[Predictions] Chapter 632: Nostalgia

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Thought I'd give it a go, soooooo here you go.

*Scene shows Naruto standing with Sakura and Sasuke. They crouch down a little, ready to fight*

Naruto: Let's help my father and the other Hokages!

Sasuke: .....

Sakura: *Nods*

*The threee leap off the oulder they stood on and fly down to where Tobirama, Hiruzen, and Minato are standing, their hands folded in the 4 Suns seal. Hashirama stands a bit off to the side himself*

Hiruzen: I think we've managed to hold him down!

Hashirama: ........!!

*The Juubi, inside the 4 Sun Seal, begains to shift around, struggling to break out of the Myoujinmon. It's arms begin to push upwards on the gate and the gate cracks*

Hashirama: ...... (The Myoujinmon.... it cracked! So quickly too! I was able to hold down the Kyuubi with this for a long time, but the Juubi...it's so powerful... Is this what the Sage went up against...?!)

*The others notice the crack on the gates of the Myoujinmon and become unsettled.*

Tobirama: Brother! We need to act, NOW!

Hashirama: We need to strike him down while it's still being held down in the Myoujinmon! A powerful strike, but the four of us can't leave. If we don't stay focused, the Juubi will break the 4 Suns!

Naruto: Leave it to us!

*Minato turns and looks at Naruto*

Minato: ....Naruto...

Naruto: Trust me...Dad... I can do this...

*Minato stares at Naruto, his visage easing up before a smile forms on his face.*

Minato: *Nods* Hm

Naruto: Let's go guys! We need to strike as one.

Sasuke: .....

Sakura: I just need a bit more time before I can unleash my power. I'll do what I can while I charge.

Naruto: (Kurama, you ready?)

Kurama: Yeah! I'm all charged up. Let's strike the Juubi with full force!

*Naruto concentrates for a second before he goes into Bijuu Mode.*

Sasuke: .......!

*Sasuke manages to keep his compsure under wraps, but stares at Naruto, then at Minato, then back to Naruto, in a mix of emotions for anger, and amazement.*

Sasuke: *Looks at the Juubi, who's trying to break out, and then stares towards the sky.* .....We'll strike from the top.

*Naruto nods and Team 7 leap towards the Bijuu, Sakura staying behind, still charging her chakra. Naruto dashes forward at incredible speed and leaps upwards. He's in the air as he speaks with Kurama.*

Naruto: (Kurama, is it safe to do a Bijuudama from up here?)

Kurama: At the distance we're at, I don't think so. Others may get hurt. On top of that, we need to hit the Juubi hard, but precise as well. The Bijuudama is extremely powerful, but there's a chance of destroying the barriers on his arms and legs.

Naruto: (Then we'll charge up a Massaive Rasengan, full force!)

*Naruto forms a Rasengan, the blue chakra turning a bright red from Kurama's chakra. Minato notices Naruto's plan and calls out to the other Hokages.*

Minato: Wait until the last moment to let Naruto into the Seal from the top! If it works, the Juubi will be knocked down and won't be able to break the Myoujinmon or the 4 Suns!

*The 4 Hokages easen up their hands and the 4 Suns Seal opens slowly from the top, Naruto inches from slamming onto the roof of the seal. He soars down into the box, tearing through the wind. He aims his palm at the spine of the Juubi before he slams into it. Sakura and Sasuke following behind with a high powered chidori, and Sakura with a chakra controlled punch, trying her best to manage to use as little chakra needed to save the rest for her upcoming technique.*

*The Juubi roars in pain as it falls down. It's struggle against the gates of the Myoujinmon ending. Smoke fills the cube. No one is able to see anything. As the smoke clears up, everyone is in shock to see one of the Juubi's arm is free. The free arm lashes upwards, towards Sakura and Naruto*

Shikamaru: It broke one arm loose! It's gonna hit them!

*Just as the arm is nearing Sakura and Naruto, black flames erupt from the air and engulf the arm of the Juubi in an inferno.*

Sasuke: Amaterasu!

*The arm falls down, the Juubi now in pain, frantically trying to get rid of the black flames. It's panic even higher now, it breaks through the Myoujinmon and begins to slam around the 4 Suns.*

Tobirama: !!! It's breaking the 4 Suns! How is this possible?!

