Warning: I don’t own this fanfic. I'm just reposting to share with the members of the base interested, cuz is a really good fic and i'm sad that took me some time to find and when it happened the author already left in hiatus you can also read on fanfiction.net :
PS: This was posted in the beginning of the second part of the manga so no complaints about the things stated in the story people! this is from 2006
The thin line between love and hate Chapter 2
A/N: Wow, is been only a couple of days and I already have 5 reviews! And all of them were positive; Sasuke x Hinata fans must be the nicest of earth!
And now I would like to respond here to my lovely five reviewers:
littlesilverflower I'm glad that you liked that I didn't write so much fighting scenes. I have to admit that is basic in any Naruto fanfic, but you know, I prefer seeing it than reading it.
Dark Did you really believe that It was a good cliffhanger! I'm quite surprised with myself then! LOL
kenshinlover2002 Wow, I thought that my grammar was going to be worst with that clone explanation. Yeah, I like this Hinata better, but you'll see in the future that maybe… I changed her too much…LOL you'll see, and by how you reviewed, you'll love it.
AzngrlQT Thank you for considering the first chapter brilliant (blushes)
And in case that you didn't read the author's note in chapter one, I have bad grammar. In case that you don't understand something that happened in the story or during the fights, just ask me. is still a miracle for me that you could get the clone fight right?
Ok, and again, I don't own it.
Chapter 2
Getting three birds in one row
In chapter one…
Naruto and Neji were the most shocked ones, they couldn't believe who was. Sasuke just stood there, unable to speak, his sharingan deactivated just to make a better look. "You…you are…"
But before he could answer, one of the ANBU team did it. "Yes, is our captain, she is Captain Hyuuga Hinata for you. The strongest woman of the ANBU force."
Pieces of ceramic mask on the floor, funeral silence in the fighting room…and Naruto and Neji with their jaws on the floor. "N-no i-it c-can't b-be!" finally screamed Neji. Just seeing there his cousin, the weak and always fragile Hinata face to face to the Uchiha prodigy, it was too much to hold back.
"H-Hinata-chan! Step away from there! He is going to kill you!" Then she looked back where the rest of Konoha ninjas were. "Uzumaki, I suggest you and the others to leave now, I'll take care of this here. Let the ANBU force to escort you to a safe place." in that moment, Naruto's eyes grew wider than before She didn't shudder at all, even called by my last name, no Naruto-kun at all!
In that moment, Sasuke tried to attack her, but as Hyuuga heir, she blocked it, gaining more attention from the Uchiha. "Hinata…" then she didn't let him continue with his sentence and continued the fight, now not holding back.
"Hinaa-cha, Sasuke doesn't want to comeback! Please stay aside!" but Naruto's scream was ignored while she and Sasuke decided to continue the fight. The same happened to Hinata's clone against Orochimaru.
Suddenly, Orochimaru stepped away few meters from the clone and looked at it suspiciously. "What kind of clone is this?! It looks like it not a clone but some kind of twin sister! She attacks and defends on her own, unlike a normal clone, this one has a separate mind!" then the clone stepped in a secure space and in defensive pose explained. "This is a special clone technique. Unlike the normal clones that just puff away, we are made of the same flesh as the creator. That's why we have our own mind and ability to respond in a fight."
In that moment, Orochimaru smirked. "Then that means, right now you're not at your full chakra." And then he summoned a giant snake, covering half of the room. In that moment both Hinata's step back to a side together. Now, back to back, seeing what is coming next. Sasuke looks at Orochimaru with concern He put out the big one, he must be in a hurry to finish her off now, but why? Then the old man looks at his future body. "If we fight then at full chakra, we can finish her in less time. We only need to kill one, then she will we ours."
"Ours?" Asked Sasuke
"Yes, her abilities are worth to be studied and used in our benefit. We just need to get rid of one to have her only at 50 of her strength."
In that moment, one of the Hinata clones attacks Sasuke, and scratches his shoulder with a shuriken. "For someone who said that broke his bonds with Konoha, you're pretty careless." Suddenly, he looks at her surprised, not seeing the dangerous space between them. "You should have broken ALL the bonds completely." She whispers at him before a ball of fire nearly hits him. He dodges it in time, but not Orochimaru's snake. The technique was so strong that it made it disappear, giving the other clone the opportunity to continue with her attack.
"And besides," chuckled the clone while avoiding the Senin's snakes, "right now we are not at 50 of capacity," In that moment he opens his eyes wide and looks around him, and in that moment she attacks him with the same snake technique, this time the snakes are white. "we are at 33 of chakra sharing." And with an evil smirk, the clone stops and looks where the other was fighting Sasuke.
Hearing those words, Naruto and the others looks at the ANBU members for an answer. "33, she talks like there are three of these clones, no two." Spoke Gai, oh-so-good-in-math. "Yeah, but then where's the third clone? I haven't seeing it yet…" continues Kakashi, looking now down to where Sasuke was fighting, seeing the wicked smirk on Hinata.
