Check this out for me guys

[NarutAwesome]

for those who didnt listen to it yet=D

Check out my new rap, its a freestyle to the lil wayne beat right above it. like, comment, and subscribe!!!!!...theres some mistakes but lemme know whatcha think

all i ask for is one listen and whatcha think so thanks

[video=youtube_share;G6OK3iN5_LA]http://youtu.be/G6OK3iN5_LA[/video]

 

[riley freeman]

Sounds good bro

 

[Joon]

You have no flow. It was times your lyrics were not flowing with the beat. Lyrics are alright, but needs work.

 

[Αizen]

I like it...

 

[NarutAwesome]

You have no flow. It was times your lyrics were not flowing with the beat. Lyrics are alright, but needs work.

yeah, thats why i did a free style so I can work on those things....but thanks bro...i'm still kinda new at recording but after i practice it'll get better

 

[riley freeman]

You have no flow. It was times your lyrics were not flowing with the beat. Lyrics are alright, but needs work.

Nigga shut the **** up, why are their always people that think every thing is bad in this world

 

[Joon]

yeah, thats why i did a free style so I can work on those things....but thanks bro...i'm still kinda new at recording but after i practice it'll get better

I see. Keep it up. It is awesome bro.

Nigga shut the **** up, why are their always people that think every thing is bad in this world

Um. Damn dude you seem angry. LMAO Bro, clam down and WTF. I am inputting my criticism. My friends record music all the time. I have some insight, but not enough to give advice. Just enough to atone to your mistakes so you can work on the them. I pay attention to detail when I want to.

 

[riley freeman]

yeah, thats why i did a free style so I can work on those things....but thanks bro...i'm still kinda new at recording but after i practice it'll get better

Don't encourage bro

 

[Pavoneo]

Nigga shut the **** up, why are their always people that think every thing is bad in this world

It's called criticism, not him trying to put OP down. Calm down.

 

[Headmaster]

Nigga shut the **** up, why are their always people that think every thing is bad in this world

+ rep XD
I loved it maybe not love but I liked it. ^_^

 

[The Sach]

I liked it, it was good one, if you ask me...=D=D

 

[cigi]

Lyrics alrite but I think a diff beat would have been better just my opinion

 

[riley freeman]

It's called criticism, not him trying to put OP down. Calm down.

Check the dictionary for the meaning of criticism

 

[Joon]

Check the dictionary for the meaning of criticism

Bro, you need criticism to approve your original work. You can choose to accept it or not accept it. Why the hate? You are making it more than what it is.

 

[riley freeman]

Bro, you need criticism to approve your original work. You can choose to accept it or not accept it. Why the hate? You are making it more than what it is.

Ma bad,I just felt like hating today

 

[Sir Blades]

Didnt like it

 

[Naijakid]

Man you really killed it...thumbs up