*The 4 Suns shatters, slowly fading as the Juubi is englufed in black flames. Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke land down away from the Juubi. As the Juubi roars, a mighty voice booms through the screams*

Madara: SHINRA TENSEI!

*Madara throws his arm up, a force like no other erupts from his radius in a sphere and forces the eternal back flames to wash away from the Juubi. The black flames fade away, but a few fall towards the Alliance.*

Ninja: The black flames!

*Sasuke turns around and sucks the flames away while everyone stares in awe. Madara sees the black flames and instantly knows another Uchiha is on the battlefield. He sees the back of Sasuke and his eyes slowly widen.*

Madara: *Whispering to himself* ....Iz..Izuna...?!

*Madara is brought back to his senses when he feels Hashirama's gaze on him. He turns and looks down towards him.*

Madara: .....What's wrong? Did you really think I'd stand here and let you come in the middle of the Juubi's rampage?

Hashirama: I said I'd deal with the beast first!

Madara: Hmph..... *He unfolds his arms and a sick smirk forms on his face.* You should be more concerned about me, not the Juubi.

*A twisted chuckle escapes his lips as the Alliance tenses up. Now closer than before, Hashirama sees Madara's Rinnegan and tenses up.*


*The scene changes to a dry war field with a few bodies lying on the floor in the distant*


Suigetsu: ....So..what're we doing here?

*Suigetsu follows Orochimaru and Karin as the two walk silently.*

Orochimaru: .....The Five Kage are here. Their chakras are almost unreadable. They're dying...

*Suigetsu's eyes gaze off in the distant as he thinks about what is currently going on where the Hokages and Sasuke went.*

Karin: There they are!

*Karin and Suigetsu stop a few feet from 5 bodies lying on the floor. He notices Tsunade's snail working on many of them, but can't see Tsunade. He walks forward, alerting Katsuyu. She looks up and freezes at the site of the man she knows is Orochimaru. Confused and scared, she does nothing. Orochimaru walks forward and notices Tsunade's legs underneath a giant tree. He stops as he stares at the giant trunk. He looks at Katsuyu and continues.*

*The Mizukage, Tsuchikage, Raikage, and Kazekage are awake, but are unable to move. They see Orochimaru walk past them, but can't find the strength to make sense of what was going on.*

*Orochimaru walks to the other side of the tree and sees Tsunade, barely hanging onto her life. Tsunade's awake, but says nothing. The two old friends stare into each others' eyes before Orochimaru lifts his hand up and motions for Karin to walk over to him.*


*Scene switches to the Kamui Dimension*


*Kakashi is charging at Obito, his words still ringing in Obito's ears. The two engage in Taijutsu. They meet in a griplock and Obito speaks.*

Obito: Even with my eye you're still blind to reality, Kakashi!

*Before Kakashi speaks back, Obito pushes him back and stares off into the distance.*

Obito: ....The Juubi.... It's....

*He looks towards Kakashi, his eyes glowing in the dark lit dimension. Kakashi dashes forwards, but is met with a reverse Kamui back to the real world. Kakashi falls near the Hokages and Obito gingerly lands ontop of the boulder Madara stood on. Hashirama, Tobirama, and Hiruzen's eyes widen when they see Obito's Rinnegan and Sharingan, but Minato stares at Obito's face.*

Minato: ....Ob..Obito.....?

*Minato looks at Kakashi who is gingerly getting up. Kakashi sense's Minato's chakra, but does not look at his sensei, too afraid to meet his eyes.*

*The panel is two pages wide and it's a split image of the Hokages along with Sasuke, Sakura and Naruto, stnding together with the Alliance behind them, staring at Madara and Obito with the Juubi, while the other half is Orochimaru staring at Tsunade.*

An unsettling sense of nostalgia falls upon the warfield. Naruto 632: END
 
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It was a bit too long.
I think that there will be more talking.
AND ! I think that the Sharingan techs won't work on the Juubi...But that's just me.
Overall a good try.
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Thought I'd give it a go, soooooo here you go.

*Scene shows Naruto standing with Sakura and Sasuke. They crouch down a little, ready to fight*

Naruto: Let's help my father and the other Hokages!

Sasuke: .....

