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I'm new at this so be easy..lol

The Beginning of the End

Naruto: N-No way that thing's chakra... it's way too strong!
Kurama: This is bad, the ten tails is strong enough to take us all out with one blow. There's no way to win.
Madara: i must admit. You guys have given me a tough fight . Second to my fight with Hashirama. But this is the end of you.

Madara looks to the Juubi.
Madara: juubi! I am the one who revived you i will-
Juubi: Silence!

Everyone on the battlefield is in shock.

Juubi: How dare you revive me in such a state my power exceeds far beyond this. What is the meaning of this?!
Juubi looks to kurama and Hachibi

Juubi:"!!" portions of my chakra???!

Madara: Juubi, i can get your chakra from the kyuubi and hachibi. But first we must unite. Allow me to be your jinchouriki. Together you and i will rule!

Obito: "!" Rule?? I thought You wanted to cast infinite tsukuyomi What about our plan?
Madara: foolish Obito. Haven't i told you once before, you are naive to the deception of this world. Did you really think i wanted to help you with your little dream world rather than to attain the ultimate power?
Madara: you were just a pawn to help me achieve the this power .you were just a child and easily amused and manipulated so i took advantage
Obito: but, my whole life i-
Madara: You were a fool , Obito.

Obito looks in a state of utter dissapointment and shock falling to his knees

Kakashi: (obito...)

Juubi: CHILD WITH THE RINNEGAN i will allow you to restore my power to its fullest compacity. Seal me. But be assured child..once my power is restored. I will break free from your fragile body and it is i who will have rule of this world.
Madara : (we will see).

Madara begins to formulate a fuuinjutsu that is connecting him to the juubi..a dark aura emerges from the seal and envelops the juubi ...sucking him into madara's body.
Madara: This power. It's more than i could ever imagine!
Killer Bee: Naruto! We can still try. If he wants to rule the world we'll testify.

Naruto:Bee's right, I dont care how strong you are! We will bring you down no matter what !

Naruto and kurama enter full tailed beast mode and charge at Madara while creating a tailed beast bomb
Madara: So naive.

Madara vanishes without a trace

Naruto: what., ? Where did he-

Madara appears behind Naruto and creates an equally large chakra mass
Madara: time to give me that precious "power" you posess.

Madara shoots a beam from the mass of chakra that swallows naruto and causes his bijuu mode cloak to vanish
Naruto:UWAH!

Naruto is now motionless on the ground

Kakashi ,Bee, Gai: Naruto!!
Obito: (Kakashi it's too late ,he's as good as dead )

The Hero has been forced to a state of near death.. how will our warriors escape this horrible reality...
Next Chapter: Broken Wills
 

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nice job man....it is a prediction that goes with a theory of mine that says about how fishy the eye of the moon plan is....and that madara just wants the juubi to be more powerful....because if the eye of the moon was madaras goal why would he need to be revived....if he wants a world of peace he couldve just trusted obito...but instead he told obito what he wanted to here and was manipulating him....

again good prediction....not sure if juubi will talk(im sure he can, but right now he seems more savage like.... though, and the beam of energy is a bit strange(seeing as that isnt typical of narutoverse....) but except for that i love it

ignore the haters you were creative and did a good job(+ rep
 

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nice job man....it is a prediction that goes with a theory of mine that says about how fishy the eye of the moon plan is....and that madara just wants the juubi to be more powerful....because if the eye of the moon was madaras goal why would he need to be revived....if he wants a world of peace he couldve just trusted obito...but instead he told obito what he wanted to here and was manipulating him....

again good prediction....not sure if juubi will talk(im sure he can, but right now he seems more savage like.... though, and the beam of energy is a bit strange(seeing as that isnt typical of narutoverse....) but except for that i love it

ignore the haters you were creative and did a good job(+ rep
Thanks man.. I appreciate the constructive criticism also.. I need that
 
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