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[Desanto]

Well, alot of you know me BUT for those who don't know I recently was invited to Los Angeles to compete against the best rappers of the world to make it on an Official Cypher. Unfortunately I didn't make the top 8 to be video taped but I did connect with a lot of artist like Shizzy Sixx, Passionate Mc, Jeff Turner, etc..

I'm working on getting a clip of Me on stage spitting some rhymes but for now I thought Id let you hear the verse I WOULD HAVE USED if Id have WON!

Peep game

[video=youtube;M0PN8ML3sAQ]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M0PN8ML3sAQ[/video]

Please let me know If i was good, okay or I need more practice.

 

[Sasori]

Good job..

 

[Ōkami]

The fact that you didn't win leads me to question their ability to spot actual talent.

 

[Sir Blades]

Nice, i personally dont like rap, but that was bearable.

 

[Magatsu Izanagi]

Pretty damn good.

Off the first listen, I can't really make any negative critique. The lyrics were there, rhymes were there, all in all it was legit.

The ONLY thing I can say firsthand is that flow was a bit awkward in some parts. It felt rushed. But other than those few instances, it was legit.

 

[itachi uchiha fiance]

Good job..........

 

[Desanto]

Pretty damn good.

Off the first listen, I can't really make any negative critique. The lyrics were there, rhymes were there, all in all it was legit.

The ONLY thing I can say firsthand is that flow was a bit awkward in some parts. It felt rushed. But other than those few instances, it was legit.

Thanks man, Yeah i felt the same... Some parts I rushed into my bars a little fast to where i sounded out of breathe or a little off beat.

and

Thanks for your positive comments. Sir Blades of Chaos...Ive seen you comment before about not liking rap so you're positive comment on this made my day !

Okami, You already know man... i feel the same way, i appreciate you!

Thanks yall.

If anyone else would like to drop some feedback, feel free.