[Bleruto FF lol] The girl with blessed eyes: Chapter I

[Vilvake]

Yes, I really like to misspell words -.-''''

I wasn't trying to be insulting, sometimes (though rarely) words are purposefully spelled wrong to give writing uniqueness or deeper meaning to the subject matter. For example, if a book is in a journal format written by a young character, spelling mistakes could add detail and a sense of realism.

I wasn't really questioning your mistakes until I saw "beautifoul". That's a pretty ironic/coincidental error because beautiful and foul are antonyms. Sorry for the confusion, I probably should have elaborated in my original reply.

 

[Hikari Uchiha Senju]

I wasn't trying to be insulting, sometimes (though rarely) words are purposefully spelled wrong to give writing uniqueness or deeper meaning to the subject matter. For example, if a book is in a journal format written by a young character, spelling mistakes could add detail and a sense of realism.

I wasn't really questioning your mistakes until I saw "beautifoul". That's a pretty ironic/coincidental error because beautiful and foul are antonyms. Sorry for the confusion, I probably should have elaborated in my original reply.

I'm so sorry, I thought you were mocking me

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[Manicherryblossom33]

This is cool. Nice job.

 

[Hikari Uchiha Senju]

This is cool. Nice job.

Thank you

 

[~Uzumaki~]

I don't like to start a story midway so I went to the first chapter. Seems like it could be a good story. A few spelling mistakes here and there but as one can observe from the story's reception, the plot is an interesting premise. I would urge you deeply to work on spelling and keeping thins in the right tense. Perhaps a bit more description won't hurt.

 

[sandy uzumaki]

Except for those spelling mistakes you make an amazing author ! =D

 

[Hikari Uchiha Senju]

I don't like to start a story midway so I went to the first chapter. Seems like it could be a good story. A few spelling mistakes here and there but as one can observe from the story's reception, the plot is an interesting premise. I would urge you deeply to work on spelling and keeping thins in the right tense. Perhaps a bit more description won't hurt.

Ok, thanks

Except for those spelling mistakes you make an amazing author ! =D

Thank you

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

I couldn't determine whether or not if this story is slice of life-like or has a supernatural/fantasy element. However, that remains a mysteries are always good as it drives the reader for more ^^ Hisana is a wounded soul and appears to want to help others who have been in her shoes more or less. Itachi seems cool and their relationship is described as childhood friends but it appears as though perhaps there is something more going on lol Nice chapter overall and looking forward to see how this story progresses