Character Concept Art

[Lightbringer]

What do you guys think of my characters? They're the protagonists of a story I've been writing.

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[Aoihime]

Second one looks great=D

 

[Ōkami]

Not bad but the name Balmung sounds silly.

 

[Lightbringer]

Not bad but the name Balmung sounds silly.

Well it's still up for changing, that's just something I quickly came up with. It's from Nordic Legend.

 

[Joker]

Not bad, but I feel like the outfits are too flashy and a bit extra. How far along is the story?

 

[Lightbringer]

Not bad, but I feel like the outfits are too flashy and a bit extra. How far along is the story?

Well I've been writing the story for almost 10 years and I've been improving it ever since. It has five parts to it and the general plot is finished. I just have to work on the smaller details and such.

But I'm actually hoping to make this into a videogame series, so the outfits in 3D would fit I think. Besides, my goal was to make the coolest looking characters possible, although I know such a thing is subjective. At least they are in my eyes haha

 

[Ldude]

The frame of the characters are just flips of each other though.

 

[UNDFTD]

Well I've been writing the story for almost 10 years and I've been improving it ever since. It has five parts to it and the general plot is finished. I just have to work on the smaller details and such.

But I'm actually hoping to make this into a videogame series, so the outfits in 3D would fit I think. Besides, my goal was to make the coolest looking characters possible, although I know such a thing is subjective. At least they are in my eyes haha

10 Years? You must shoot me a VM when you are ready to release it. Anyhow, back to the topic. I feel like the characters lack colour scheme and identity. It seems like they are just plastic models. The drawings are great but that's how I feel, unless they are references. If you really want to make this professional, and start as a novel or a book which could transfer into a Video Game.

In order to do this, you need to hire some people, for money of course, to do the cover of the novel/book, references for the characters, general art and all of that stuff. I can suggest some people you could go to if you need people to draw stuff for you.

 

[Lightbringer]

10 Years? You must shoot me a VM when you are ready to release it. Anyhow, back to the topic. I feel like the characters lack colour scheme and identity. It seems like they are just plastic models. The drawings are great but that's how I feel, unless they are references. If you really want to make this professional, and start as a novel or a book which could transfer into a Video Game.

In order to do this, you need to hire some people, for money of course, to do the cover of the novel/book, references for the characters, general art and all of that stuff. I can suggest some people you could go to if you need people to draw stuff for you.

Well this isn't the final design. My ideal scenario is that when I get a job at the industry and feel ready to make this game, I'll have concept artists revise these drawings and see which adaptation works best in the end.

 

[DeDoll]

They look good.
I think you should add some emotions. They look so dead.

But i like Balmung very much he is like from game of thrones "Night's Watch"