[Romance] Broken as a glass

[Kishi Uzumaki]

I wake in the morning looking
If your are here with me
then i remember you
left me long ago


thinking you will come to save me
I was waiting
waiting all alone
but you never came to me
breaking my heart Like a glass

I thought of the days i were happy
I don't know where the happiness
I felt have gone
It's darkness
That swallows me broken as a glass

 

[Braveknight]

Well,

I could not understand any thing from this Grammar mistakes

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Well,

I could not understand any thing from this Grammar mistakes

sorry bro . it's first try in English although I'm good writing poems in my language .

 

[Luffy324]

not bad at all... great job..

 

[dark dreams]

nice so sad

 

[darkprince]

Great job.