I'd prefer something more original and unique than what's basically a mix of Rasengan and Jyuuken, but I wouldn't put it past Kishi to do exactly that.
Yea but don't forget Sasuke's influence, he becomes a Raiton user.
I think a combination of Rasengan, Jyuuken, and Raiton is original enough while still staying relevant to his context, besides, more taijutsu is always better than just spamming 1 technique.
I would be very impressed if Kishi actually did this, although he will probably just give him Naruto's techs or something.
<div class="bbWrapper">Rasengan punches and a mini, rotating, electric forcefield sounds OP as hell and pretty damn legit. I can imagine him doing the rasengan punch and appearing behind them and repeating thing. Nice job.</div>
He will have hybrid version of Rotation
He will have taijutsu like Neji (people were saying Boruto is a reference to Neji)
He will have stronger version of Rasengan
He will be a sensor
He will have chakra cloak
Rasengan punches and a mini, rotating, electric forcefield sounds OP as hell and pretty damn legit. I can imagine him doing the rasengan punch and appearing behind them and repeating thing. Nice job.
Interesting ideas. To add to it, I thought of a jutsu called kaiten torpedo where Bolt makes about 10 shadow clones. They all jump into the air. 5 of them start doing kaiten in mid air while the other 5 come and kick the 5 rotating Bolt's at the opponent. Basically, the rotating Bolts will be like torpedoes of rotating chakara.
Also, Sarada's mangekyou sharingan looks interesting. What abilities does she have?
Interesting ideas. To add to it, I thought of a jutsu called kaiten torpedo where Bolt makes about 10 shadow clones. They all jump into the air. 5 of them start doing kaiten in mid air while the other 5 come and kick the 5 rotating Bolt's at the opponent. Basically, the rotating Bolts will be like torpedoes of rotating chakara.
Also, Sarada's mangekyou sharingan looks interesting. What abilities does she have?
Boruto covers his fists with Rasengan-like chakra and uses taijutsu similar to gentle fist, he can also do a full body version which acts similar to kaiten, except it rotates by itself, so he can freely move while being in it.
Is that not the same as Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists, but ultimately weaker?
Databook:
柔歩双獅拳 Juuho Soushiken (Gentle Step: Twin Lion Fists)
Taijutsu, Kekkei Genkai, Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary, Short Range
拳に宿す強き意思！！
Strong will held in the fists!!
その姿双頭の獅子の如し！！
Its form is double lion heads!!
日向一族の中でも宗家にしか伝わっていない、柔拳秘伝高等体術。両手から放出するチャクラを形 態変化させる ことで、リーチと破壊力を格段に向上させる。その腕はまるで獅子のような様相を呈し、触れた相 手の経絡系を 喰らい尽くすのだ。
A secret high-level juuken technique, taught only to the main family of the Hyuuga clan. By changing the shape of chakra released from both hands, [the user] greatly increases reach and destructive power. The arms become entirely like lions which drain the chakra network of those they touch.
チャクラコントロールを少しでも誤ると失敗するため、習得は極めて困難緻密な技量と“白眼”が あればこその 芸当である。
Because it will fail at even the slightest mistake in chakra control, it is extremely difficult to learn this ability, which is a feat that requires the Byakugan.
Caption:
“八卦六十四掌”の威力を底上げすることができる。
It can be used to increase the power of Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms.
After undergoing extensive training with Uchiha Sasuke, Boruto's fighting style evolves into Rasenraiken. With improvements in power and elemental affinity as well as drastic improvements in speed.
It would be an interesting twist if Boruto could canonically control his speed to the level of KCM/BM and Minato/Sasuke's Shushin feats. That would make the most literal sense in why he was named "Bolt" as in screw, but also in the English term, Lightning Bolt. Not to mention his Grandfather is the Yellow Flash, and his father also has incredible speed feats when combined with Kyuubi's chakra. It would be a shame for him not to develop the continuation of their line, with speed, and no one is helping him in that category better than Sasuke Uchiha whose Shusin feats are great.
Honestly this felt really lack luster to all the abilities you gave Salad/Sarada Uchiha. Despite not having superior KKG abilities that can be unlocked, what Boruto does have is the potential to learn most techniques (with the required elements that he does have). Superior chakra control runs in his blood as his father mastered shape manipulation while applying an elemental advantage, and Hinata despite not having the greatest spotlight in fights, her clan techniques require an aptitude of chakra control.