In that moment, something hit in Kakashi's mind. No, it can't be! and in that moment, seeing that Naruto can finally stand up, he rushes to the exit. "We have to move, now!" "Kakashi-sensei, what is happening!" screamed Sakura following him like crazy. "Where's the other clone-"
"The other clone is right now with ITACHI! WE HAVE TO MOVE NOW!" in that moment, Sasuke opens his eyes, activates the sharingan again, but this time, he passes by Hinata and also runs out. Hinata, seeing the obvious intentions coming from the others, suddenly makes a seal.
And, every nin from Konoha is unwilling to move, mostly all of then are suspended in air, except of Sasuke that runs to the exit. Ten-Ten, noticing this, tries to break it, but it doesn't work. "This is not like those jutsus to make you sleep, this one is different." responds Hinata due all their efforts to move and try to make seals too. "Only the one who made it can break it, and I'm not going to let any of you get Itachi before I do some damage."
Orochimaru, thinking that he was going to have his opportunity to escape, is surprised corned by a giant white snake, "Don't think that I'm going to let you go that easy, Orochimaru." Spoke Hinata, not needing to look at him, "I have decided that you are not going to leave alive from this room, since it looks pretty good for you as a tomb."
Sasuke kept running toward where the sound of fighting was getting louder. "Hinata, how dare you to fight Itachi. Fool, he's going to kill you!"
Stepping in a clear area, he could see what he thought. Hinata (or her clone) is now stepping back from Itachi, who wounded her successfully leaving her with a wounded arm.
Seeing that he was going to blow again, Sasuke steps in, stopping the kunai throbbing one of his. Seeing the two weapons collide, Itachi looks where the other came from. "Little brother, I see that you've grown up strongly since the last time that we met." And then he looked back at Hinata, who had just thrown another at him and jumped back. Now she was beside Sasuke, but no one saw the other at the moment. "Step away Hinata, I'm going to get him now, you should go back for you other two clones."
"Yeah, I suppose. But only I'll tell you this Uchiha," and in that moment he looks at her hue eyes, having coldness running through them, "kill him, then brake the bonds that you have left so you can be completely unattached to Konoha forever." And with that the clone leaves the two rivals, ready for their final fight.
"Orochimaru, so you think that you're going to escape doing that jutsu? How troublesome." Orochimaru has been making jutsu to jutsu, only to being 'deleted' by Hinata with ease.
Looking the current situation, one of the clones looks at her teammates from the ANBU, who were not attacked by the freeze jutsu. "You three go and get what was our original mission; I'll catch you up when you come back." And with a nod, they left.
Turning now back to Orochimaru, Hinata walks to the other Hinata, and like nothing, they turn into one. "Now I'm at 50, I should be more than enough to kill you."
Naruto swallows hard. "How Hinata is going to kill him? She is gotten strong, but I can't be enough to get him. Damn it; don't be so cocky, he'll get you!"
Hinata is now steps away from the Legendary missing Nin. "I should turn you into what you like most, Orochimaru, enjoy it." and with a fast seal, Orochimaru is turned now into a snake, big enough to eat them all at once. In that moment, noticing what she has done, he laughs hysterically. "KU KU KU KU….you foolish brat, if you wanted to die in my mouth instead in my hands, you should have said it before! Now I'm going to eat you and the ones floating over there…KU KU KU KU…"
"…ku ku ku ku ku ku ku ku ku…"
Orochimaru looks down, she was smiling and chuckling, and then she looked up at him with a wide smile, claiming victory already.
"WHAT ARE YOU LAUGHTING AT? I'M THE ONE WHO IS NOW A GIANT SNAKE, NOT YOU!" he screamed back, almost ready to eat her up once for all.
"It seems that no matter that you were one of the Legendary Sennin, you must have bad grades in biology class, or never attended them."
"What do you mean?" he asked, not understanding the meaning of this.
"I mean, in wild life, everything runs in the food chain…and guess what happens to snakes after they eat their mouse."
Orochimaru looks at her in confusion, still not getting to her point. Suddenly she sights lightly and looks up at him. "let me explain you with actions then." And with only a couple of hand seals, Hinata turns into a giant crow.
Everyone from the Konoha nin, tried to scream, but due to the jutsu, they can't even move their vocal cords. And in front of him, a big bird called Hinata…eats a big snake called Orochimaru.
A/N: Sorry for leave you like this, but I wanted to put this and besides, i think is a god cliffhanger to make you in suspense of what happened in the final battle between Itachi and Sasuke. Don't you think?
I think this time I messed up worst the grammar thing, and the beta suggestion is still up. I would like to know how much you liked this far. And don't worry; I learned that in the Naruto world, all kind of jutsu is possible. LOL
Please, no flames for the grammar, only about story content, thanks.