Sakura: *Nods*

*The threee leap off the oulder they stood on and fly down to where Tobirama, Hiruzen, and Minato are standing, their hands folded in the 4 Suns seal. Hashirama stands a bit off to the side himself*

Hiruzen: I think we've managed to hold him down!

Hashirama: ........!!

*The Juubi, inside the 4 Sun Seal, begains to shift around, struggling to break out of the Myoujinmon. It's arms begin to push upwards on the gate and the gate cracks*

Hashirama: ...... (The Myoujinmon.... it cracked! So quickly too! I was able to hold down the Kyuubi with this for a long time, but the Juubi...it's so powerful... Is this what the Sage went up against...?!)

*The others notice the crack on the gates of the Myoujinmon and become unsettled.*

Tobirama: Brother! We need to act, NOW!

Hashirama: We need to strike him down while it's still being held down in the Myoujinmon! A powerful strike, but the four of us can't leave. If we don't stay focused, the Juubi will break the 4 Suns!

Naruto: Leave it to us!

*Minato turns and looks at Naruto*

Minato: ....Naruto...

Naruto: Trust me...Dad... I can do this...

*Minato stares at Naruto, his visage easing up before a smile forms on his face.*

Minato: *Nods* Hm

Naruto: Let's go guys! We need to strike as one.

Sasuke: .....

Sakura: I just need a bit more time before I can unleash my power. I'll do what I can while I charge.

Naruto: (Kurama, you ready?)

Kurama: Yeah! I'm all charged up. Let's strike the Juubi with full force!

*Naruto concentrates for a second before he goes into Bijuu Mode.*

Sasuke: .......!

*Sasuke manages to keep his compsure under wraps, but stares at Naruto, then at Minato, then back to Naruto, in a mix of emotions for anger, and amazement.*

Sasuke: *Looks at the Juubi, who's trying to break out, and then stares towards the sky.* .....We'll strike from the top.

*Naruto nods and Team 7 leap towards the Bijuu, Sakura staying behind, still charging her chakra. Naruto dashes forward at incredible speed and leaps upwards. He's in the air as he speaks with Kurama.*

Naruto: (Kurama, is it safe to do a Bijuudama from up here?)

Kurama: At the distance we're at, I don't think so. Others may get hurt. On top of that, we need to hit the Juubi hard, but precise as well. The Bijuudama is extremely powerful, but there's a chance of destroying the barriers on his arms and legs.

Naruto: (Then we'll charge up a Massaive Rasengan, full force!)

*Naruto forms a Rasengan, the blue chakra turning a bright red from Kurama's chakra. Minato notices Naruto's plan and calls out to the other Hokages.*

Minato: Wait until the last moment to let Naruto into the Seal from the top! If it works, the Juubi will be knocked down and won't be able to break the Myoujinmon or the 4 Suns!

*The 4 Hokages easen up their hands and the 4 Suns Seal opens slowly from the top, Naruto inches from slamming onto the roof of the seal. He soars down into the box, tearing through the wind. He aims his palm at the spine of the Juubi before he slams into it. Sakura and Sasuke following behind with a high powered chidori, and Sakura with a chakra controlled punch, trying her best to manage to use as little chakra needed to save the rest for her upcoming technique.*

*The Juubi roars in pain as it falls down. It's struggle against the gates of the Myoujinmon ending. Smoke fills the cube. No one is able to see anything. As the smoke clears up, everyone is in shock to see one of the Juubi's arm is free. The free arm lashes upwards, towards Sakura and Naruto*

Shikamaru: It broke one arm loose! It's gonna hit them!

*Just as the arm is nearing Sakura and Naruto, black flames erupt from the air and engulf the arm of the Juubi in an inferno.*

Sasuke: Amaterasu!

*The arm falls down, the Juubi now in pain, frantically trying to get rid of the black flames. It's panic even higher now, it breaks through the Myoujinmon and begins to slam around the 4 Suns.*

Tobirama: !!! It's breaking the 4 Suns! How is this possible?!

*The 4 Suns shatters, slowly fading as the Juubi is englufed in black flames. Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke land down away from the Juubi. As the Juubi roars, a mighty voice booms through the screams*

Madara: SHINRA TENSEI!

*Madara throws his arm up, a force like no other erupts from his radius in a sphere and forces the eternal back flames to wash away from the Juubi. The black flames fade away, but a few fall towards the Alliance.*

Ninja: The black flames!

