[Mystery] Caged Bird

[Ryu Kishi]

Can you hear the music, a
Melody divine. Its
Not of this world,
Its not of mine.

Locked in a cage, there is
No escape, it is my world,
And all there is.

I see the Shadows against the wall, They flicker with light,Yet they still stand tall.

Alone in the dark, alone
In my cage, forever alone
It is my fate.

The shadows they laugh,
The shadows they play.
They hear the melody
They hear it all day.

They take, they keep, they
Throw it away. The
Melody for them; always
will it play.

The shadows, are they
Real? I do not know, the shadows I see, are
Everyone but me.​

 

[fiend]

Dude just fantastic!!! I loved each and every line, got hooked by the complete verse.
Writing is just fantastic, it truly captures the grim mood of a person trapped in a cycle of depression or his own prison.
Last three stanzas were just stunning, it truly describes the despondency, helplessness and anguish of the person trapped, who doesn't want to and now can't escape.<3

Magnificent bro, Solid writing.<3

 

[Ryu Kishi]

Dude just fantastic!!! I loved each and every line, got hooked by the complete verse.
Writing is just fantastic, it truly captures the grim mood of a person trapped in a cycle of depression or his own prison.
Last three stanzas were just stunning, it truly describes the despondency, helplessness and anguish of the person trapped, who doesn't want to and now can't escape.<3

Magnificent bro, Solid writing.<3

Thanks fiendXD

 

[Byron123]

Truly beautiful.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

Truly beautiful.

Thanks bro

 

[Waindo]

Wow....the section is just blooming with poems

This was captivating and fantastic Senpi, keep up the good work!

 

[Ryu Kishi]

Wow....the section is just blooming with poems

This was captivating and fantastic Senpi, keep up the good work!

Welcome back waindo =D and thanks buddy *_*