childern (sad poem)

[izinagi54]

the child
a benevolence
a miracle
its so serial
that you are blinded
the turth demands to be let out
yet you shut it
why must they cry
the childern why do some die
cut down before they learn life
never hearing a lovers whisper
cast out of the light
because of the might
of the night
deformes
that cannot be reformed
why does the child die
as evil takes it height
as war is not right
it only leads to more nights
in the night
light is cast asunder
as innocence is thunder
pray thy mother
that you might
not let the night
seep in
when the time is right

 

[chad062388]

Good poem, original work?

 

[izinagi54]

Good poem, original work?

yes its based on ture events

 

[skehan17]

yeh it's good, good work

 

[Yuka]

it was the best Poem i ever read, rep +

 

[Sage of Infinity Paths]

It prefers in Rap