Chapter 5: Breakthrough!

[The Dreamer]

Here I present you the fifth chapter in my fan-made spin-off for the YGO franchise. It's been a while since the last update and I could come here with excuses but I won't. Instead enjoy a longer chapter this time (even tough it's just 4 pages +).

For all of you who have no idea what I'm talking about, you can find the first thread about it here:

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Yes this is a Yu-Gi-Oh! fan manga. If you don't like Yu-Gi-Oh! then you're not gonna be happy here.

Anyway to all those who actually care (=_= I hope there is someone out there) please tell me what you think and how you liked the conclusion to the Introduction Arc. Here's the link to the chapter:

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Until next time!

 

[guts2nevergiveup]

That was intense, good shit. The facial expressions are well done and I like how it keeps us hook to see what happens next. I feel like at times the dialogue can be a little better but I like how it has that yugioh feel, good job

 

[The Dreamer]

That was intense, good shit. The facial expressions are well done and I like how it keeps us hook to see what happens next. I feel like at times the dialogue can be a little better but I like how it has that yugioh feel, good job

Tnx. I know the conversations were kinda off this time. So many "What? What? Whats" xD