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[NarutAwesome]

so i made a new lyric, it's more r&b you know.....how is it
I'm still working on it, it may not sound good yet, lol, but it's a try, how is it

Spoiler

Do you remember when
I would hug you so tight
and when you use to cry
I would tell you everything would be alright

Yeah, and do you remember when
I would look into your eyes
and the passion I saw in yours
matched the love you saw in mines

But now that love is gone
And I don’t know what to do
You said you needed some space
now my backs against the wall for you
you say you want me to leave
but now you’re begging me to stay
oh girl!!!!
It’s just that if I move on
I can easily be making a mistake!!!!!

So just don’t forget
those days when I held you so close
and just don’t forget
when I looked into your eyes and said I love you the most

cause I’m confused and don’t know what to do
but I can’t imagine my life without you

So just don’t forget
those nights you poured your heart out to me-eee
and just don’t forget
that anything you wanted I fulfilled those needs

So should I walk away or should I stay
the best for you is my wish
I’m confused and don’t know what to do
so I just hope you don’t forget

Do you remember when
we would stare at the sky
and we’ll look at the stars
wishing all our troubles goodbye

yeah, and do you remember when
every night I'll walk you home
and when we would walk so slow
just cause you didn’t like to be alone

But now that love is gone
And I don’t know what to do
You said you needed some space
now my backs against the wall for you
you say you want me to leave
now you’re begging me to stay
oh girl!!!
It’s just that if I move on girl
I can easily be making a mistake!!!!!

So just don’t forget
those days when I held you so close
and just don’t forget
when I looked into your eyes and said I love you the most

cause I’m confused and don’t know what to do
but I can’t imagine my life without you

So just don’t forget
those nights you poured your heart out to me-eee
and just don’t forget
that anything you wanted I fulfilled those needs

So should I walk away or should I stay
the best for you is my wish
I’m confused and don’t know what to do
so I just hope you don’t forget


yeah, cause you know that you- are- my world
and through thick and thin, I -will- stay with you girl
but either things gotta change...
or I gotta go...
cause if I walk out this door
it’ll be cause I can’t take this no more!!!!!

So just don’t forget
those days when I held you so close
and just don’t forget
when I looked into your eyes and said I love you the most

cause I’m confused and don’t know what to do
but I can’t imagine my life without you

So just don’t forget
those nights you poured your heart out to me-eee
and just don’t forget
that anything you wanted I fulfilled those needs

So should I walk away or should I stay
the best for you is my wish
I’m confused and don’t know what to do
so I just hope you don’t forget!!!!

 

[Legendary Broly]

Pretty good ^_^

 

[theRPGdude]

So
Much
Rhymes!!!!

 

[Kages]

It's good

 

[-Raviel-]

holy sh!t that was long i only read the first paragraph but it looked kinda good

 

[Codawg]

Pretty good. You left out anything about a cookie though v_v

 

[Megamkfan]

Day wait for it ummmmmm. That was legen wait for it dary!

 

[ThomasJeffersonwasasadist]

I'm not sure how to feel about you you got minato love but you like r&b

 

[ministerC4]

I wanna vomit on whatever those lyrics where written on.
Besides I swear those lyrics.are from.a song

 

[NarutAwesome]

I wanna vomit on whatever those lyrics where written on.
Besides I swear those lyrics.are from.a song

nope, bro I wrote this, I can take a pic of the writing and papers I wrote all over on.