It would be an interesting thing for you to create a rotation of sorts that involve the Raiton chakra release for Boruto, in which he expels something similar to a Chidori current, but unlike the chidori, it manifests with the rotation. - An idea
Since in this 'fan fiction' Boruto is training with Sasuke, and Sasuke alone, I would hope for him to learn more powerful abilities that put him on a higher level, or close to the level of an MS user. I doubt it is in Sasuke's ability to not show Boruto some kind of way to enhance his own body since Orochimaru also fed him the same way (by increasing his durability with venoms etc), I see no reason for Sasuke not to amplify what he already has to completely put him on his limits.
Overall it's lacking; Power, Speed, versatility, and structure.
Grade; C-
Edit; When I am talking about the speed, I am mentioning on base alone, rather than a technique amplifying it. It works too though, but it would be cooler for him to have both.
Is that not the same as Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists, but ultimately weaker?
Databook:
柔歩双獅拳 Juuho Soushiken (Gentle Step: Twin Lion Fists)
Taijutsu, Kekkei Genkai, Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary, Short Range
拳に宿す強き意思！！
Strong will held in the fists!!
その姿双頭の獅子の如し！！
Its form is double lion heads!!
日向一族の中でも宗家にしか伝わっていない、柔拳秘伝高等体術。両手から放出するチャクラを形 態変化させる ことで、リーチと破壊力を格段に向上させる。その腕はまるで獅子のような様相を呈し、触れた相 手の経絡系を 喰らい尽くすのだ。
A secret high-level juuken technique, taught only to the main family of the Hyuuga clan. By changing the shape of chakra released from both hands, [the user] greatly increases reach and destructive power. The arms become entirely like lions which drain the chakra network of those they touch.
チャクラコントロールを少しでも誤ると失敗するため、習得は極めて困難緻密な技量と“白眼”が あればこその 芸当である。
Because it will fail at even the slightest mistake in chakra control, it is extremely difficult to learn this ability, which is a feat that requires the Byakugan.
Caption:
“八卦六十四掌”の威力を底上げすることができる。
It can be used to increase the power of Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms.
Now tell me, what does more damage, a single twin lion fist strike or a Rasengan? It's the Rasengan no doubt.
After all, Boruto is enhancing his Taijutsu with Ninjutsu, he basically covers his fists with Rasengans and continuously beats the target, its extremely powerful, and would consume a lot of chakra, but Boruto handles it because of his large chakra reserves from being an Uzumaki.
Superior chakra control runs in his blood as his father mastered shape manipulation while applying an elemental advantage, and Hinata despite not having the greatest spotlight in fights, her clan techniques require an aptitude of chakra control.
After undergoing extensive training with Uchiha Sasuke, Boruto's fighting style evolves into Rasenraiken. With improvements in power and elemental affinity as well as drastic improvements in speed.
It would be an interesting thing for you to create a rotation of sorts that involve the Raiton chakra release for Boruto, in which he expels something similar to a Chidori current, but unlike the chidori, it manifests with the rotation. - An idea
Honestly this felt really lack luster to all the abilities you gave Salad/Sarada Uchiha.
Since in this 'fan fiction' Boruto is training with Sasuke, and Sasuke alone, I would hope for him to learn more powerful abilities that put him on a higher level, or close to the level of an MS user. I doubt it is in Sasuke's ability to not show Boruto some kind of way to enhance his own body since Orochimaru also fed him the same way (by increasing his durability with venoms etc), I see no reason for Sasuke not to amplify what he already has to completely put him on his limits.
Yea like I told you, I developed Sarada more so far, just to put things in perspective timeline wise, Boruto initially developed his Rasenken style from training partly with his father, and also with the Hyuuga clan, until the age of 11. That's when Sasuke came and trained him for 2 years to achieve Rasenraiken, up till that point Sarada had mastered Byakugou and only just unlocked MS, then Sasuke came back and trained her further. You might need to refer to the other thread to understand. Here are both characters at different time periods:
Regular Sarada || Rasenken Boruto.
Byakugou Sarada || Rasenraiken Boruto.
MS Sarada || ??? Boruto.
I developed Sarada further ahead than Boruto.
Boruto would also experience another improvement after Sasuke leaves that matches MS Sarada.
While I feel you didn't quite understand what I was portraying, (maybe I needed to provide more explainations), I appreciate your feedback! Hopefully this cleared things up. =D
