(so yeah here im going to post chapter 2 and 3 (maybe only 2 see how it goes) about my Hidan prologue arc, c n c will be must appreciated)
Leaving the gates of Kumogakure Hidan's blood was boiling to the point of breaking point, not only had a man he had once trusted to take care of the villagers attacked, injured and killed almost half of his village, but Hidan had to deliver Herbs and Food do the murderers home village. This fact made Hidan sick to the stomach, almost to the point of him being physcially sick from the mere thought of the events. He continued his journy back towards the village in the mountains, running that night over and over in his head, the flash of silver from the mans Head band almost sent Hidan mad. Feeling sick once more he stopped the cart at a nearby stream to grab a drink and have a small rest. Staring into the pond all Hidan saw was blood, blood all over his face hands and shirt, as the image in the river became more clear and vivid he became tearing up and he pounded his fists onto the ground,
"WHY!!!! why would the doctor do that...why couldnt i do anything to help! God dammit!"
Hidan sat back sobbing quietly to himself for what felt like hours, finelly regaining his senses he stood back up and headed towards the cart. Before he could jump in the seat at the front the shine of crimson red caught his attention, jumping into the back of the cart Hidan glared down at his new weapon, it has cost him almost half the money he received from the herbs and vegetables but he knew it would be worth it. As he stood there motionless a low whistling sound could be heard, as Hidan turned his head to the direction of the noise a small star shaped object struck his cheek leaving a deep cut as blood began dripping down his cheek. Looking up into a nearby tree two ninja sat there laughing to themselves, from this distance Hidan could hear exactly what they where saying,
"Hey boy,remeber me the good old doctor Gerrard, and this is how things are going to happen, we are going to come down there tie you up and offer you as a ransom, if you refuse we'll cut you into pieces and deliver a body part everyday until your Father comes out of hiding understand?"
As the Doctor spoke Hidan raised his left hand and touched his cheek, remoing his hand he saw a great ammount of blood plastered all over his hand, with his eye widening shock and anger took over his mind. Bending down in one fluid motion he grabbed a small stone in his left hand and the scythe in his right,as he gripped the scythe a small ammount of shock crossed his mind as the rock in his left hand weighed more then the scythe in his right. Ignoring this fact he threw the rock as hard as he could, unknown to him is that he had infact infused chakra into the stone, and although missing both men he left a small hole in the branch they where standing on, with shock on there faces both men jumped down from the tree and onto the green grass that layed before them, at the same time Hidan jumped down from the cart, scythe in hand. At this moment the men began speaking amongst themselves and then turned towards Hidan,
"Well kid,i guess you've voted for option B, and today you die"
"Yeah sorry kid,but the good Doctor is right, you see your father has a large bounty on his head and the only way to get him out of that barrier is with you, im against killing kids but this bounty is worth it"
With utter rage and sadness in his heart Hidan postioned himself the same way he had once seen his father when chopping wood, Hidan then yelled at the men,
"The only people dieing today will be you, i will become your executioner!"
With that Hidan charged forward, the feather weight scythe in his hand held out to the right with all three blades facing the men before him. Laughing to themselves both men drew a Kunai each before taking offensive stances and awaiting the young boys move. As he neared close range he jumped into the air, scythe above his head as he swung it down onto the other man Kunai, both men had completey under estimated the weight of the scythe, both thinking that it must be a very light weapon for a small child to weild so easily. They where both wrong, as the scythe came down onto the kunai the man holding it couldnt understand the weight of it, slamming straight into the kunai the scythe weight alone smashed the kunai out of his hand as the blade continued down the mans right shoulder leaving a massive cut from his right shoulder down to his hip. Stumbling backwards with eyes wide he shrieked out in pain before stumbling back and falling over. The Doctor not understanding what had happened delivered a solid kick towards the boys face and with amazing speed he only managed to connect with the scythe,which was now positioned as a shield infront of his face. Glaring through the gaps in the blades Hidan smiled psychotically at the wide eyes thta where now present on the Doctors face, leaping backwards the Doctor blew forth a wind style jutsu which smashed straight into Hidan sending him barreling backwards. As he lay on the ground beaten up Hidan glanced upwards as the Doctor stood only a few metres away from him laughing and then speaking,
"Well kid i gotta admit, you skill with that large weapon is amazing, but you lack the jutsu to truely fight someone like myself, and here you die kid"
With that comment the mans hand flashed as a strong current of lightning swirled itself arounf his hand acting as a spear. Seeing this made Hidan panic as the Doctor stood over him staring down. The Doctor then moved his arm extended aiming for Hidans chest, with his eyes closed he awaited the eletrical strike that was sure to come, except it didnt, nothing happened no pain no sensation of lightning no nothing. Opening his eyes he saw the Doctors hand only centimetres away from his chest,glancing to his left he saw a hand gripping the mans throat, except the hand wasnt attached to anything, it was just a hand with long black cords coming from the wrist. With confusion all of his face he watched as the hand slowly raised the doctor up into the air by his throat, glancing over to the right Hidan saw the other man, plastered against the tree with a gaping hole in his throat. As Hidan looked at the other man a loud shriek of pain came from the man infront of him, with a quick whip of his head hidan saw another hand, except this hand had gone straight through the Doctors ribcage and heart and appeared on the other side completely impaling his chest. With fear in his eyes he moved his head over to the left to see a tall man, with a black mask over his face and long black robes littered with red clouds all over it. As Hidan stared at the man he spoke in a deep raspy voice,
