Character Design/Painting

Marcuss

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nice work left hand needed a bit more work the right one was a bit better though
 

Yuka

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It looks Nice,
 

Beifong

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the design isn't bad and the coloring is good
 

Ashflura

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Okay you asked, critique time:):

To begin with the overall image has a nice tone, the colours radiated are warm and soft. The soft feel gives it that illusion of detail. Hair and face anatomy is pretty good, though you need practice on the body. The body seems to slouch awkwardly, the nape needs to be more defined, and the shoulders a littler higher. Try adding creases on the clothes whereever it bends, so on the shirt and shoulder area. The hands are a little weak and small, practice will make ya improve.:)
Overall though I do really think you're improving, keep it up and inshallah you'll improve.:)
 

yuzero

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thank you for taking time to give critique :)
really appreciate it
 
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