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[NarutAwesome]

So Namikaze the Rapper and I teamed up on this track. Lemme know whatcha think .....just listen to it once and post some advice or thoughts. We worked pretty hard so it we would be grateful if you like the video
[video=youtube_share;i6E-jXbMmhw]http://youtu.be/i6E-jXbMmhw[/video]

 

[Lay]

Kk.ll do that

 

[0jordinio0]

It was decent enough I guess. But there are some pauses between lines that you should fix up. I recommend practicing more until the words flow easier from your mouth and find a better sound track, this one was pretty lazy/slowish in my opinion. You need a fast beat, and smoother, faster rapping.

 

[Desanto]

Bow Down to the Almighty Egyptian xD That part gave me the chills !

 

[Hexuze]

Quit spamming dude, it's already been posted.

 

[Desanto]

Quit spamming dude, it's already been posted.

Quit hating bro. Rap God was posted 4-5 times.

 

[Hexuze]

Quit hating bro. Rap God was posted 4-5 times.

Hating? Two wrongs don't make a right.

 

[Forest]

Quit spamming dude, it's already been posted.

gtfo p*ssy

 

[Hexuze]

gtfo p*ssy

Oh, I'm so scared.

 

[Punk Hazard]

Quit hating bro. Rap God was posted 4-5 times.

Yeah, but Rap God is Eminem. You're you.

 

[Desanto]

Yeah, but Rap God is Eminem. You're you.

What are you trying to say? Music is Music and that's all.

 

[NightKiing]

Nice song guys

 

[Oksus]

What are you trying to say? Music is Music and that's all.

Well some people are better and some are worse. I think that's what he is trying to say.

 

[Punk Hazard]

What are you trying to say? Music is Music and that's all.

I'm saying you can't use Eminem as an excuse for what you're doing because:

1. You're not on his level
2. You haven't earned what he has
3. You have no where near his hype

 

[Desanto]

Well some people are better and some are worse. I think that's what he is trying to say.

Okay lol obviously 2 rappers new to recording aren't gonna be at their greatest. You make no point, its like trying to compare a newborn cub to a bear but thanks for the advice lol

 

[Forest]

Okay lol obviously 2 rappers new to recording aren't gonna be at their greatest. You make no point, its like trying to compare a newborn cub to a bear but thanks for the advice lol

they are all fodder anyways Nami don't even stress it. They all can't rap on your level so who cares. Do you.

 

[Desanto]

they are all fodder anyways Nami don't even stress it. They all can't rap on your level so who cares. Do you.

Ill hit you up on FB about when i get home i gotta tell you somethin

 

[Forest]

EmInems new album was trash anyways lol

 

[Punk Hazard]

EmInems new album was trash anyways lol

How was it trash?