Character story for my Story Main Villian DERVISH

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Dervish first starts of as a young optimistic teenager on hell who like his brother Ivan would love to take the throne. One night Dervish has a nightmare and for some reason, somehow his hand blackens which scares him (looks like ash) He goes to his father questioning what it is. His father proclaims it's his power starting to awaken. As the days pass, this power becomes more active and bit harder to control (Dervish damadging several things since his power turns stuff to ash). His personality also starts to change to this more determined/ cold character. In anger he kills his own trainer with his power and soon thinks taking the throne.

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This picture is of him in normal form, but his ability showing on the surface (side of his face)

His father has him killed and a ceremony is held in memory of Dervish (A lie is made) people including Ivan and his father watch Dervish's body burn in the ceremony fires as it turns to ash. Several days later mysterious attacks happen and it turns out Dervish's soul lives and is attacking people at night (using their ash fallen bodies to create his own body) He starts a civil war and kills his father, his apperance changing from normal to ash during fight.

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him in human ash form

After killing several people, karma takes effect as Dervish is losing control over his own power, losing his own physical apperance to this ash like appearance. Eventually he loses it completly and becomes a monster to those of hell. From using two swords in his normal humanoid form, Dervish in his ash form is totally reliant on his ash/ash clouds which attack defend. Pretty much indestructible, the more he kills the bigger and scarier he becomes

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It turns out in the end Dervish isn't at fault. His own power, his own ability was a consuming type and it pretty much consumed everything about it.

Pretty Much...
 

EnDash

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very very interesting i like it a lot. good job :win:

also your drawings are really amazing, it's always nice to see someone developing their own style rather then using generic manga or copy other manga artist's style.
 
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