[Predictions] Chapter 628 : Plan B!!

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Yo.. Here goes my 1st Ever Prediction.. its impossible for it to happen like this.. but still a prediction is a prediction..


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--- Battlefield ---
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Madara : Obito?! Do you feel it?
Obito : Yes.. The Juubi's is about to transform into Final Form.. Our goal is clearly visible now..
Madara : No.. Not the Juubi.. There @ 2'o clock.. I see huge chakra pools.. same as my Edo-Tensei..
Obito : But that i thought Kabuto has released Edo-Tensei..
Madara : He released edo-tensei .. But again a few Shinobi have been resurrected.. actually just 4.. (narrows eyes) but powerful one's.. Very Powerful.. * Just who are those four ?*
Obito : only 4? * What is that Kabuto planning? I will not hesitate to kill him this time.. if he interrupts with my plan..*

Madara : Obito.. Playtime is over... Lets get down to business.. Control of Juubi gets very difficult during the transformation.. It can go berserk if u angry it.. I hope the alliance survives to see the final form of juubi.. if at all they wont die during the transformation itself..

Kakashi : Its time to Implement Shikaku's plan.. Attack at Once.. * uses Kumai on Madara *
Alliance (with Kyuubi's Cloaks) : Every Attack at Madara & Obito..

:: Huge Attack comes from Alliance towards Obito & Madara..

:: Obito gets fades away and reappears few hundred meters away from Juubi.. and Madara vanished !! ::

Alliance Shinobi : We did it!!

Naruto, Gai, K11 : Kakashi, Did it work??

Kakashi : No!! *Looks Confused *

Naruto, Gai, K11 : Then where did Madara go??

Kakashi : He vanished before I used the Kumai on him..

Naruto, Gai, K11 : !! * The plan failed?? *


:: Suddenly Bijuu starts Shrinking in size , almost half , but with Two heads.. ::

Obito : I'm ready!!

Alliance : ??!!

:: The 2 heads of Bijuu accumulat a denser TBB ::

:: The 1st head fires at Shinobi Alliance ::
:: Immediate second head fires 1 more right behind it.. ::

Naruto : Bee.. plan B now!!

Kakashi/SHikamaru : Plan B?

Naruto : Kyuubi ... I'm sorry..
Kyuubi : No.. its just.. I felt something strange.. Something is far away..
Naruto : Kyuubi? Dont lose focus now..
Kyuubi : heh.. Dont be sorry, Naruto.. Lets do it together..
Naruto : ya.. i sense it too.. Its in konoha village..whatever is coming.. we'll not be here to see it..

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--- Konoha ---
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Hashirama : Ok Tobi.. Takes us to the battlefield..
Tobi : Wait.. I cannot sense Madara.. He disappeared.. I dont have exact location on him now..

Edo Kages & Team Taka : !!

Hashirama : yes.. Madara has vanished.. * Whr did u go madara?? * But there is a huge Chakra at 10'O clock.. Tobi.. Take us thr..

Tobi : Ok..

Minato : wait.. I can take us exactly to the battlefield.. I can sense 1 of my seal moving thr.. * Focuses on Naruto *

Tobi : U can use teleportation jutsu? Fine.. lets c what u can do..

Minato : Yes.. I can teleport us right next to kyuubi..

Sasuke : kyuubi? *Naruto?*

Minato : Every1 ready!!

:: Minato uses FTG and focuses on Naruto ::


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:: As 1st TBB approaches.. Naruto/Kyuubi & Killer Bee/Hachinbi accumulates huge chakra
:: and dashes into the 1st TBB

EVeryone : Naruto !! Bee!! No !!
Obito : No.. Cowards..* They plan to stop the Juubi Transformation by sacrificing themselves..*

~Madara : Tch.. Pathetic..

:: Big Explosion happens as Naruto & Bee Collides with TBB from Juubi

:: Mountains Evaporates as the heat turns them into Lava as alliance see that Jinchuriki Fully Countered the 1st TBB..
:: Sacrificing Themselves..

:: But right through that Dust and Explosion.. A second TBB approaches towards the Shinobi Alliance..


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--- Konoha ---
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Minato : No.. No way!!

