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B! Better keep a nice, loooong distance from guards after last chapter :p

Then again this guy pretty much deserves anything that happens to him :D
 

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You wave as you run by the guards. They try to shout something at you as you run past but you can't hear them over how awesome you are. You're also quite excited, you're finally home after that long and arduous mission. It was rather dangerous too, the pay should be amazing!

You pass by the familiar sights of your village, the villagers give you menacing glares for some reason though. Probably because they're envious of your incredible skills and fame. It's really hard being as renown as you are. You wave at a group of attractive looking school girls, you'll have to stalk them later. You can't seem to slow down as the anxiousness of completing your mission builds up.

The Kage's office building looms ahead, big and ominous as ever. Will the Kage have another daring mission for you to take when you get there? You'd like to be able to rest for a while after all of your hard work, but you understand the villages need for your dedication. They're so reliant on you, it can get tiresome at times. A ninja standing in front of the Kage's office sees you coming and sighs, shaking his head as he opens the door for you.

"Kage is pissed off at y..." He doesn't even have time to finish talking to you as you burst through the door.

You begin climbing the spiraling staircases that circle the building and barge directly and quite unannounced into the Kage's office. The Kage seemed to have been writing on a scroll at the time and was quite startled at your heroic entrance. The look of anger on his face would soon subside when he saw who stood before him, surely it would be replaced by a look of admiration.

"Mission Accomplished, sir!"

"Are you stupid? All you had to do was get the mail and bring it to my office."

The End!

Ha, bet you guys didn't see that one coming!

I want to thank everybody who took their time to read this and voted in each section. You made writing this incredibly fun, and I truly thank you. I hope you all had as much fun reading this as I did writing this. Also, I've finally hit 2k posts. ;D

Everybody is more than welcome to continue discussing this, especially contemplating the different scenarios that could have happened and how the character evolved over time and how different he could have been. I'll continue responding in this thread as people continue asking questions.

Also, if you really liked this and would like to see another one, I will probably do another one in the future. If you really liked this, and would like to do a Choose your Adventure story yourself, by all means go for it! I look forward to writing for you all some more, and reading your creations as well!
 
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This was so abrupt T.T
Did he get punished or anything? I mean he killed at least 6 people, burned a tavern and messed up half of the surrounding villages .-.



It was really fun reading this and thanks for taking the time to type it down ^.^
You should do this again sometime ^.^ (if you do, drop me a VM with the link)
 

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This was so abrupt T.T
Did he get punished or anything? I mean he killed at least 6 people, burnt a tavern and messed up half of the surrounding villages .-.



It was really fun reading this and thanks for taking the time to type it down ^.^
You should do this again sometime ^.^ (if you do, drop me a VM with the link)

When I do endings like this, I like to leave the readers questioning the possibilities, just to be an *******. That, and so there's continuation! (is that a hint)?
 

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When I do endings like this, I like to leave the readers questioning the possibilities, just to be an *******. That, and so there's continuation! (is that a hint)?

well kinda.. and a nice punishment as a starter? :D
 

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Aw maan xd I didn't expect that :p
This guy really misunderstood his mission xD

Thank you very for this, I really enjoyed reading and voting aswell :D
If you ever do another story then please tell me.

Btw, I was expecting the kage to punch him really hard or something, I thought he was angry because he was aware of all the mess he has caused outside the village. x)
 

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well kinda.. and a nice punishment as a starter? :D
Of course! Can a punishment really work on a guy like the one we created though? ;D

Aw maan xd I didn't expect that :p
This guy really misunderstood his mission xD

Thank you very for this, I really enjoyed reading and voting aswell :D
If you ever do another story then please tell me.

Will do! Again, thank you for sticking through the whole story, and I'm glad you liked it!

B These men ruined your dream, slaughter them mercilessly.

Show no mercy!!

Ah, you're incredibly late, man!
 
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When I do endings like this, I like to leave the readers questioning the possibilities, just to be an *******. That, and so there's continuation! (is that a hint)?

Sounds promising ^.^

well kinda.. and a nice punishment as a starter? :D

Maybe next one will start after he has completed his jail time (if he gets in jail), or it might be with a completely different character from the same universe. Someone he has met maybe? A relative? Jailbreak scenario?
Well I don't wanna be pushy though, 'cause if someone doesn't feel like writing a story it wont turn out as good :3
 

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Sounds promising ^.^



Maybe next one will start after he has completed his jail time (if he gets in jail), or it might be with a completely different character from the same universe. Someone he has met maybe? A relative? Jailbreak scenario?
Well I don't wanna be pushy though, 'cause if someone doesn't feel like writing a story it wont turn out as good :3
That's true, but I had a really good time, lotsa fun, writing this one! Hopefully next time we can get even more people involved in the voting!
 

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Sounds promising ^.^



Maybe next one will start after he has completed his jail time (if he gets in jail), or it might be with a completely different character from the same universe. Someone he has met maybe? A relative? Jailbreak scenario?
Well I don't wanna be pushy though, 'cause if someone doesn't feel like writing a story it wont turn out as good :3

hmmm maybe that little girl in the beginning and her teddy bear? :D
 

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Aww too bad I had to study and couldn't react everytime. I really liked this. When you start 3.0 try to tell me :)
 

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hmmm maybe that little girl in the beginning and her teddy bear? :D

Or the maid that delivered his food, she survived the fire at her work. She has scars all over her once beautiful body, and she becomes an avenger :p
 
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hmmm maybe that little girl in the beginning and her teddy bear? :D

Or her sister, or some random relative...it can be anyone.

You guys and the teddy bear!



Will do. But don't get too distracted from your studying. ;o

Too late to worry about that now xD

Or the maid that delivered his food, she survived the fire at her work. She has scars all over her once beautiful body, and she becomes an avenger :p

Or maybe she has turned to like his fiery character so she seeks him out, saves him from the Kage's and they become partners in crime xD

and then the aliens arive and.....
 

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This really was a fresh new idea for a FF Zombie, keep those coming for sure! Haven't laughed so hard in the FF section for ages man xD
 
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