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Causes of Kaguya's loss, bad writting: Black Zetsu - sleeve advice & chakra obssesion
Hello guys, It is been a while since I have posted something in Narutobase which last time was about few days after parts of Naruto Bolt the movie were released so we could see battle of Momoshiki and Kinshiki against Naruto and Sasuke and rest of cast. I wasn't interested in to take part in any kind of discussion until I noticed that recently people began to talk about Kaguya again, which always bring me mixed emotions.
Today I will try to prove what were really causes of Kaguya's downfall and poor performance in eyes of readers.
NOTE : I will skip plot reasons that good guys would always win no matter of cost or ridiculous plot. I will also skip partially lack of depth of Kaguya character and rather try to prove and blame Black Zetsu for that.
Ok, so here we go.
1. Chakra obsession:
^^ It may be good showcase of Kaguya's power or rather it overpowerness in compare to good guys but still it was a just rushing without of thinking too much but let's say She was just testing them at that time.
^^ Kaguya could deal with Kakashi, Sakura and Obito before they could save Sasuke ending all hope but arrogance is common downfall of villain in most of the manga.
2. Black Zetsu constantly destroying epic Kaguya's presence:
^^ return of Black Zetsu... it was nice move from Kishi at that time, however keeping him in Kaguya's sleeve was very stupid move especially while he was talking through it.
^^ This was the best and last time for Black Zetsu to be talking then make him fade away in kaguya's sleeve.
^^ Black Zetsu Shitting on Kaguya character prime example !
^^ Prime example number two
^^ Again !
JUST THE ONE MOMENT OF KAGUYA's GLORY for her character:
^^ Was it that Hard Kishimoto to keep always only Kaguya talking when she want to talk !, instead of black shit.
HOW COULD IT BE MADE TO IMPROVE KAGUYA's PERFORMANCE:
1) The moment Black Zetsu appeared he should be merged with Kaguya giving her all knowledge/experience of him and what he recorded just replacing or meriging with her mind
2) Kaguya was shown able to create Black Zetsu or black substance of which bz was made of, so it would be better if all of them would talk and then disappear once kaguya get rid of them or doesn't need them
3) Black Zetsu ordering Kaguya around was completly stupid and although there were times where kaguya argued with him or at leat wanted to do something on her own, it was still bad for her character
4) Kaguya should be a little more talkative and not only talk about chakra. Also She should bring some hints to what her plan is so we could know.
^^ Besides plot and some ass pulls which happened since 688 to the end of 689, that all Kishi would do to make her better.
CONCLUSION:
1) I blame Kishi for bad Kaguya's arc, he was just incapable of writting it better. Time limit was not cause of it or at least would be just small part of it.
2) I am not Madara's biggest fun but I hate Black Zetsu's role SINCE Kaguya appeared. HE WAS NOT NEEDED.
Hello guys, It is been a while since I have posted something in Narutobase which last time was about few days after parts of Naruto Bolt the movie were released so we could see battle of Momoshiki and Kinshiki against Naruto and Sasuke and rest of cast. I wasn't interested in to take part in any kind of discussion until I noticed that recently people began to talk about Kaguya again, which always bring me mixed emotions.
Today I will try to prove what were really causes of Kaguya's downfall and poor performance in eyes of readers.
NOTE : I will skip plot reasons that good guys would always win no matter of cost or ridiculous plot. I will also skip partially lack of depth of Kaguya character and rather try to prove and blame Black Zetsu for that.
Ok, so here we go.
1. Chakra obsession:
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^^ It may be good showcase of Kaguya's power or rather it overpowerness in compare to good guys but still it was a just rushing without of thinking too much but let's say She was just testing them at that time.
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^^ Kaguya could deal with Kakashi, Sakura and Obito before they could save Sasuke ending all hope but arrogance is common downfall of villain in most of the manga.
2. Black Zetsu constantly destroying epic Kaguya's presence:
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^^ return of Black Zetsu... it was nice move from Kishi at that time, however keeping him in Kaguya's sleeve was very stupid move especially while he was talking through it.
You must be registered for see images
^^ This was the best and last time for Black Zetsu to be talking then make him fade away in kaguya's sleeve.
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^^ Black Zetsu Shitting on Kaguya character prime example !
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^^ Prime example number two
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^^ Again !
JUST THE ONE MOMENT OF KAGUYA's GLORY for her character:
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^^ Was it that Hard Kishimoto to keep always only Kaguya talking when she want to talk !, instead of black shit.
HOW COULD IT BE MADE TO IMPROVE KAGUYA's PERFORMANCE:
1) The moment Black Zetsu appeared he should be merged with Kaguya giving her all knowledge/experience of him and what he recorded just replacing or meriging with her mind
2) Kaguya was shown able to create Black Zetsu or black substance of which bz was made of, so it would be better if all of them would talk and then disappear once kaguya get rid of them or doesn't need them
3) Black Zetsu ordering Kaguya around was completly stupid and although there were times where kaguya argued with him or at leat wanted to do something on her own, it was still bad for her character
4) Kaguya should be a little more talkative and not only talk about chakra. Also She should bring some hints to what her plan is so we could know.
^^ Besides plot and some ass pulls which happened since 688 to the end of 689, that all Kishi would do to make her better.
CONCLUSION:
1) I blame Kishi for bad Kaguya's arc, he was just incapable of writting it better. Time limit was not cause of it or at least would be just small part of it.
2) I am not Madara's biggest fun but I hate Black Zetsu's role SINCE Kaguya appeared. HE WAS NOT NEEDED.
, However if base decided to bring this topic back to life, then I don't hold back myself from expressing opinion, take it easy.