"Only worth 15 million each,barely worth my time but every bounty is more money for me, worthless ninja killing children, this is a bounty i was gladly happy to claim this one"
Continueing to stare at this strange man Hidan slowly got up, preparing himself to fight another enemy with the man infront of him, suddenly as if the man hadnt even noticed Hidan he spoke once more noticing the small boy staring at him,
"What are you staring at kid, havnt you even seen a dead body before, in this day and age they're everywhere, death si everywhere learn to deal with it"
As the man spoke Hidans look of fear grew to one of intent, intent the man could feel from that far away,glancing at the boy he saw the giant scythe held up with what seemed relative ease, what he didnt expect was what the young boy said next
"Im not sure who you are, but it seems you saved me from this trash... but i hope you dont mind if i take his head"
With that and a strike as fast as lightning Hidans scythe found the Doctors neck and removed his head completely, as the head rolled down towards the bank of the river Hidans smile only grew larger as the event unfolded, out of corner of his eye he saw the strange man pick up the guy with the hole in his throat and bring him towards himself, along with the doctor. Staring at the served head of the Doctor a hand flew forth driving its fingers into the eyes as it gripped on,and then like lightning the hand returned to the man in black and red. As the man stood there a small thread appeared from his arm, as this happened the man placed the doctors head back on his body as the small thread began stiching his neck back together. Once this was completed the man grabbed both men by the shirt collor and lifted them up onto his back. Turning around he began walking off, at this moment Hidan yelled out to him,
"Sir! please tell me your name?"
"My name..My name is Kakuzu of the Akatsuki kid, and dont you go telling anyone what happened here today, otherwise there will be a bounty on your head"
With that Kakuzu walked off, both dead men on his back and the goal of money on his mind. Looking around the once grassy area was now littered with the crimson red blood of the men who had attack him, with his tongue Hidan licked some of the splattered blood from the doctor off his right cheek and with a smile said to himself
"That...was fun"
coming soon......
(so yeah c n c would be greatly appreciated,i only did chapter 2 because it turned out longer then i expected Lol thanks for reading)
Chapter 2: The Attack, And Birth of a Murderer
Leaving the gates of Kumogakure Hidan's blood was boiling to the point of breaking point, not only had a man he had once trusted to take care of the villagers attacked, injured and killed almost half of his village, but Hidan had to deliver Herbs and Food do the murderers home village. This fact made Hidan sick to the stomach, almost to the point of him being physcially sick from the mere thought of the events. He continued his journy back towards the village in the mountains, running that night over and over in his head, the flash of silver from the mans Head band almost sent Hidan mad. Feeling sick once more he stopped the cart at a nearby stream to grab a drink and have a small rest. Staring into the pond all Hidan saw was blood, blood all over his face hands and shirt, as the image in the river became more clear and vivid he became tearing up and he pounded his fists onto the ground,
"WHY!!!! why would the doctor do that...why couldnt i do anything to help! God dammit!"
Hidan sat back sobbing quietly to himself for what felt like hours, finelly regaining his senses he stood back up and headed towards the cart. Before he could jump in the seat at the front the shine of crimson red caught his attention, jumping into the back of the cart Hidan glared down at his new weapon, it has cost him almost half the money he received from the herbs and vegetables but he knew it would be worth it. As he stood there motionless a low whistling sound could be heard, as Hidan turned his head to the direction of the noise a small star shaped object struck his cheek leaving a deep cut as blood began dripping down his cheek. Looking up into a nearby tree two ninja sat there laughing to themselves, from this distance Hidan could hear exactly what they where saying,
"Hey boy,remeber me the good old doctor Gerrard, and this is how things are going to happen, we are going to come down there tie you up and offer you as a ransom, if you refuse we'll cut you into pieces and deliver a body part everyday until your Father comes out of hiding understand?"
As the Doctor spoke Hidan raised his left hand and touched his cheek, remoing his hand he saw a great ammount of blood plastered all over his hand, with his eye widening shock and anger took over his mind. Bending down in one fluid motion he grabbed a small stone in his left hand and the scythe in his right,as he gripped the scythe a small ammount of shock crossed his mind as the rock in his left hand weighed more then the scythe in his right. Ignoring this fact he threw the rock as hard as he could, unknown to him is that he had infact infused chakra into the stone, and although missing both men he left a small hole in the branch they where standing on, with shock on there faces both men jumped down from the tree and onto the green grass that layed before them, at the same time Hidan jumped down from the cart, scythe in hand. At this moment the men began speaking amongst themselves and then turned towards Hidan,
"Well kid,i guess you've voted for option B, and today you die"
"Yeah sorry kid,but the good Doctor is right, you see your father has a large bounty on his head and the only way to get him out of that barrier is with you, im against killing kids but this bounty is worth it"
With utter rage and sadness in his heart Hidan postioned himself the same way he had once seen his father when chopping wood, Hidan then yelled at the men,
"The only people dieing today will be you, i will become your executioner!"