*Sasuke turns around and sucks the flames away while everyone stares in awe. Madara sees the black flames and instantly knows another Uchiha is on the battlefield. He sees the back of Sasuke and his eyes slowly widen.*

Madara: *Whispering to himself* ....Iz..Izuna...?!

*Madara is brought back to his senses when he feels Hashirama's gaze on him. He turns and looks down towards him.*

Madara: .....What's wrong? Did you really think I'd stand here and let you come in the middle of the Juubi's rampage?

Hashirama: I said I'd deal with the beast first!

Madara: Hmph..... *He unfolds his arms and a sick smirk forms on his face.* You should be more concerned about me, not the Juubi.

*A twisted chuckle escapes his lips as the Alliance tenses up. Now closer than before, Hashirama sees Madara's Rinnegan and tenses up.*


*The scene changes to a dry war field with a few bodies lying on the floor in the distant*


Suigetsu: ....So..what're we doing here?

*Suigetsu follows Orochimaru and Karin as the two walk silently.*

Orochimaru: .....The Five Kage are here. Their chakras are almost unreadable. They're dying...

*Suigetsu's eyes gaze off in the distant as he thinks about what is currently going on where the Hokages and Sasuke went.*

Karin: There they are!

*Karin and Suigetsu stop a few feet from 5 bodies lying on the floor. He notices Tsunade's snail working on many of them, but can't see Tsunade. He walks forward, alerting Katsuyu. She looks up and freezes at the site of the man she knows is Orochimaru. Confused and scared, she does nothing. Orochimaru walks forward and notices Tsunade's legs underneath a giant tree. He stops as he stares at the giant trunk. He looks at Katsuyu and continues.*

*The Mizukage, Tsuchikage, Raikage, and Kazekage are awake, but are unable to move. They see Orochimaru walk past them, but can't find the strength to make sense of what was going on.*

*Orochimaru walks to the other side of the tree and sees Tsunade, barely hanging onto her life. Tsunade's awake, but says nothing. The two old friends stare into each others' eyes before Orochimaru lifts his hand up and motions for Karin to walk over to him.*


*Scene switches to the Kamui Dimension*


*Kakashi is charging at Obito, his words still ringing in Obito's ears. The two engage in Taijutsu. They meet in a griplock and Obito speaks.*

Obito: Even with my eye you're still blind to reality, Kakashi!

*Before Kakashi speaks back, Obito pushes him back and stares off into the distance.*

Obito: ....The Juubi.... It's....

*He looks towards Kakashi, his eyes glowing in the dark lit dimension. Kakashi dashes forwards, but is met with a reverse Kamui back to the real world. Kakashi falls near the Hokages and Obito gingerly lands ontop of the boulder Madara stood on. Hashirama, Tobirama, and Hiruzen's eyes widen when they see Obito's Rinnegan and Sharingan, but Minato stares at Obito's face.*

Minato: ....Ob..Obito.....?

*Minato looks at Kakashi who is gingerly getting up. Kakashi sense's Minato's chakra, but does not look at his sensei, too afraid to meet his eyes.*

*The panel is two pages wide and it's a split image of the Hokages along with Sasuke, Sakura and Naruto, stnding together with teh Alliance behind them, staring at Madara and Obit with the Juubi, while the other half is Orochimaru staring at Tsunade.*

An unsettling sense of nostalgia falls upon the warfield. Naruto 632: END
Wauw.. Good job dude xD much better than mine xD! Thanks + rep for you mate:)
 

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Thought I'd give it a go, soooooo here you go.

*Scene shows Naruto standing with Sakura and Sasuke. They crouch down a little, ready to fight*

Naruto: Let's help my father and the other Hokages!

Sasuke: .....

Sakura: *Nods*

*The threee leap off the oulder they stood on and fly down to where Tobirama, Hiruzen, and Minato are standing, their hands folded in the 4 Suns seal. Hashirama stands a bit off to the side himself*

Hiruzen: I think we've managed to hold him down!

Hashirama: ........!!

*The Juubi, inside the 4 Sun Seal, begains to shift around, struggling to break out of the Myoujinmon. It's arms begin to push upwards on the gate and the gate cracks*

Hashirama: ...... (The Myoujinmon.... it cracked! So quickly too! I was able to hold down the Kyuubi with this for a long time, but the Juubi...it's so powerful... Is this what the Sage went up against...?!)

