(I’m back! A little poem opens it. Enjoy, if I say anything more I’ll take away the suspense)
{For extra horror and suspense, play this the whole time: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfj3EG1qZRU&feature=related}
Buildings past by quickly as sweat dripped, dripped.
They begin instilling a most chilling thrilling of her blood spilling after her killing. Bewilderment suffocates her.
Misery, its partner.
The pain of her being slain, her blood being drained, on the night of torrential rain!
She dazed, amazed, and fazed.
But then the bells, they tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, and tolled.
She tripped, and next morning, awoke.
Sun poured onto her face as she awoke, startled. Her long, silky black hair flowed down her heart-thumped chest. Her black eyes peered at where she was. Two columns of modest buildings were evenly laid out in front of her. She woke up yelling, “SON, PLEASE STOP!” She felt that the night before, of her frantic running was but a dream, but twas not so. ‘Where am I?’ She perused the area, but just found barren fields, the buildings, and a wall with a sign that read “District 80, Ru” and the rest was smudged out. One child finally stepped outside of her home. She asked the girl, “Excuse me, where am I?”
“You don’t know? Go to Inchiki in District 8, that way!” The little, scruffy girl said as she pointed to the left.
“OK, thank you!” She walked to District 8, and found it bustling with people. She asked around and finally found Inchiki. His building looked very pleasant and congenial. She walked into the room full of smiling faces and went to the front desk. “Is Inchiki here?”
“Of course, follow me”
She followed the lady into a giant room with pictures of people with unbelievably huge grins. A man walked up to her after the secretary left. “What is your name, Miss?”
“Uchiha Shinda”
“Ah, what a wonderful name! A jolly name indeed! What was the reason of your arrival here?”
“I wish to know where I am”
“Well, that is not important, but it is a rather good question to ask indeed! Now, why did you arrive here?” He grinned bigger and his white teeth sparkled.
“I don’t know why I’m here or how I got here”
“I was willing to let that other idiotic question slip, but now I can see you truly want to play games with me” His grin melted into a scowl. “We all got here the same way, do not be stupid, Miss! I need to know WHY you are here? How did it happen?”
“How did what?”
“I see you’re still playing games. Fine then” He wrote on a piece of paper, folded it, and placed a lock on it. “Do NOT open this. Take it to Uttoushii of District 5”
Shinda took the paper and left the room. As she exited the building she noticed what it was, a building of Euthanasia.
‘What’s in this paper? Why is everyone just directing me to a new person? I must know its contents!’ She stopped herself from opening it.
District 5 had dark grey buildings with extremely poor people. She found a run-down building that said “Uttoushii’s”. She entered and found an old, decrepit man. “Hello. I am Uchiha Shinda. A man named Inchiki wanted me to hand this to Uttoushii”
“I am he. Hand it to me please,” she did so and then he spoke, “Follow me to my office”
They passed cells of people yelling at walls, crying at nothing, slitting their wrists, and even acting as animals.
‘What a peculiar place!’
They entered a room and the man opened the lock, and read the contents. “Amnesia, huh?”
“What?”
“I see. So that is why you are here in this mental institute”
“No! I can explain!”
“Please do”
“I was in the Land of Grass, and my son used the legendary Amaterasu on me to burn me and I thought I died, but I guess I haven’t! I just don’t know where I am!”
“Well, before I send you to someone, I will at least remind you of where you are, Rukongai. Does that ring a bell? What you were saying was nonsense”
“No it doesn’t remind me of anything”
“What a horrible case! Here, look at this picture and find this man in District 1”
She took it and ran. District one had a moderate amount of people, and nicer buildings. She ran, and ran. ‘I’m getting out of here! They think I have amnesia? They’re crazy!’
She bumped into someone. “I’m sorry. Excuse…” She stopped, and saw the man that was on the photo.
“Yes?”
“I was told to meet you. Look, I am Uchiha Shinda. I thought I died in the Land of Grass..”
“You obviously did die if you’re here”
“What?”
“Oh, I will excuse your rudeness and stupidity because you have a terrible case of amnesia”
“I’m dead? Who are you?” She was stepping back.
“Yes, Welcome to Soul Society. Let’s get you back to your cell. By the way, I’m the 6th division Captain, Kuchiki Byakuya”
As stated in the trailer, I will release the first chapter on June 11th, Western Coast of US time 3:00 PM. That way it'll be summer, and I'll have time to write a lot more. How was this little taste?
