[Predictions] Chapter 671

Was it a good try?

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  • Yes but still needs lot of improvement

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Sirius Black

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Naruto: :erm:What inside me..........

Hagoromo: Yes As i said their Chakra travelled through times and generations...

Naruto: I don't get it!Why me? Who am I?

Hagoromo: Stop Interrupting me....... Where was I?

Naruto: You were saying something about Chakra..... Travel....... Time

Hagoromo: Yes, Their chakra went from generations to generations and finally setteled inside ones they found suitable.

Naruto: So they are not both inside me?

Hagoromo: No, Indra's hatred is not inside of you and......

Naruto: So,that means Big brother will have to be in someone with sharingan....

Hagoromo: i didn't expect to hear that from you But yes He....

Naruto: Old man could you Hurry it up I have to go to war,My friends are.....

Hagoromo: Will you stop interrupting me Anyway there is not much you can do at this time.

Naruto: What you mean by that?I cannot do much at this time.

Hagoromo: Do you really believe you are any match for Madara?

Naruto: But still, I have to.....

Hagoromo: Just sit and listen to me, Your friends are doing just fine........

Naruto: Eh?

panel shows guy fighting madara he is backed up by Minato,Kakashi,Lee,Gara.
Madara is taking serious shots but still avoiding major damage


Naruto: All right i guess I'll just have to listen to you?

Hagoromo: Good, Now let's...........

Naruto:Hey Didn't you say you had a brother?

Hagoromo: Yes, his name was............


Panel Ends With Who was Sage's Brother?


I know it's not very good but still it's my first try So please just read and Along side saying it's bad and worst Please give your suggestions as well
 

Goetia

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Its good, a little short, but I can tell you will make great future predictions if you keep trying.
 

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great job, looking forward to the next one longer please.
 
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