Tobi, Hiruzen & Taka : What Happened??

Minato : Kyuubi has disappeared.. * Naruto.. No.. Wait.. Don't*

Everyone : !!
Edo-kages : * 1st Madara.. Now Kyuubi?? Wht is going on thr??*

Minato : I have 1 more seal present thr.. I can teleport us thr.. * Focuses on Kakashi's Kunai with FTG mark*


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--- Battlefield ---
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Edo Kages & Taka appears right behind the Shinobi alliance..

Minato & Tobirama : FTG!! Hiraishin!!( Focuses immediately on TBB) * This TBB is huge... We Cannot send it completely into other dimension..

:: TBB appears to have reduced in size but still comes at greater speed..

Hashi : Tobi, Hiruzen..

Hahi : Mokuton Senjutsu.. 1000 Hands Sage.. Dragon Golem...
Tobi : Seiton Senjutsu.. Water Dragon..
Hiruzen : Everest Mountain..

:: But still TBB penetrates through all the above.. and a reduced TBB reaches alliance..

Sasuke : hmm... * Naruto.. you!! I acknowledge your power and as a brother *

Taka, Oro : !!

:: Sasuke Activate EMS Susanoo.. and stands infront of alliance...

K11, Kakashi & Edo-Kages : Sasuke?!

:: EMS Susanoo.. opens its mouth Wide & Swallows the TBB

:: Susanoo Turns Dark.. and starts Melting..

Sasuke : Awhhh.. !!

:: Sasuke Falls to the floor with no life force.. & TBB is fully nullified..

Hashirama : !! * That TBB is so powerful, it took 4 of us to counter it, I cannot Imagine Juubi*

Everyone : !! ( Surprised as Madara Reappears on Juubi's Head and Still connected to Juubi )

Obito : How.... did u stay connected even from the other dimension?

Madara : (with eyes closed) U let the Hachibi & Kyuubi die..
Obito : They Jumped infront of the TBB.. there was no time..
Madara : u disappoint me.. I had to step in the last min to counter the Juubi's TBB & teleport the Jinchuriki to other dimension..
Edo-kages: !! He countered the TBB alone?*

Madara : Hachibi & Kyuubi Extraction Complete.. (Opens his eyes)
Everyone : !! No!! Naruto , Bee!!
Obito : Wht? Your Eyes.. U have Juubi's Eyes.. but with your EMS in the center..

Madara : I'm fully connected to Juubi Now.. and it seems to like me too...

Obito : .. (narrow's his eyes.. doesnt like the situation slipping his hand)

:: All Dust settles from 2 TTB explosions.. and for 1st time.. Hashi & Madara looks at each other..

K11 & Kakashi Team & Team Taka : !! (Surprises as they see Fallen Sasuke.. who have saved them from Juubi)


Kakashi & K11 : Sasuke?! Why? How? (they try to look for Naurto but find him no whr)
Kakashi : If what madara saying true.. Their bodies must be in other dimension..
Kakashi & K11 (looks at Juubi.. but finds Edo- Hokages infront of them.. ) : What!!.. how?

Madara : Edo-Tensei? uh? I wonder who's side are you... Hashirama..

Oro : They are on the alliance side.. so am i..

Alliance : Orochimaru ??!

Minato : Kakashi.. Is Naruto??

Kakashi : sensei!.. I'm afraid so.. ( Kakashi & K11 lower their heads thinking of Naruto.. and then Sasuke.. )

Minato : (Cries..) * Naruto.. why did u hurry.. I could have saved u with the Kyuubi's Yin & Ur mother's power i have brought to you.. *

Madara : Hashi, Tobi.. Good.. u can come to share my dream.. Its showtime..

Madara : Alliance!! u thought u had Kages, u had jinchuriki, u have yourselves.. but not anymore..

:: As juubi glow bright.. about to complete its final form..

Madara : Activate - Infinite Tsukuyomi..

:: The Juubi's Eyes Appears on the moon..

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:: Alliance (except Edo Kages, Obito) has fallen into Infinte Tskuyomi as Edo Kages watch them helplessly..
Madara : Hmm.. Looks like ur Edo Form is avoiding you from enjoying my dream..

