I have mixed feelings about this. (as a person who listens to rap/hip hop, like, everyday). First guy needs to sound more understandable, be calmer, create a little bit deeper voice maybe . The second guy was ok, I guess. Both of them have good flow, which can be improved even further. Stop writing stuff about what you have and what you not, don't be a mainstreamer, only kids listen to them. Be yourselves. Rap about problems, solutions to the problems and the reasons to live. Rap about good stuff, be someone respectable. Beat was neat. But I thought the lyrics would be more aggressive, since it reminded of the old good 90's - mid 00's stuff. All in all it was ok. Keep up with the good stuff. Good luck, and most importantly, have fun!
P.S. Only my personal opinion.