Bon Odori

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Basic Information
Name: Bon Odori
Nickname: Dancing Flame
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Clan:

Looks: Bon Odori is tall and lanky. At 210 cm and 80 kilos, his lithe body moves with swift grace. His meticulously groomed hair is auburn in color and silky in texture, parted to the left. His blue eyes are ever alert and focused. Preferring the trappings of polite society, Odori dresses in tailored suits and overcoats of various colors. His favorite is white with a red dress shirt. Adorning his neck, he wears a bolo tie with a black slider that doubles as a whistle. He carries with him a tambourine strung over his shoulder and a pair of kama holstered at his hip.

Personality: Charming and polite, Bon Odori enjoys the good things in life. Wine, women and song aren't his only three vices, but they are his principal ones. He enjoys fine spirits of all sorts and often drinks in social settings. When he hears a tune, he can't help but drum along with the beat and start dancing. He will grab nearby beautiful women and spin them around, involving them in his dance often. He holds no grudge, except for those who are kill-joys or ruin a good time. Quiet unnerves him, and he will often sing to himself to break tense silences.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Otogakure
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty:
Elements: Katon
Your ninjutsu:


(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)




Background Info.
History: Found wandering dazed as an adolescent away from Otogakure, Odori was brought to Konoha by an ANBU team looking for information about Orochimaru. The intelligence team probed him, but could only retrieve the memory of a lullaby, and an image of what was assumed to be his mother, dancing with him to the tune. Untrusted at first, he quickly gained friends with his warm, fun-loving personality. He remembers nothing from before his recovery, and made his way as a musician until his enrollment into the academy. Under scrutiny, he passed all tests of loyalty and ability. He now makes his way as Ninja of Konoha, illuminating the dark spaces, while searching for his own light.

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Well you kinda put your history inside the spoiler tag for the E-Rank jutsu.

Besides that the only thing I see wrong is the element. Put what element you want to learn first under that section.
 

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Basic Information
Name: Bon Odori
Nickname: Dancing Flame
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Clan:

Looks: Bon Odori is tall and lanky. At 210 cm and 80 kilos, his lithe body moves with swift grace. His meticulously groomed hair is auburn in color and silky in texture, parted to the left. His blue eyes are ever alert and focused. Preferring the trappings of polite society, Odori dresses in tailored suits and overcoats of various colors. His favorite is white with a red dress shirt. Adorning his neck, he wears a bolo tie with a black slider that doubles as a whistle. He carries with him a tambourine strung over his shoulder and a pair of kama holstered at his hip.

Personality: Charming and polite, Bon Odori enjoys the good things in life. Wine, women and song aren't his only three vices, but they are his principal ones. He enjoys fine spirits of all sorts and often drinks in social settings. When he hears a tune, he can't help but drum along with the beat and start dancing. He will grab nearby beautiful women and spin them around, involving them in his dance often. He holds no grudge, except for those who are kill-joys or ruin a good time. Quiet unnerves him, and he will often sing to himself to break tense silences.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Otogakure
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty:
Elements: Katon
Your ninjutsu:


(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)




(Katon: Komakai Kaki) - Fire Style: Small fire
Rank: D
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user spews a small fireball.

(Katon: Kasumi Endu no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Mist Covering Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.

(Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.

(Katon: Kimuchi Amura) - Fire Style:
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user first throws out a lighter that has an open flame.The user the turns the flame into a wall of fire used for protection or to burn small objects thrown towards him. This jutsu can be used with Hurricane Fist to create a combo jutsu.

(Katon: Hibashiri) - Fire Style: Racing Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: User utilizes his fire chakra and then creates jets of fire which will race towards his target and surround him or he can generate a rotating ring made of fire which he will launch towards his target. It can be used in combination with a wind jutsu to make the attack more powerful.

(Katon: Ryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Flame Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user breathes fire along a cord, string or any other type of long object.

(Katon: Boya Kasui ) – Fire Release: Small Fire Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a small short ranged stream of flame at the opponent, cuasing them to collapse. The move requires no hand seals.

(Katon: Hosenka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shuriken within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. For the most part, however, this jutsu is used as a distraction.

(Katon: Karyu Endan) - Fire Style: Dragon Flame Bomb
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique exhales a long stream of incredibly hot fire from the user's mouth like that of a flamethrower. The fire can spread along the ground.

(Katon: Bakuhatsu Enhogan) – Fire Style: Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

(Katon: Hiendan) – Fire Release: Soaring Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense, Deffence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fire Ball technique.

(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

(Katon:Gouenka)-Fire Style:Fire Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spits three fireballs that combine in mid-air into one giant fireball.

(Katon: Haisekisho) - Fire Style: Combustion Ash Cloud
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.





Background Info.
History: Found wandering dazed as an adolescent away from Otogakure, Odori was brought to Konoha by an ANBU team looking for information about Orochimaru. The intelligence team probed him, but could only retrieve the memory of a lullaby, and an image of what was assumed to be his mother, dancing with him to the tune. Untrusted at first, he quickly gained friends with his warm, fun-loving personality. He remembers nothing from before his recovery, and made his way as a musician until his enrollment into the academy. Under scrutiny, he passed all tests of loyalty and ability. He now makes his way as Ninja of Konoha, illuminating the dark spaces, while searching for his own light.

Other

Picture:

Theme Song and Background Music: Clutch - Subtle Hustle

Battles

Won:
Lost:
 
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