[Romance] Broken Heart

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Tear the starlit sky apart,
Heal that wounded broken heart,
Reach out for the women you love,
Fly as far as a mourning dove.


Over the fiery Mountains,
Across the treacherous Seas,
Through the strongest Blizzards,
Beyond the murkiest of Trees.


Reach out, reach out while there's still time,
Do not lose sight of that narrow path,
If you can't follow,
You will never be free.


Free of the sorrow that broke that heart,
Free of the chains that pulled you apart,
Her lingering hand within your reach,
Your mumbling voice, your faltering speech.


Her giggling sounds lights the way,
The fading star, the fading rays,
Her beautiful smile makes your day,
Breathes life back into that wounded old heart.


Her tender touch, her soft skin,
Become whole once more, fix that broken fin,
Finally within your reach,
Time slows down, but you've regained your speech.


Your strenght, your passion, it's all coming back,
Hands come together, it's a brand new start,
Newfound love on the horizon,
No more pain, no more sorrow.


You are finally free...







Something I wrote last year that I had completely forgot about,
so I thought why not upload it for the heck of it even if this place is dead, lol.


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Other Poems:


* My Love for you, our bond is true ->[1]

* Lost Love ->[2]

* He stands yet a man ->[3]

* Reaper ->[4]

* Identity ->[5]

* Moral Story: Something to think about ->[6]

* Zorro ->[7]

* The Death of a Dragon ->[8]

* Together United, NB Will Rise Again ->[9]

* In the Shadows the Lone King Dwells... ->[10]
 
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This is really good ^.^ idk how you could forget about something like this!

The rhyming pattern is so unexpected but its good because it reflects the style of the poem, it starts off quite pessimistic and then it changes and becomes a good, hopeful ending.

This is really good, you should post poems like this more often, or a place where it is writing-based.
 
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This is really good ^.^ idk how you could forget about something like this!

The rhyming pattern is so unexpected but its good because it reflects the style of the poem, it starts off quite pessimistic and then it changes and becomes a good, hopeful ending.

This is really good, you should post poems like this more often, or a place where it is writing-based.
Well it's far from what I consider good as it's more random rhyming that anything else it feels like xd I don't feel as confident about it as I do with my writing on the Base let's say, haha. And I wrote it at the same time as the poem in link number 10 in this thread (In the Shadows the Lone King Dwells) so I kind of focused on releasing that since I like it more and just forgot this existed xP Number 3, 4, 5 and 10 are probably the only ones I like of the ones I wrote to be honest xP, but glad you found it interesting =D

Yeah well it couldn't end all bad xd Think I got the idea to write it after watching a movie but I can't recall which one it was, haha.

10 Poems and one random text is more than enough I'd say though xP Check them out if you will, but I'm positive this will be the last, at least one the Base 8)
 
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