can you tell me how to make this picture better

[Silva Master of the six]

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[Od0]

Smooth out all the lines, they look hesitant and it makes it look kinda sloppy (hood, hills, shoulder area). Also, put a little green on that brown hill to make it look even, that's my opinion. Good job though.

 

[Silva Master of the six]

Smooth out all the lines, they look hesitant and it makes it look kinda sloppy (hood, hills, shoulder area). Also, put a little green on that brown hill to make it look even, that's my opinion. Good job though.

Great thanks dude But i have another question can you do it better i really want to see ;D

 

[Ryuu..]

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Smooth out all the lines, they look hesitant and it makes it look kinda sloppy (hood, hills, shoulder area). Also, put a little green on that brown hill to make it look even, that's my opinion. Good job though.

What he said bro, just playing xd

 

[Od0]

It would have to be in like an hour, this was an in between class comment^^

 

[lockcity]

i like it

 

[Od0]

I dont know how to put a picture to make it show on my post, but here are some of the corrections.

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Notice how I started to remove the white areas around the black lines and added the other green area. The line that I added isn't thick enough but you get the point. Also, what software are you using to make this? I'm stuck with pain.net for now because I'm on my laptop and not my editing computer... Just with coloring in the white areas, the lines start to look a lot smoother, that's not all that you need to do, but it's a start. Hope you can see what I'm talking about because my wording can be messed up sometimes.

 

[soulless uchiha]

smooth out the lines

 

[Od0]

Pay attention to the right side where the hills are.

 

[+Kyon+]

Good

 

[coveryoot]

Add more details to the background and some shading on the hoodie, as well smooth out the lines, they doesnt look too bad. Clouds should have some more detail as well.

 

[Silva Master of the six]

Thanks guys im red Editing it now but i put up another project up for later hahah and if you can tell me how to smooth out the lines in ms paint then that would be a great help