Check this out guys

[NarutAwesome]

Check out my new rap, its a freestyle to the lil wayne beat right above it. like, comment, and subscribe!!!!!...theres some mistakes but lemme know whatcha think

all i ask for is one listen and whatcha think so thanks

[video=youtube_share;G6OK3iN5_LA]http://youtu.be/G6OK3iN5_LA[/video]

 

[Desanto]

"not even a jedi but these rappers follow me by force" lol that shit got me rollin!
Its great for a freestyle, and the quality sounds crisp. As far as production there's not much i can critique except for maybe letting your producer know to bring the reverb down a lil, but thats just me going too far with it.
The lyrics are on point (for a freestyle) I know your actual writtens go way harder. Your voice sounds good, a lot of rappers worry about their own voices but you don't gotta trip about that, you sound more mature for your age. The metaphors and similes are there. Pretty solid and i cant wait to collab.

 

[-Akuma-]

Rikerslade solos

 

[NarutAwesome]

Rikerslade solos

that man is dope but solos is kinda far fetch don't you think lmao

 

[Desanto]

Rikerslade solos

Does rikerslade have any music i can peep out ?