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PS: This was posted in the beginning of the second part of the manga so no complaints about the things stated in the story people! this is from 2006
The thin line between love and hate Chapter 2
A/N: Wow, is been only a couple of days and I already have 5 reviews! And all of them were positive; Sasuke x Hinata fans must be the nicest of earth!
And now I would like to respond here to my lovely five reviewers:
littlesilverflower I'm glad that you liked that I didn't write so much fighting scenes. I have to admit that is basic in any Naruto fanfic, but you know, I prefer seeing it than reading it.
Dark Did you really believe that It was a good cliffhanger! I'm quite surprised with myself then! LOL
kenshinlover2002 Wow, I thought that my grammar was going to be worst with that clone explanation. Yeah, I like this Hinata better, but you'll see in the future that maybe… I changed her too much…LOL you'll see, and by how you reviewed, you'll love it.
AzngrlQT Thank you for considering the first chapter brilliant (blushes)
And in case that you didn't read the author's note in chapter one, I have bad grammar. In case that you don't understand something that happened in the story or during the fights, just ask me. is still a miracle for me that you could get the clone fight right?
Ok, and again, I don't own it.
Chapter 2
Getting three birds in one row
In chapter one…
Naruto and Neji were the most shocked ones, they couldn't believe who was. Sasuke just stood there, unable to speak, his sharingan deactivated just to make a better look. "You…you are…"
But before he could answer, one of the ANBU team did it. "Yes, is our captain, she is Captain Hyuuga Hinata for you. The strongest woman of the ANBU force."
Pieces of ceramic mask on the floor, funeral silence in the fighting room…and Naruto and Neji with their jaws on the floor. "N-no i-it c-can't b-be!" finally screamed Neji. Just seeing there his cousin, the weak and always fragile Hinata face to face to the Uchiha prodigy, it was too much to hold back.
"H-Hinata-chan! Step away from there! He is going to kill you!" Then she looked back where the rest of Konoha ninjas were. "Uzumaki, I suggest you and the others to leave now, I'll take care of this here. Let the ANBU force to escort you to a safe place." in that moment, Naruto's eyes grew wider than before She didn't shudder at all, even called by my last name, no Naruto-kun at all!
In that moment, Sasuke tried to attack her, but as Hyuuga heir, she blocked it, gaining more attention from the Uchiha. "Hinata…" then she didn't let him continue with his sentence and continued the fight, now not holding back.
"Hinaa-cha, Sasuke doesn't want to comeback! Please stay aside!" but Naruto's scream was ignored while she and Sasuke decided to continue the fight. The same happened to Hinata's clone against Orochimaru.
Suddenly, Orochimaru stepped away few meters from the clone and looked at it suspiciously. "What kind of clone is this?! It looks like it not a clone but some kind of twin sister! She attacks and defends on her own, unlike a normal clone, this one has a separate mind!" then the clone stepped in a secure space and in defensive pose explained. "This is a special clone technique. Unlike the normal clones that just puff away, we are made of the same flesh as the creator. That's why we have our own mind and ability to respond in a fight."
In that moment, Orochimaru smirked. "Then that means, right now you're not at your full chakra." And then he summoned a giant snake, covering half of the room. In that moment both Hinata's step back to a side together. Now, back to back, seeing what is coming next. Sasuke looks at Orochimaru with concern He put out the big one, he must be in a hurry to finish her off now, but why? Then the old man looks at his future body. "If we fight then at full chakra, we can finish her in less time. We only need to kill one, then she will we ours."
"Ours?" Asked Sasuke
"Yes, her abilities are worth to be studied and used in our benefit. We just need to get rid of one to have her only at 50 of her strength."
In that moment, one of the Hinata clones attacks Sasuke, and scratches his shoulder with a shuriken. "For someone who said that broke his bonds with Konoha, you're pretty careless." Suddenly, he looks at her surprised, not seeing the dangerous space between them. "You should have broken ALL the bonds completely." She whispers at him before a ball of fire nearly hits him. He dodges it in time, but not Orochimaru's snake. The technique was so strong that it made it disappear, giving the other clone the opportunity to continue with her attack.
"And besides," chuckled the clone while avoiding the Senin's snakes, "right now we are not at 50 of capacity," In that moment he opens his eyes wide and looks around him, and in that moment she attacks him with the same snake technique, this time the snakes are white. "we are at 33 of chakra sharing." And with an evil smirk, the clone stops and looks where the other was fighting Sasuke.
Hearing those words, Naruto and the others looks at the ANBU members for an answer. "33, she talks like there are three of these clones, no two." Spoke Gai, oh-so-good-in-math. "Yeah, but then where's the third clone? I haven't seeing it yet…" continues Kakashi, looking now down to where Sasuke was fighting, seeing the wicked smirk on Hinata.