With that Hidan charged forward, the feather weight scythe in his hand held out to the right with all three blades facing the men before him. Laughing to themselves both men drew a Kunai each before taking offensive stances and awaiting the young boys move. As he neared close range he jumped into the air, scythe above his head as he swung it down onto the other man Kunai, both men had completey under estimated the weight of the scythe, both thinking that it must be a very light weapon for a small child to weild so easily. They where both wrong, as the scythe came down onto the kunai the man holding it couldnt understand the weight of it, slamming straight into the kunai the scythe weight alone smashed the kunai out of his hand as the blade continued down the mans right shoulder leaving a massive cut from his right shoulder down to his hip. Stumbling backwards with eyes wide he shrieked out in pain before stumbling back and falling over. The Doctor not understanding what had happened delivered a solid kick towards the boys face and with amazing speed he only managed to connect with the scythe,which was now positioned as a shield infront of his face. Glaring through the gaps in the blades Hidan smiled psychotically at the wide eyes thta where now present on the Doctors face, leaping backwards the Doctor blew forth a wind style jutsu which smashed straight into Hidan sending him barreling backwards. As he lay on the ground beaten up Hidan glanced upwards as the Doctor stood only a few metres away from him laughing and then speaking,
"Well kid i gotta admit, you skill with that large weapon is amazing, but you lack the jutsu to truely fight someone like myself, and here you die kid"
With that comment the mans hand flashed as a strong current of lightning swirled itself arounf his hand acting as a spear. Seeing this made Hidan panic as the Doctor stood over him staring down. The Doctor then moved his arm extended aiming for Hidans chest, with his eyes closed he awaited the eletrical strike that was sure to come, except it didnt, nothing happened no pain no sensation of lightning no nothing. Opening his eyes he saw the Doctors hand only centimetres away from his chest,glancing to his left he saw a hand gripping the mans throat, except the hand wasnt attached to anything, it was just a hand with long black cords coming from the wrist. With confusion all of his face he watched as the hand slowly raised the doctor up into the air by his throat, glancing over to the right Hidan saw the other man, plastered against the tree with a gaping hole in his throat. As Hidan looked at the other man a loud shriek of pain came from the man infront of him, with a quick whip of his head hidan saw another hand, except this hand had gone straight through the Doctors ribcage and heart and appeared on the other side completely impaling his chest. With fear in his eyes he moved his head over to the left to see a tall man, with a black mask over his face and long black robes littered with red clouds all over it. As Hidan stared at the man he spoke in a deep raspy voice,
"Only worth 15 million each,barely worth my time but every bounty is more money for me, worthless ninja killing children, this is a bounty i was gladly happy to claim this one"
Continueing to stare at this strange man Hidan slowly got up, preparing himself to fight another enemy with the man infront of him, suddenly as if the man hadnt even noticed Hidan he spoke once more noticing the small boy staring at him,
"What are you staring at kid, havnt you even seen a dead body before, in this day and age they're everywhere, death si everywhere learn to deal with it"
As the man spoke Hidans look of fear grew to one of intent, intent the man could feel from that far away,glancing at the boy he saw the giant scythe held up with what seemed relative ease, what he didnt expect was what the young boy said next
"Im not sure who you are, but it seems you saved me from this trash... but i hope you dont mind if i take his head"
With that and a strike as fast as lightning Hidans scythe found the Doctors neck and removed his head completely, as the head rolled down towards the bank of the river Hidans smile only grew larger as the event unfolded, out of corner of his eye he saw the strange man pick up the guy with the hole in his throat and bring him towards himself, along with the doctor. Staring at the served head of the Doctor a hand flew forth driving its fingers into the eyes as it gripped on,and then like lightning the hand returned to the man in black and red. As the man stood there a small thread appeared from his arm, as this happened the man placed the doctors head back on his body as the small thread began stiching his neck back together. Once this was completed the man grabbed both men by the shirt collor and lifted them up onto his back. Turning around he began walking off, at this moment Hidan yelled out to him,
"Sir! please tell me your name?"
"My name..My name is Kakuzu of the Akatsuki kid, and dont you go telling anyone what happened here today, otherwise there will be a bounty on your head"
With that Kakuzu walked off, both dead men on his back and the goal of money on his mind. Looking around the once grassy area was now littered with the crimson red blood of the men who had attack him, with his tongue Hidan licked some of the splattered blood from the doctor off his right cheek and with a smile said to himself
"That...was fun"
Chapter 3: The Truth of Hidans Father and Hidans training
coming soon......
(so yeah c n c would be greatly appreciated,i only did chapter 2 because it turned out longer then i expected Lol thanks for reading)