*The others notice the crack on the gates of the Myoujinmon and become unsettled.*

Tobirama: Brother! We need to act, NOW!

Hashirama: We need to strike him down while it's still being held down in the Myoujinmon! A powerful strike, but the four of us can't leave. If we don't stay focused, the Juubi will break the 4 Suns!

Naruto: Leave it to us!

*Minato turns and looks at Naruto*

Minato: ....Naruto...

Naruto: Trust me...Dad... I can do this...

*Minato stares at Naruto, his visage easing up before a smile forms on his face.*

Minato: *Nods* Hm

Naruto: Let's go guys! We need to strike as one.

Sasuke: .....

Sakura: I just need a bit more time before I can unleash my power. I'll do what I can while I charge.

Naruto: (Kurama, you ready?)

Kurama: Yeah! I'm all charged up. Let's strike the Juubi with full force!

*Naruto concentrates for a second before he goes into Bijuu Mode.*

Sasuke: .......!

*Sasuke manages to keep his compsure under wraps, but stares at Naruto, then at Minato, then back to Naruto, in a mix of emotions for anger, and amazement.*

Sasuke: *Looks at the Juubi, who's trying to break out, and then stares towards the sky.* .....We'll strike from the top.

*Naruto nods and Team 7 leap towards the Bijuu, Sakura staying behind, still charging her chakra. Naruto dashes forward at incredible speed and leaps upwards. He's in the air as he speaks with Kurama.*

Naruto: (Kurama, is it safe to do a Bijuudama from up here?)

Kurama: At the distance we're at, I don't think so. Others may get hurt. On top of that, we need to hit the Juubi hard, but precise as well. The Bijuudama is extremely powerful, but there's a chance of destroying the barriers on his arms and legs.

Naruto: (Then we'll charge up a Massaive Rasengan, full force!)

*Naruto forms a Rasengan, the blue chakra turning a bright red from Kurama's chakra. Minato notices Naruto's plan and calls out to the other Hokages.*

Minato: Wait until the last moment to let Naruto into the Seal from the top! If it works, the Juubi will be knocked down and won't be able to break the Myoujinmon or the 4 Suns!

*The 4 Hokages easen up their hands and the 4 Suns Seal opens slowly from the top, Naruto inches from slamming onto the roof of the seal. He soars down into the box, tearing through the wind. He aims his palm at the spine of the Juubi before he slams into it. Sakura and Sasuke following behind with a high powered chidori, and Sakura with a chakra controlled punch, trying her best to manage to use as little chakra needed to save the rest for her upcoming technique.*

*The Juubi roars in pain as it falls down. It's struggle against the gates of the Myoujinmon ending. Smoke fills the cube. No one is able to see anything. As the smoke clears up, everyone is in shock to see one of the Juubi's arm is free. The free arm lashes upwards, towards Sakura and Naruto*

Shikamaru: It broke one arm loose! It's gonna hit them!

*Just as the arm is nearing Sakura and Naruto, black flames erupt from the air and engulf the arm of the Juubi in an inferno.*

Sasuke: Amaterasu!

*The arm falls down, the Juubi now in pain, frantically trying to get rid of the black flames. It's panic even higher now, it breaks through the Myoujinmon and begins to slam around the 4 Suns.*

Tobirama: !!! It's breaking the 4 Suns! How is this possible?!

*The 4 Suns shatters, slowly fading as the Juubi is englufed in black flames. Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke land down away from the Juubi. As the Juubi roars, a mighty voice booms through the screams*

Madara: SHINRA TENSEI!

*Madara throws his arm up, a force like no other erupts from his radius in a sphere and forces the eternal back flames to wash away from the Juubi. The black flames fade away, but a few fall towards the Alliance.*

Ninja: The black flames!

*Sasuke turns around and sucks the flames away while everyone stares in awe. Madara sees the black flames and instantly knows another Uchiha is on the battlefield. He sees the back of Sasuke and his eyes slowly widen.*

Madara: *Whispering to himself* ....Iz..Izuna...?!

*Madara is brought back to his senses when he feels Hashirama's gaze on him. He turns and looks down towards him.*

Madara: .....What's wrong? Did you really think I'd stand here and let you come in the middle of the Juubi's rampage?

