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[NarutAwesome]

This is my new rap lyric video In the Zone featuring Namikaze the Rapper, just something we decided to put together, we're working on some more dope collabs soon too, check it out and lemme know whatcha think and if we could work on anything. All feed back is welcomed. It helps me better my craft. Comment, Like, and Subscribe!!!!

Currently I'm working on my mixtape, and I would like to thank everyone who previously helped me out and gave me an analysis of my work. It helped me in the long run a lot.

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[video=youtube_share;oRANsZHUAfg]http://youtu.be/oRANsZHUAfg[/video]

 

[UchihaMifune]

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I like it! If u want advice id say enunciate your words better, IMO they'll have more impact if you do that. Also I'd work on your delivery, trust me, for me my delivery is my most annoying block in rapping but I'm working on it as well. You got talent tho, good lyrics and hook, did u make the beat too?

Edit: SneaksNasa went innnn on this one! You're just as good lyrically but he had better delivery, not saying u were bad, that would be a downright lie, but just sharpen that up and I think you'd be good broo

 

[NarutAwesome]

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I like it! If u want advice id say enunciate your words better, IMO they'll have more impact if you do that. Also I'd work on your delivery, trust me, for me my delivery is my most annoying block in rapping but I'm working on it as well. You got talent tho, good lyrics and hook, did u make the beat too?

thanks for the advice, that definitely is on the list to work on and thanks for bringing it up, my delivery needs to get better since I like using metaphors a lot, and my flow/words, I tend to use more words then needed sometimes lol, all in all thanks broski, and I didnt make the beat though

Edit: Yeah SneaksNasa went innnn man, I'm working on my delivery but he killed it with his verse, he has a great flow thats easy to rock too

 

[UchihaMifune]

thanks for the advice, that definitely is on the list to work on and thanks for bringing it up, my delivery needs to get better since I like using metaphors a lot, and my flow/words, I tend to use more words then needed sometimes lol, all in all thanks broski, and I didnt make the beat though

No bro ur lyrics are on point, keep the metaphors and everything that shits tight, just try to enunciate words better is all I'm sayin. You gotta make it sound like ur not just reading off a paper, make the audience feel what you're saying.

And yeah,I wish I could make beats bro but I just download mine or get em from homies too

 

[NarutAwesome]

No bro ur lyrics are on point, keep the metaphors and everything that shits tight, just try to enunciate words better is all I'm sayin. You gotta make it sound like ur not just reading off a paper, make the audience feel what you're saying.

And yeah,I wish I could make beats bro but I just download mine or get em from homies too

oh yeah I get what you're saying man, and I wish I could make my beats too, lol i kinda do read my raps off the paper which I gotta fix, I was told if I memorize the verse it'll flow better which I'll try, all in all man, thats really helpful and thanks for the input, i gotta make the audience feel what I'm saying