The sceene starts with Naruto falling after having Kurama extracted from him.
Gaara catches Naruto with a sand hand. He then lays Naruto down gently. Tsunade and Sakura rush over to heal Naruto.
Both have tears on their face.
Tsunade: It 's not going to be that easy Sakura. Put everything you have into it.
Sakura: Yes.
Gaara is also seen crying. Madara is seen laughing as the SA are stunned by what they have seen. The one they are fighting this war for has just fallen.
Shikamaru: Everyone dry your tears. The two over there are trying their best to save him. He would want us to not seem down. I care for Naruto as much as the rest of you but, this is no time for tears.
While saying this Shikamaru was crying himself.
Shikamaru: He can't die. I've already made the decision to be his adviser when he becomes Hokage. I want that dream of his to become reallity. So Hokage-sama and Sakura do your best as for the rest of us attack Madara with all you have.
The SA charge at Madara.
Scene switches
Naruto is seen walking through a forest. The wind is blowing the trees gently. Naruto begins to look around and notices that he has been in this forest before. He attempts to remember when he hears a voice he hasn't heard in a while.
jiraiya: Ah. So you you here to visit me are ya? Remember this is one of the places we trained those three years away from the village.
Naruto begins to cry a river.
Naruto: ero-sennin. I tried my best to fight for your will. I've failed you and the world.
jiraiya: (laughs). Naruto you idiot do you really think your going to die so young. I bet their doing everything in their power to get you back. I actually don't even know why you're here now. This is only a situation for someone who's truly dead.
?????: Maybe you were destined to meet again before it is truly Naruto's time.
Naruto looks away from jiraiya to see that Conan was there with them. As was Nagato and Yahiko.
Yahiko: We havent truly met have we Naruto? My name is Yahiko. The real Yahiko. I've been sitting with these guys listening to their stories about what happen after I died. The most interesting part was you. Thank you for saving my comrades from going any further down the path of revenge and hatred.
Naruto: I just wanted to follow in ero-sennins footsteps.
There are white lights all around Naruto now. Everyone is wondering what is going on. Naruto thought hed was back at the war grounds but, he wasn't. There was nothing but white light all around him.
The scene switches to Kakashi, Minato, and Obito. Obito is fighting for control of his body.
Obito: Kakashi, Minito-sensei. I've cause so much harm to this world. The most to you sensei. I've killed you and your wife. I've attempted to kill your son.
Black Zetsu: Shut up you fool.
Black Zetsu pulls out Obito's eye.
End
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Gaara catches Naruto with a sand hand. He then lays Naruto down gently. Tsunade and Sakura rush over to heal Naruto.
Both have tears on their face.
Tsunade: It 's not going to be that easy Sakura. Put everything you have into it.
Sakura: Yes.
Gaara is also seen crying. Madara is seen laughing as the SA are stunned by what they have seen. The one they are fighting this war for has just fallen.
Shikamaru: Everyone dry your tears. The two over there are trying their best to save him. He would want us to not seem down. I care for Naruto as much as the rest of you but, this is no time for tears.
While saying this Shikamaru was crying himself.
Shikamaru: He can't die. I've already made the decision to be his adviser when he becomes Hokage. I want that dream of his to become reallity. So Hokage-sama and Sakura do your best as for the rest of us attack Madara with all you have.
The SA charge at Madara.
Scene switches
Naruto is seen walking through a forest. The wind is blowing the trees gently. Naruto begins to look around and notices that he has been in this forest before. He attempts to remember when he hears a voice he hasn't heard in a while.
jiraiya: Ah. So you you here to visit me are ya? Remember this is one of the places we trained those three years away from the village.
Naruto begins to cry a river.
Naruto: ero-sennin. I tried my best to fight for your will. I've failed you and the world.
jiraiya: (laughs). Naruto you idiot do you really think your going to die so young. I bet their doing everything in their power to get you back. I actually don't even know why you're here now. This is only a situation for someone who's truly dead.
?????: Maybe you were destined to meet again before it is truly Naruto's time.
Naruto looks away from jiraiya to see that Conan was there with them. As was Nagato and Yahiko.
Yahiko: We havent truly met have we Naruto? My name is Yahiko. The real Yahiko. I've been sitting with these guys listening to their stories about what happen after I died. The most interesting part was you. Thank you for saving my comrades from going any further down the path of revenge and hatred.
Naruto: I just wanted to follow in ero-sennins footsteps.
There are white lights all around Naruto now. Everyone is wondering what is going on. Naruto thought hed was back at the war grounds but, he wasn't. There was nothing but white light all around him.
The scene switches to Kakashi, Minato, and Obito. Obito is fighting for control of his body.
Obito: Kakashi, Minito-sensei. I've cause so much harm to this world. The most to you sensei. I've killed you and your wife. I've attempted to kill your son.
Black Zetsu: Shut up you fool.
Black Zetsu pulls out Obito's eye.
End
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