Hashirama: I said I'd deal with the beast first!

Madara: Hmph..... *He unfolds his arms and a sick smirk forms on his face.* You should be more concerned about me, not the Juubi.

*A twisted chuckle escapes his lips as the Alliance tenses up. Now closer than before, Hashirama sees Madara's Rinnegan and tenses up.*


*The scene changes to a dry war field with a few bodies lying on the floor in the distant*


Suigetsu: ....So..what're we doing here?

*Suigetsu follows Orochimaru and Karin as the two walk silently.*

Orochimaru: .....The Five Kage are here. Their chakras are almost unreadable. They're dying...

*Suigetsu's eyes gaze off in the distant as he thinks about what is currently going on where the Hokages and Sasuke went.*

Karin: There they are!

*Karin and Suigetsu stop a few feet from 5 bodies lying on the floor. He notices Tsunade's snail working on many of them, but can't see Tsunade. He walks forward, alerting Katsuyu. She looks up and freezes at the site of the man she knows is Orochimaru. Confused and scared, she does nothing. Orochimaru walks forward and notices Tsunade's legs underneath a giant tree. He stops as he stares at the giant trunk. He looks at Katsuyu and continues.*

*The Mizukage, Tsuchikage, Raikage, and Kazekage are awake, but are unable to move. They see Orochimaru walk past them, but can't find the strength to make sense of what was going on.*

*Orochimaru walks to the other side of the tree and sees Tsunade, barely hanging onto her life. Tsunade's awake, but says nothing. The two old friends stare into each others' eyes before Orochimaru lifts his hand up and motions for Karin to walk over to him.*


*Scene switches to the Kamui Dimension*


*Kakashi is charging at Obito, his words still ringing in Obito's ears. The two engage in Taijutsu. They meet in a griplock and Obito speaks.*

Obito: Even with my eye you're still blind to reality, Kakashi!

*Before Kakashi speaks back, Obito pushes him back and stares off into the distance.*

Obito: ....The Juubi.... It's....

*He looks towards Kakashi, his eyes glowing in the dark lit dimension. Kakashi dashes forwards, but is met with a reverse Kamui back to the real world. Kakashi falls near the Hokages and Obito gingerly lands ontop of the boulder Madara stood on. Hashirama, Tobirama, and Hiruzen's eyes widen when they see Obito's Rinnegan and Sharingan, but Minato stares at Obito's face.*

Minato: ....Ob..Obito.....?

*Minato looks at Kakashi who is gingerly getting up. Kakashi sense's Minato's chakra, but does not look at his sensei, too afraid to meet his eyes.*

*The panel is two pages wide and it's a split image of the Hokages along with Sasuke, Sakura and Naruto, stnding together with the Alliance behind them, staring at Madara and Obito with the Juubi, while the other half is Orochimaru staring at Tsunade.*

An unsettling sense of nostalgia falls upon the warfield. Naruto 632: END
I command you to make a follow-up for this! Make a 633 prediction continuing from where this ended xD i'm too hype lol.
 

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I think madara doesn't/can't use shinra tensie, but still great :)
Yeah, Im not too sure, but I'm guessing he can if he has the Rinnegan. Anyway, thank you~

liked it=D
Thanks!

It was a bit too long.
I think that there will be more talking.
AND ! I think that the Sharingan techs won't work on the Juubi...But that's just me.
Overall a good try.
=D
Thanks for reading! Yeah I got carried away lol. I hope this is close to what happens this next chapter! :win:

Great work I like it!

Only thing is that by the end Sakura had better throw out her power up! OT announce its name!
Thanks a lot! I didn't know what it could be so I left it out this chapter ; u ;

Awesome prediction.....Madara used shinra tensei :x3:
Yeah I know! Whole boss~

Great job, enjoyed the read. =D
Glad you did~

That was definitely better than most of the predictions I've read.
Means a lot since this is my first chapter prediction!
 

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A good prediction. A bit long though.
Really liked this bit -
*Sasuke manages to keep his composure under wraps, but stares at Naruto, then at Minato, then back to Naruto, in a mix of emotions for anger, and amazement.*
******* :) *******
It had me DWL. That's exactly how sasuke would've reacted.
 
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