To be honest, it's not good. The lighting is way too obvious, and it's very awkward how the shape of the render stands out so much because of that. I'm not really liking the black you used to darken the edges either, and the text isn't good at all on the second.
The text sucks that i'm sure off, the empty sides are very awkward to look at at, and the lightning looks all messed up, that may come from the fact that you don't really have a real light source. Overall, it looks too empty..