Characters in my manga im making called elemental beast monks

[KenZoku Akimoto]

THESE ARE MY FINALLY FINISHED CHARACTERS (ill be putting up the drawings for each character in a few days)
i just want your feed back on where om goin with theae characters in my manga

THE ELEMENTAL BEAST MONKS

**KenZoku**
Animal---- Kamodo dragon
Element--- Lava
Weapon--- Katana
Special Power--- Power Copy
Virtue--- Honor


**Bushidora**
Animal--- Elephant
Element--- Earth
Weapon--- War Hammer
Special Power--- Super Strength
Virtue--- Wisdom


**Fujitora**
Animal--- Shark
Element--- Water
Weapon--- Trident
Special Power --- Liquification
Virtue--- Integrity


**Gakushin**
Animal--- Bear
Element--- Forrest
Weapon--- Spear
Special Power--- Claw Retraction
Virtue--- Respect


**Hiroshin**
Animal--- Lion
Element--- Light
Weapon--- Staff
Special Power--- Force Fielder
Virtue--- Peace


**Oniyasha**
Animal--- Gorrilla
Element--- Fire
Weapon--- Nun chucks
Special Power--- Fear Inducement
Virtue--- Courage


**Raikoga**
Animal--- Tiger
Element--- Thunder
Weapon--- Claws
Special Power--- Super Speed
Virtue--- Ambition


**Jintaka**
Animal--- Hawk
Element--- Smoke
Weapon--- Tomahawk
Special Power--- Intangibility
Virtue--- Honesty


**Niikoto**
Animal--- Fox
Element--- Diamond
Weapon--- Shurinken
Special Power--- Touch Healer
Virtue--- Loyalty


**Takahiro**
Animal--- Horse
Element--- Wood
Weapon--- Tonfas
Special Power --- Super Senses
Virtue--- Knowledge


**Ichiryku**
Animal--- Crocodile
Element--- Plasma
Weapon--- Raiper
Special Power--- Teleknisis
Virtue--- Mercy


**Porunga**
Animal--- Snake
Element--- Poison
Weapon--- Kunai Chain
Special Power--- Stretch Body
Virtue--- Sincerity


**Mijiima**
Animal--- Eagle
Element--- Wind
Weapon--- Scythe
Special Power--- Wings Manifestation (Flight)
Virtue--- Freedom


**Shintaro**
Animal--- Scorpion
Element--- Sand
Weapon--- Naginata
Special Powers--- Illusions
Virtue--- Love


**Leihachi**
Animal--- Rhino
Element---- Steel
Weapon--- Axe
Special Power--- Armor manifestation
Virtue--- Friendship


**Zaikudo**
Animal--- Wolf
Element---- Snow
Weapon--- Machete
Special Power--- Duplication
Virtue--- Unity


**Yukioh**
Animal--- Spider
Element--- Shadow
Weapon--- Bow
Special Power--- Paralyze Touch
Virtue--- Forgiveness


**Akiyama**
Animal--- Ram
Element--- Clay
Weapon--- Mace
Special Power--- Regeneration
virtue--- Equality


**Daijuko**
Animal--- Coyote
Element--- Dust
Weapon--- Chain Sickle
Special Power--- Invisibility
Virtue--- Balance


**Uvogaia**
Animal--- Falcon
Element--- Ice
Weapon--- Falchion
Special Power--- Teleportation
Virtue--- Justice


WHAT DO YALL THINK AND DRAWINGS COMING SOON SO STAY TUNED PLEASE GIVE MW FEED back and give me ideas

 

[Sir Derp Troll]

Jintaka has Obito's power?

 

[Venomous Cobra]

Cool abilities bruh

 

[Darkdro]

Nice 5 Stars + Rep

 

[Ageha Jaeger]

Seems good. Good luck.

 

[Kirokill]

Komodo Dragon with a katana and can copy? Words cannot describe how good this is.

 

[Thetruekakashi]

That's cool. I'm writing my own manga you know. And one of my characters has the abilities to control all of the elements. I could help you come up with some names for their techniques. If you want.

 

[Ōkami]

Some of these virtues are just the same thing.

 

[KenZoku Akimoto]

These are teenage monks that can take beastly forms of thwir animal spirits and was traines in the art of their elements since birth ans they all have a tatoo on their chest of the virtue in japanese and they woll be from a temple similar to shaolin

 

[NSUNSR]

You're making your own Manga. Right?

 

[SuperChief]

That's cool. I'm writing my own manga you know. And one of my characters has the abilities to control all of the elements. I could help you come up with some names for their techniques. If you want.

So you're writing an Avatar/Naruto crossover using names that any seasoned anime and manga fan will recognise?

 

[GhostProject]

Really awesome dude

If I might say, some of the animal and their virtues seem curious. For example, the Snake has a virtue of sincerity? The scorpion has a virtue of love? Seems like these characters would make for villains based on their animal, and certainly the virtue seems off to me in that relation

Some of them are extremely well placed and an amazing base for a character on the other hand! The Eagle and Freedom will make a great character for example, and the Wolf and Unity is well suited (Makes for an excellent leader character in my opinion)

These are just my first impressions. Good luck to you man!

 

[Sea Of Thy Soul]

The abilities are ripoffs.

Don't really care though as long as the art is good.

 

[sandman20]

I can tell you put hardwork into making this. Can't wait for the drawings