In that moment, something hit in Kakashi's mind. No, it can't be! and in that moment, seeing that Naruto can finally stand up, he rushes to the exit. "We have to move, now!" "Kakashi-sensei, what is happening!" screamed Sakura following him like crazy. "Where's the other clone-"
"The other clone is right now with ITACHI! WE HAVE TO MOVE NOW!" in that moment, Sasuke opens his eyes, activates the sharingan again, but this time, he passes by Hinata and also runs out. Hinata, seeing the obvious intentions coming from the others, suddenly makes a seal.
And, every nin from Konoha is unwilling to move, mostly all of then are suspended in air, except of Sasuke that runs to the exit. Ten-Ten, noticing this, tries to break it, but it doesn't work. "This is not like those jutsus to make you sleep, this one is different." responds Hinata due all their efforts to move and try to make seals too. "Only the one who made it can break it, and I'm not going to let any of you get Itachi before I do some damage."
Orochimaru, thinking that he was going to have his opportunity to escape, is surprised corned by a giant white snake, "Don't think that I'm going to let you go that easy, Orochimaru." Spoke Hinata, not needing to look at him, "I have decided that you are not going to leave alive from this room, since it looks pretty good for you as a tomb."
Sasuke kept running toward where the sound of fighting was getting louder. "Hinata, how dare you to fight Itachi. Fool, he's going to kill you!"
Stepping in a clear area, he could see what he thought. Hinata (or her clone) is now stepping back from Itachi, who wounded her successfully leaving her with a wounded arm.
Seeing that he was going to blow again, Sasuke steps in, stopping the kunai throbbing one of his. Seeing the two weapons collide, Itachi looks where the other came from. "Little brother, I see that you've grown up strongly since the last time that we met." And then he looked back at Hinata, who had just thrown another at him and jumped back. Now she was beside Sasuke, but no one saw the other at the moment. "Step away Hinata, I'm going to get him now, you should go back for you other two clones."
"Yeah, I suppose. But only I'll tell you this Uchiha," and in that moment he looks at her hue eyes, having coldness running through them, "kill him, then brake the bonds that you have left so you can be completely unattached to Konoha forever." And with that the clone leaves the two rivals, ready for their final fight.
"Orochimaru, so you think that you're going to escape doing that jutsu? How troublesome." Orochimaru has been making jutsu to jutsu, only to being 'deleted' by Hinata with ease.
Looking the current situation, one of the clones looks at her teammates from the ANBU, who were not attacked by the freeze jutsu. "You three go and get what was our original mission; I'll catch you up when you come back." And with a nod, they left.
Turning now back to Orochimaru, Hinata walks to the other Hinata, and like nothing, they turn into one. "Now I'm at 50, I should be more than enough to kill you."
Naruto swallows hard. "How Hinata is going to kill him? She is gotten strong, but I can't be enough to get him. Damn it; don't be so cocky, he'll get you!"
Hinata is now steps away from the Legendary missing Nin. "I should turn you into what you like most, Orochimaru, enjoy it." and with a fast seal, Orochimaru is turned now into a snake, big enough to eat them all at once. In that moment, noticing what she has done, he laughs hysterically. "KU KU KU KU….you foolish brat, if you wanted to die in my mouth instead in my hands, you should have said it before! Now I'm going to eat you and the ones floating over there…KU KU KU KU…"
"…ku ku ku ku ku ku ku ku ku…"
Orochimaru looks down, she was smiling and chuckling, and then she looked up at him with a wide smile, claiming victory already.
"WHAT ARE YOU LAUGHTING AT? I'M THE ONE WHO IS NOW A GIANT SNAKE, NOT YOU!" he screamed back, almost ready to eat her up once for all.
"It seems that no matter that you were one of the Legendary Sennin, you must have bad grades in biology class, or never attended them."
"What do you mean?" he asked, not understanding the meaning of this.
"I mean, in wild life, everything runs in the food chain…and guess what happens to snakes after they eat their mouse."
Orochimaru looks at her in confusion, still not getting to her point. Suddenly she sights lightly and looks up at him. "let me explain you with actions then." And with only a couple of hand seals, Hinata turns into a giant crow.
Everyone from the Konoha nin, tried to scream, but due to the jutsu, they can't even move their vocal cords. And in front of him, a big bird called Hinata…eats a big snake called Orochimaru.
A/N: Sorry for leave you like this, but I wanted to put this and besides, i think is a god cliffhanger to make you in suspense of what happened in the final battle between Itachi and Sasuke. Don't you think?
I think this time I messed up worst the grammar thing, and the beta suggestion is still up. I would like to know how much you liked this far. And don't worry; I learned that in the Naruto world, all kind of jutsu is possible. LOL
Please, no flames for the grammar, only about story content, thanks.