{For extra horror and suspense, play this the whole time: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfj3EG1qZRU&feature=related}
Buildings past by quickly as sweat dripped, dripped.
They begin instilling a most chilling thrilling of her blood spilling after her killing. Bewilderment suffocates her.
Misery, its partner.
The pain of her being slain, her blood being drained, on the night of torrential rain!
She dazed, amazed, and fazed.
But then the bells, they tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, tolled, and tolled.
She tripped, and next morning, awoke.
Sun poured onto her face as she awoke, startled. Her long, silky black hair flowed down her heart-thumped chest. Her black eyes peered at where she was. Two columns of modest buildings were evenly laid out in front of her. She woke up yelling, “SON, PLEASE STOP!” She felt that the night before, of her frantic running was but a dream, but twas not so. ‘Where am I?’ She perused the area, but just found barren fields, the buildings, and a wall with a sign that read “District 80, Ru” and the rest was smudged out. One child finally stepped outside of her home. She asked the girl, “Excuse me, where am I?”
“You don’t know? Go to Inchiki in District 8, that way!” The little, scruffy girl said as she pointed to the left.
“OK, thank you!” She walked to District 8, and found it bustling with people. She asked around and finally found Inchiki. His building looked very pleasant and congenial. She walked into the room full of smiling faces and went to the front desk. “Is Inchiki here?”
“Of course, follow me”
She followed the lady into a giant room with pictures of people with unbelievably huge grins. A man walked up to her after the secretary left. “What is your name, Miss?”
“Uchiha Shinda”
“Ah, what a wonderful name! A jolly name indeed! What was the reason of your arrival here?”
“I wish to know where I am”
“Well, that is not important, but it is a rather good question to ask indeed! Now, why did you arrive here?” He grinned bigger and his white teeth sparkled.
“I don’t know why I’m here or how I got here”
“I was willing to let that other idiotic question slip, but now I can see you truly want to play games with me” His grin melted into a scowl. “We all got here the same way, do not be stupid, Miss! I need to know WHY you are here? How did it happen?”
“How did what?”
“I see you’re still playing games. Fine then” He wrote on a piece of paper, folded it, and placed a lock on it. “Do NOT open this. Take it to Uttoushii of District 5”
Shinda took the paper and left the room. As she exited the building she noticed what it was, a building of Euthanasia.
‘What’s in this paper? Why is everyone just directing me to a new person? I must know its contents!’ She stopped herself from opening it.
District 5 had dark grey buildings with extremely poor people. She found a run-down building that said “Uttoushii’s”. She entered and found an old, decrepit man. “Hello. I am Uchiha Shinda. A man named Inchiki wanted me to hand this to Uttoushii”
“I am he. Hand it to me please,” she did so and then he spoke, “Follow me to my office”
They passed cells of people yelling at walls, crying at nothing, slitting their wrists, and even acting as animals.
‘What a peculiar place!’
They entered a room and the man opened the lock, and read the contents. “Amnesia, huh?”
“What?”
“I see. So that is why you are here in this mental institute”
“No! I can explain!”
“Please do”
“I was in the Land of Grass, and my son used the legendary Amaterasu on me to burn me and I thought I died, but I guess I haven’t! I just don’t know where I am!”
“Well, before I send you to someone, I will at least remind you of where you are, Rukongai. Does that ring a bell? What you were saying was nonsense”
“No it doesn’t remind me of anything”
“What a horrible case! Here, look at this picture and find this man in District 1”
She took it and ran. District one had a moderate amount of people, and nicer buildings. She ran, and ran. ‘I’m getting out of here! They think I have amnesia? They’re crazy!’
She bumped into someone. “I’m sorry. Excuse…” She stopped, and saw the man that was on the photo.
“Yes?”
“I was told to meet you. Look, I am Uchiha Shinda. I thought I died in the Land of Grass..”
“You obviously did die if you’re here”
“What?”
“Oh, I will excuse your rudeness and stupidity because you have a terrible case of amnesia”
“I’m dead? Who are you?” She was stepping back.
“Yes, Welcome to Soul Society. Let’s get you back to your cell. By the way, I’m the 6th division Captain, Kuchiki Byakuya”
As stated in the trailer, I will release the first chapter on June 11th, Western Coast of US time 3:00 PM. That way it'll be summer, and I'll have time to write a lot more. How was this little taste?
