Chiryoku finishes my Lighting training...

[Akisha]

Alright Sensei. This is the last jutsu I learned...

Spoiler

(Raiton: Rai Ryouken) - Lightning Release: Lightning Hound
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.

As I perform the neccesery handseals, I'm concentrating my Raiton chakra in my right hand. When I have gathered enough I blast a hound shaped stream of lighting from my hand, which stays attached to my right hand through a bolt of lighting. Then I send the steam at a dummy.*

 

[Chiryoku]

Spam? Well, that's what you're doing by posting useless messages. Clear?

Good description~

Convert your chakra into lightning and release it from your mouth, creating a single spear of concentrated lightning.

 

[Akisha]

ok

*I am concentrating my Raiton Chakra in my mouth. Then I'm trying to convert the chakra I have gathered into lighting. Then I release it from my mouth, creating a single spear made of concentrated lighting*

 

[Akisha]

Good enough ?

 

[Sir Flatsplatter Fistybun]

As I perform the neccesery handseals, I'm concentrating my Raiton chakra in my right hand. When I have gathered enough I blast a hound shaped stream of lighting from my hand, which stays attached to my right hand through a bolt of lighting. Then I send the steam at a dummy.*

As I perform the necessary handseals. I'm concentrating my Raiton Chakra in my right hand. When I've gathered enough, I blast a hound-shaped stream of lightning from my hand, which stays attached to my right hand through a bolt of lightning. Then I send the steam at a dummy.

:flaw:
I'm sorry to point this out to you, but your English is rather confusing. Why are you sending steam at a dummy?

Please don't interpret this as an attack of your person. I am only trying to help you.

 

[Chiryoku]

*A spear forms* Good. Now channel more lightning through it and make it split into several concentrated spears that all come back into one spear that comes from your mouth o-o

 

[Akisha]

*I am concentrating my Raiton Chakra in my mouth. Then I'm trying to convert the chakra I have gathered into lighting. Then i form several concentrated lighting spears that come back into one and release it from my mouth*

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

 

[Chiryoku]

You basically shoot one spear, which then splits when already spit out. Retry, please.
I didn't explain it right, my bad here.

 

[Akisha]

*I am concentrating my Raiton Chakra in my mouth. Then I'm trying to convert the chakra I have gathered into lighting. Then i form a lighting spear that I release from my mouth*