay, so I believe the style is using the principles of the ripples. You see, the center of the ripples would be our fist, or where The physical contact hits. It would radiate outwards, the chakra that is, and logically, should be the most powerful on the center. It's kind of like an earthquake when the epicenter is the strongest. it makes me feel philosophically because well, rocks, water, nature, and serenity."
 

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Hmm...very good young one, you are now ready!

We will begin with:

(Hikasazanami-Ken Genjutsu: Hi-hirate kuresshendo) | Chop Hanging Rippling Fist Illusion Technique: Hidden Palm
Crescendo
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: For this technique the practitioner will form two hand seals and then slowly assume the basic stance of the Chop-Hanging Fist style. This activates the illusion portion of the technique. The opponent will see the user slowly lower their body, leaving brief after images. Once the stance has been reached the opponent sees the user disappear in a swirl of wind. In reality the user will have been focusing large amounts of chakra to their legs and will burst forwards once the illusion activates, closing distance at high speeds and unleashes a barrage of eight palms strikes in the blink of an eye, never stopping their forwards movement. The strikes and the damage from them will break the opponent out of the genjutsu (should they still be in it) by the time of which the user will have moves past them by about three meters.
-Can be used three times per battle.
Approved:

Explain this technique in your own words, give me strengths and weaknesses, and then use it on my clone.

*poofs clone*
 

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omg, I just realized I haven't replied to this. LOL.
Sorry for the late reply.


Interpretation: A mix of an illusion and Taijutsu. Through two hand seals, a practitioner will assume the basic stance and induce an illusion on the target where he sees the user lower his body which would result in after images. A swirl of wind, in the illusion, is created before the user disappears, but in reality, he simply charges a lot of chakra to his legs to burst forwards and quickly close the gap between the two. They follow up with an eight-palm strike, strikes that are chakra enhanced, I assume. The pain of the strikes would be enough to stap the enemy back to reality.

Advantages: Quickly performed, the actual physical strikes at least. Eight palm strikes within the blink of an eye is pretty fast. It closes the gab between target and user, making it really useful and the illusion that accompanies it really contributes to the attack itself - it effectively serves as a distraction for the swift attack to be performed

Disadvantages: Two handseals required would make it seem like a technique is to be performed, which also adds another hint as to why an illusion may be used. The illusion is one that is pretty obvious, so yea. Closing the gap between you and the user happens quickly, so if they use something like Nagashi, that would be pretty difficult to pull off.

Performance: I perform two hand seals and send my chakra into the opponent's chakra system while assuming the basic stance of Chop-Hanging fist. After the stance, the opponent, because of the genjutsu casted earlier, is made to believe that I simply disappear in a swirl of wind. In reality, I channel a massive amount of chakra in my legs allowing me to travel at incredibly quick speed to close the gab while channeling chakra in my fingertips and very quickly release a barrage of eight palm strikes. Each strike releases the chakra from my fingertips, creating a 'ripple' effect per strike which breaks the enemy out of the illusion.
 

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Good.

Next:

(Hikasazanami-Ken: Hyoro Darumadoru Kyuushuu) - Chop Hanging Rippling Fist: Swaying Daruma Doll Revenge
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique is used to counter strikes towards the upper torso or head of the practitioner. Using careful chakra control they'll momentarily reinforce the point of impact to minimize damage while allowing their upper body to move with the strike by swaying their hips. They'll then use their hips to convert the momentum of their body and rebound towards the opponent at high speeds while striking out with both palms releasing a ripple through the opponent's body that can encompass their entire torso.
-Can defend A-rank and below taijutsu.
-Can be used three times per battle.
 

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Interpretation: Basically an upper strike towards the practitioner's upper body. From what I can tell, you channel chakra to the point where the enemy will strike and once their limbs connect, the practitioner would use their hips and hip muscles to move with the strike (for example, if the strike is a punch, I'm guessing the practitioner would sway back). Once the strike has passed, the user would quickly rebound at great speeds with two palms positioned outwards to create a ripple effect.
Advantages: The user probably wouldn't anticipate you snapping back into position. The point of impact part is really cool, because of how quickly one can readjust their body depending on where the strike is heading and also, the speed in which you rebound makes for a great surprise attack.
Disadvantages: The only one I see is where you actually allow the enemy to make physical contact with you. Like, they can suddenly empower it with chakra for all i know, so, yea, in that scenario, it would be hard to defend against.
Performance: As I notice a frontward strike to my chest, I gather chakra and send it to the position in which I estimate the technique is about to hit. Once it has done so, the chakra allows me to take minimal damage. Furthermore, the moment it has made contact, I readjust my hips to sway back and once his arm has passed, I channel chakra into my arms and rebound my back into position. My palms faced frontward, the speed and momentum converted from my hips gives me a boost in power when my chakra-infused palms make contact and creates a rippling effect.
 
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