Both Mangekyou

[dtninja831]

This is my interpretation of this week's chapter of Naruto.
I figured I'd share it here since I do these every week.
Tell me your thoughts on my writing. Criticism is welcome,

Both Mangekyou

Madara‘s in shock at what he sees
Obito defying gravity
As Madara strikes him in the face
There’s nothing there, only space

He pulls so deep into his chest
Gaining power, it’s time to test
That strategy to get Naruto back
Let’s make this our final act

Madara sends them a blast so quick
Kakashi and Obito are just as swift
Twice as fast those eyes can travel
Taking Naruto out of the battle

Kakashi, don’t you see?
This time I will be the lead
Those days we spent as a team
I’ll keep them in my memories

Madara, you don’t even see
the true power of this badass tag team
They act so quickly ready to fight
Both Mangekyou sharingan!! That’s right

Obito escapes into the sphere
Ready to give Naruto the kyuubi’s power right here
He tells Sakura he’s changed for the best
All that’s left to do is put Madara to rest

Back on the field someone has arrived
to fight Madara, It’s Gai!!

 

[PsykoticGodd]

haha love it... and pretty good at summing up everything

 

[ShiroShonen]

You're good at this

 

[SIR UZMAKIMADARA]

its nice and i like it

 

[Gdamon]

excellent job that was great...

poetry is definitely your fate...

 

[riley freeman]

not bad at all

 

[VongolaX]

Defying gravity?

 

[itachi uchiha fiance]

it is so well written that i read it twice.

 

[dms_kakashi]

i must say :well done

 

[dtninja831]

Wow, thanks for all your kind words, lol I do these at the beginning of all my Naruto discussions, but reviews can be repetitive and it's better to discuss and ask questions about the chapter. So I do my review in the form of a poem,

thanks again, I might just upload these each week,