No sempai sir.Remember wind only makes fire stronger if both jutsu or going in the same direction.
Okay I shall tell you my style of teaching:
I want you to quote me, as this makes it a little easier for me.
I want you to answer these questions, When/how will you use the jutsu? How would you defend against it?
Also in your descriptions, you will be attacking my clone, so I want it like you are actually in a spar with him.
Also the least amount I want you to write is four lines for your description and two lines per question.
Also use this template please:
How to Perform the Technique:
How would you defend againist this Technique:
How would you use this use this technique:
Any questions?
I start off by gathering fire chakra in my stomach. Then i transfer it to my lungs then to my mouth. As i exhale i mold the fire into balls. I shoot the ball toward the paper your hitting it and your fingers.Good, for your first jutsu:
(Katon: Ryu Kaen Bakufuu) - Fire Release: Dragon Flame Blitz
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user shoots balls of fire at the opponent.
Alright gather in your fire chakra and then release it through your mouth as you exhale. Mold the fire chakra into balls of fire...
I pull out a piece of paper, now make it strong enough to burn this >.>
*I start by gathering fire chakra in my stomach. Then i transfer it to my mouth as i do i take out three shurikens and throw them with my right hand. As i throw them i exhale the fire chakra onto the shurikens. Then i mold the chakra so the shurikens catch on fire.*Please separate your questions and your description.
Moving on:
(Katon: Kaen Shuriken Ranbu) - Fire Release: Blazing Shuriken Dance
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will throw several shuriken at the enemy and then inflames them with fire to cause extra damage.
As you throw shurikens at your opponent(s) quickly release your fire chakra unto them and mold it so the shurikens will be engulfed in flames for added strength...
"creates clone"
*I start by gathering fire chakra in my stomach. I then transfer my chakra to my mouth. I exhale the chakra from my mouth as i do so i mold it into a ball an aim it toward your clone making it poof away.*Good, moving on:
(Katon: Komakai Kaki) - Fire Style: Small fire
Rank: D
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user spews a small fireball.
Basically like the first jutsu O_O
"creates clone"
*I start by gathering my fire chakra in my lungs. Then i condense it into tiny particules. I perform the handseals. Then i exhale out my fire chakra into a fine mist all around your clone. I then strike two shurikens together creating a spark that ignites the mist into a huge fireball making your clone poof away.*Good, but remember the minimum:
(Katon: Kasumi Endu no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Mist Covering Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.
Alright gather up your chakra into your lungs. Then as you get ready to exhale condense the chakra into little particles so that it will be a mist when it comes out of your mouth. Also use your fire chakra so that once the mist gets in contact with fire it will ignite into a large fireball...
"creates clone"
*I start by gathering my fire chakra in my stomach. I the transfer my fire chakra to my mouth. I then exhale my fire chakra and then i ignite it making a small stream of fire. I then aim it at your clone setting it on fire.*Hmm, I hope I say this the last time...please remember the minimum.
Good, moving on:
(Katon: Shōkasou) - Fire Release: Small Fire Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique.
Alright gather in your fire chakra. As you do this, you exhale and release your chakra at the same time. As it comes out your mouth ignite your chakra and turn it into a small short flame...this is basically a small flame thrower.
"creates clone"