Chapter 664 Prediction (half serious)

Maito Gai

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Chapter starts with Madara ariving in front of Kakashi and Minato.



Madara: Hello again Obito, your purpose is now fulfilled, i'l be taking my eye back now, and sending you to Rin.



Obito:?!?


Kakashi: I'm sorry obito *uses Kamui to decapitate obito/black zetsu, trapping they're head in the kamui dimension and , the rinnegan with it. (a single tear falls from his right eye, and a tear of blood from his sharingan)


Madara:?! A foolish move kakashi, having the only access to the kamui world you've sealed your fate, i'l be taking that eye and your life!!.



Kakashi: not if i can help it! *thrusts a kunai towards his eye*



Madara: Not so fast! *Chibaku Tensei*



Kakashi: Shit!!! *flies towards madara and is about to be impaled with a black rod when Minato suddenly appears in front of kakashi with a Giant rasengan*



Minato: Rasengan!!



Madara: A smart move placing your seal on kakashi's back before his attack *blocks rasengan with black orb and laughs* But these eyes miss nothing! i sensed your chakra in kakashi just before he launched his attack the element of surprise was lost! now sit still! *pushes black rod through the top of his skull through his chin and into the ground* STAY.


Kakashi: Sensei?



Madara: *Laughs* with this your will of fire is extinguished Hashirama! Now begins the will of The uchiha. This seems a fitting technique to finish the tale of your pitiful existence. * gathers lighting chakra in his right hand* Chidori was it? a pitiful jutsu perfect for a failure like you. Die now! *Pierce's Kakashi's heart and takes his sharingan* and this is for stealing this uchiha eye in the first place! one so unworhty! *tears out his other eye*



Kakashi: *spits out blood and lets out a scream heard far and wide*



Madara: *graps his head and with a sickening crunch twists kakashi's head all the way around with his eyelids open revealing pits of darkness*



Minato: I is this my legacy? The legacy of the will of fire?



Madara: With this my victory is complete.. * a chain comes forth and takes the half of the kyuubi and using a black orb crushes minato's head incapacitating him for good* (implants Kakashis eye and travels to the kamui dimension to retrieve his eye)


Sakura Gaara and Naruto arrive with sakura and garaa seeing and realizing all hope is lost



Sakura: Sensei No NOOOOO! *Screams till her voice breaks*



Gaara: *Sees minato dead with kyuubi gone* So this is it? this is how our world ends?



Madara: *Appears behind sakura without them noticing, both rinnegans now in place*



Gaara: Sakura behind yo..! *interupted as madara takes her soul using the rinnegan soul absorbing technique*



Madara: *Laughs wildly and shows Gaara his rape face*



Gaara: *Trembles and falls to his knees* I Is this it?



Madara: Indeed it is *Forms handseal and the god tree opens and activates* Only 5 minutes now till this world of pain ends! *Laughs wildly and sits down into the full lotus position and closes his eyes* Flee now, brat of the sand! run wherever you may in 5 minutes you will be mine as will everyone else! my work is done. *grins and remains seated*



Gaara: *looks into distance and see's a fruit appear on the god tree!* *thinks to himself come naruto its not over just yet! wraps naruto's corpse with his sand and heads towards the fruit of the tree* I hope this works....



Next chapter, infinite tsukoyomi activates, A new hope arises.

P.S Way too dark for naruto i know but i only wrote it for fun lol :)
 

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Its perfect!!!! Omg! Lord Madara!!!!
 

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Well, like you said very dark, but it wasn't bad. Great Work
 

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then all of a sudden. hagoromo appears and kicks madara off the tree and sits in the bloom

rikudo: hahahahahahaha! my plan worked! now to usher into a new world where i will be the ruler i was born to be!

sa: OoO! The Sage is evil?!

rikudo: f yeah i am evil! did you believe i was this good guy with such power to create the moon on my deathbed?!

Next chapter, An ancient evil has emerged! infinite tsukoyomi activates,

naruto will be on break because of sakura's death
 

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then all of a sudden. hagoromo appears and kicks madara off the tree and sits in the bloom

rikudo: hahahahahahaha! my plan worked! now to usher into a new world where i will be the ruler i was born to be!

sa: OoO! The Sage is evil?!


rikudo: f yeah i am evil! did you believe i was this good guy with such power to create the moon on my deathbed?!

Next chapter, An ancient evil has emerged! infinite tsukoyomi activates,

naruto will be on break because of sakura's death

i was considering adding the sage and or one of his sons! :p

I was actually going to have madara win with NO hope at all for the SA but i thought the god tree was a nice touch to give naruto some hope of revival, i shortened my options when i shortened minato of his head ;)
 
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