:: Suddendly... Alliance turns to Edo -Kages to fight..
Edo-Kages : No.. Madara.. what did u do?

Edo-Kages : *Are we too late? Have we failed??*

:: Suddenly Sasuke Raises on his knees.. with normal eyes..

Madara, Obito & Edo-Kages : ..!
Sasuke : No.. U have not.. Failed..

:: Activates his Susanoo which is engulfed in amaterasu & Chidori..
:: Susanoo appears with Saskue EMS Eyes and Powered with Juubi Chakra..

Sasuke : Madara! I'm going to the other dimension to bring back Naruto.. Stop me if u can!!
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What is Sasuke Going to do? Is Naruto Still Alive??
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Next Chapter : 629 : Brothers of Konoha.. Naruto & Sasuke..
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So.. that's the end of Wall of Text :D

How do you like it?
 
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Yaa.. I know.. until last chapter.. Madara's side looked weak & alliance side strong with Ed0-kages.. So I just turned the game around.. overpowering Madara's side.. and almost nothing on alliance side.. Hope alliance fights back against that Genjutsu.. :D
There are a number of inconsistencies and assumptions that make it seem a bit far-fetched, but I can enjoy your creativity.
 

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nice fanfic, but not a good prediction. there are too much contents for one chapter, you are going too far off the story line, and how did madara learn to manipulate the kamui dimension(i thought that was obito's and kakashi's visual jutsu).
Enjoyable but you can shorten it, make it a bit more realistic, and there you go, you have a good prediction.
Not trying to be mean, so do not hold a grudge against me.=D
 

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That's not likely to happen, mainly due to:
-Hokages cannot be sensed by Madara - just who gave this idea to every prediction?
-Madara and Sasuke wont be able to go to the other dimension
-Madara wouldnt be able to deal with 2 perfect jinchuurikis in an instant in the other dimension
-Naruto and Bee sacrificing himself doesnt seem plausible after all this Naruto's talk about enduring - but still it could be possible

Anyway, great job :D
 

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Yaa.. we still donno.. what is madara fully capable of.. I took advantage of him.. coz he is so confident that he can become jinchuriki of 10 tails.. he must be having some powers & tricks under his sleeve..


nice fanfic, but not a good prediction. there are too much contents for one chapter, you are going too far off the story line, and how did madara learn to manipulate the kamui dimension(i thought that was obito's and kakashi's visual jutsu).
Enjoyable but you can shorten it, make it a bit more realistic, and there you go, you have a good prediction.
Not trying to be mean, so do not hold a grudge against me.=D
 

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Yaa.. we still donno.. what is madara fully capable of.. I took advantage of him.. coz he is so confident that he can become jinchuriki of 10 tails.. he must be having some powers & tricks under his sleeve..
he cannot because he is an edo and he doesn't have a physical body like obito. The kamui dimension is kakashi's and obito's unique visual jutsu just like shisui's jutsu.( forgot the name)
 

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1.. I donno if madara can sense.. i just thought that 1 Edo can sense other Edo..
2.. We donno abt mdara fully yet....BUt Sauke is empowered with Juuubi chakra.. So i though he can tore a hole between the 2 diemsions and jus got other side :D hehe..
3. Madara entered in last minute of the collision.. so the juchiruki will be weak..
4.. Bee & Naruto jumped infront of Alliance.. just like how minaot and kushina jumped in to save naruto from Kyuubi..
That's not likely to happen, mainly due to:
-Hokages cannot be sensed by Madara - just who gave this idea to every prediction?
-Madara and Sasuke wont be able to go to the other dimension
-Madara wouldnt be able to deal with 2 perfect jinchuurikis in an instant in the other dimension
-Naruto and Bee sacrificing himself doesnt seem plausible after all this Naruto's talk about enduring - but still it could be possible

Anyway, great job :D
 

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The actual chapter is no whr near my prediction :D

its rather a disappointing chapter.. after waiting for 2 weeks..

I was having very high expectations..

I guess.. this is my first & last prediction.. ****

its hurts.. when things doesn't happens as expected.. damn.. no more predictions.. from me..

I'll jus do my business..
 
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