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Well, here ya go guys, I hope ya like it, its a derrick rose video but listen to the song. The lyrics are attached to the video

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[video=youtube_share;n1ZncLkJmxs]http://youtu.be/n1ZncLkJmxs[/video]
ma haters having a hard time seeing me,well, its time to their glasses on
cuz I’m aint moving, I’m aint going, I’m standing right here, why, cuz right here is the only place I belong

uh, when I’m at my weakest, I’m still going on strong
yeah, cuz right here is the only place I belong
anywhere the mic is, is really ma home
yeah, cuz right here is the only place I belong
(Break)

I’m attacking like King Kong, breathing fire like Godzilla
zombies coming out the coffins, mj, but no thrilla
no HD, no filter, these rappers don’t get the picture,
when I look in the mirror, I always see a real nigga (ha)
finna make ma haters head turn like its an exorcism
broke rappers in , they all want me to fix ‘em
I went ham on this rap game, so hard I broke the system
even if I’m the prey, I turn predators into victims
you turned off the lights, doesn’t mean I won’t shine
yeah, I don’t see defeat, doesn’t mean that I’m blind
haters want me in jail, ha, didn’t know being real was a crime
I put ma clock to rest, thats how I kill ma time
like two dogs in cage, I’m finna tear up the place
I make *****es go ghost, so they leave without a trace
cuz I don’t need a pencil, to erase these niggas from history
so watch me dominate yo ass cause these haters aint shit to me

cuz right here, where I stand, is where I belong
can’t change it , so ma haters can leave me the **** alone
even when I’m weak, I’m still going on strong
yeah, cuz right here is the only place I belong

I'm in this *****, feel the vibe, this is where I belong
can’t change it, so ma haters can leave me the **** alone
no matter where I am, I still treat it like its ma home
yeah, cuz right here is the only place I belong

(break)
ma haters tryna talk shit, steady looking in the past
tryna see who I am, never had on a mask
but I don’t give a shit, thats why they still mad
cuz even when I’m broke you can’t step on me like glass (ha)

man I’m dropping cold shit , AC next to ma ass
**** with me you’ll find your face smashed against ma foot in the grass
get on ma level, like school - we’re in a different class
shitting on these rappers,yeah, so haters say I’m an ass
yeah, verse so ill I had to pause for a minute,
so sick right now I may have to go to a medical clinic
what I spit was contagious, these rappers wish they could catch it
but honestly, I love ma haters, naw I’m being sarcastic
raised by a pack wolfs, taught me to take no bullshit
so I eat rappers alive, thats on some cannibalist shit
king of this rap jungle thats on some real champion shit
too much gold on ma neck thats on some real olympian shit

chorus

if you were in my shoes,man u wouldn’t comprehend
how I can walk alone on this road, footprints in the sand
finna bang on ma chest, like I’m Tarzan
cuz ya’ll can’t put out this fire, yeah, I stay blazin’
(break)
uh, wish somebody would pat ma damn back, I’ll break their damn hand
only empathy I want from ya’ll is when I murder this pen
piss on niggas I don’t like, on haters you’ll smell urine
I'm the definition of a demon when pissed off to no end,
hope ya’ll fire proof cuz I’m finna unleash hell
burn to 3rd degree until it hit that barbecue smell
deliver ass whoopings and for da haters heres ya mail
baddest dog in the pack, cuz I am the alpha male
Cuz I'm finna derail, every train that go on my track
like the superbowl i’ll cut off ya lights so sit back n chillax
(Here's the deal)
yo ass a deer in ma headlights, these rappers are roadkill
Man I’m already not seeing you, cuz only real can see real
 
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I'm want you: Kind of stumbled - a bunch of words said fast to fit to the beat. "Yeah" and "Cuz" was repeated. Nice beat, but could have turn up the voice volume a little to match the volume of the beat. No hook. One chorus. This is something to vibe to at home, but not radio played.
 

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I'm want you: Kind of stumbled - a bunch of words said fast to fit to the beat. "Yeah" and "Cuz" was repeated. Nice beat, but could have turn up the voice volume a little to match the volume of the beat. No hook. One chorus. This is something to vibe to at home, but not radio played.
this. there's no hook and turn up the volume to match the beat
 

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I'm want you: Kind of stumbled - a bunch of words said fast to fit to the beat. "Yeah" and "Cuz" was repeated. Nice beat, but could have turn up the voice volume a little to match the volume of the beat. No hook. One chorus. This is something to vibe to at home, but not radio played.
I feel u on everything u just said bro, it was my first time so I was really nervous and putting things in where they weren't needed.......i also should have slowed down my flow and the volume wasn't high too. But its my first so as a beginner how would u rate it.
 

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I feel u on everything u just said bro, it was my first time so I was really nervous and putting things in where they weren't needed.......i also should have slowed down my flow and the volume wasn't high too. But its my first so as a beginner how would u rate it.
All understandable. I don't know much of what I was talking about anyway. I just know if it was played on the radio, I would turn. Apologies, but the truth. Can't really speak anyway, I don't like rap very much. You did alright for your first rap though. Keep it up and you would get better.
 

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I'm want you: Kind of stumbled - a bunch of words said fast to fit to the beat. "Yeah" and "Cuz" was repeated. Nice beat, but could have turn up the voice volume a little to match the volume of the beat. No hook. One chorus. This is something to vibe to at home, but not radio played.
I agree with him, but for your first time it was good. No one starts out perfect, keep at it.
 
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