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Sorry about last week, I completely forgot, and this week I've been busy. Hopefully you can forgive me. Here is Chapter Six 
Chapter 6: "An Adjuchas's Honor"
Kalin: Who's next?
She stands up.
Kalin: That was easy
Tamo: There's another Hollow. Let's go.
Kalin: Which way?
Tamo: ...This way.
They come across a ginormous Hollow.
Kalin: Hm...this one's huge.
Kalin charges lighting into a ball.
Tamo: It's got such a dense Hierro. Maybe as durable as Ravi's Hierro, I reckon.
Kalin: I'll try to take this one down with my new move.
Kalin rotates her hands, and moves them apart, and the ball gets bigger.
Kalin: It's ready.
Kalin fires the massive ball straight at the Hollow. The giant hollow feels nothing and continues walking.
Tamo: Looks like that lightning ball needs a lot more work.
Kalin: Yeah, but that's not important.
Ravi shunidos at the giant hollow, and uses his favorite signature move. The giant hollow almost falls over. It fires a Cero Gigante of such magnitude it could destroy for miles.
Tamo: Holy shit!? Get out of here!
Kalin: Oh wow.
Kalin uses the lightning to gain speed to run. All three get the hell out of there... As soon as it ends, they come back.
Tamo: Looks like I'll have to take it down. Cero Herida!
Tamo launches a large scale version of Cero Herida. It leaves a small dent in the dense armor. Kalin forms a lightning blade.
Kalin: Shouldn't there be a soft spot?
Kalin starts move her hands to form the Star of David. As she moved her hands, the lightning sword multiplies. Ravi launches a larger scale violet Cero Herida.
Ravi: Cero Herida.
It makes a larger dent, but doesn't quite reach the soft insides.
Ravi: Hmmm....
He fires a fused version of Sokatsui and Shakkahō.
Kalin: That should've weakened the armor enough that my swords should break through.
Tamo: Go ahead, it's all yours for that shot.
Kalin moves her hands towards her face, then pushes them away from her...the swords disappear; then reappear around the hollow.
Kalin: Hope this works.
Kalin crosses her arms, and the swords fly at the hollow with great speed behind them. The swords make a small explosion.
Kalin: Did I get it?
Tamo: I know what will do the trick. It's a Cero I recently perfected. Cero Perforante!
A cero in the shape of a long and slender cone with a base having the shape of three commas fused together. Cero Perforante shoots faster than any cero, heading straight for the giant Hollow. It pierces the adamantine armor easily, and blows up the Hollow. Kalin was quiet for a bit.
Kalin: So how many hollows do we have to kill anyways?
Ravi: About 3 Adjuchas class Menos, including any other hollows we face.
Kalin: Okay.
Tamo: Why do I get the feeling this Hollow was similar to Yammy Llargo?
Kalin: Who?
Tamo: Yammy Llargo is the most powerful Espada. Normally he's number 10, but when he does Resurrección, his number changes to 0. Espada are ranked 0-9.
Kalin: So how is he an Espada before resurrection?
Tamo: He's weak when he doesn't do Resurrección. Espada are just Arrancar ranked 0-9, but they are the strongest Arrancar. Arrancars aren't Espada unless they're ranked 0-9. For those Arrancar, they are called Números. Some Números Arrancar are specially selected as an Espada's subordinate, known as Fracción. Former Espada are called Privaron Espada. There used to be a group called Exequias. The sole and true member is Rudobon Chelute. He creates Calaveras with his Resurrección, Arbol, those Calaveras make up the Exequias.
Kalin: I see.
One Adjuchas appears.
In a gruff voice; ???: What's all this ruckus?
(I know this is Grimmjow, but lets just say if this were an Arrancar, he'd have Gato as his Resurrección)
Tamo: Aha, an Adjuchas class Menos.
Kalin: Okay, compared to the last hollow we killed, how strong is he?
Tamo: Oh far stronger, and considering this is a Cat-like Adjuchas, it may be quite nimble.
Kalin: I see, so my thousand swords wouldn't work on this guy.
???: I am Fellis Catos. What are you doing here in my domain?(Fellis is said "feyis", if you remember double Ls being a "y")
Ravi: I am truly sorry, but we are here on a mission to take down 3 Adjuchas class Menos. You are an Adjuchas, therefore we shall take you down.
Fellis: What?! How dare you?
Fellis rushes forward like a cheetah. Ravi merely holds his hand out. Fellis bites it.
Ravi: Did you think biting my hand would hurt me?
Fellis is surprised and jumps back realized he almost fell in a trap. Ravi's hand is undamaged, with the white sleeve a bit shredded.
Kalin: Ravi, are you okay?
Tamo: Ravi is the only person I know who has the toughest skin. He has a Hierro that's hard as diamond.
Kalin(relieved): Oh. Just let me know when you want me to attack.
Tamo: Your attacks would be good for distractions. I'll let you know. Hey, Ravi, can I take this one by myself?
Ravi: Go ahead.
Tamo: I am Tamo.
Fellis: Tamo, the one who took down 10,000 Hollow?
Tamo: Why, yes. I'm surprised you know who I am.
Fellis: It would be an honor to fight you, Tamo-sama.
Tamo: I don't have to resurrect, do I?
Fellis: Maybe.(growls, tail wagging in anticipation to strike)
Fellis strikes.
Tell me what you think so far. Any critics, or helpful tips much appreciated.
Volume 1 Part One
Prologue
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
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Chapter 6: "An Adjuchas's Honor"
Kalin: Who's next?
She stands up.
Kalin: That was easy
Tamo: There's another Hollow. Let's go.
Kalin: Which way?
Tamo: ...This way.
They come across a ginormous Hollow.
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Kalin: Hm...this one's huge.
Kalin charges lighting into a ball.
Tamo: It's got such a dense Hierro. Maybe as durable as Ravi's Hierro, I reckon.
Kalin: I'll try to take this one down with my new move.
Kalin rotates her hands, and moves them apart, and the ball gets bigger.
Kalin: It's ready.
Kalin fires the massive ball straight at the Hollow. The giant hollow feels nothing and continues walking.
Tamo: Looks like that lightning ball needs a lot more work.
Kalin: Yeah, but that's not important.
Ravi shunidos at the giant hollow, and uses his favorite signature move. The giant hollow almost falls over. It fires a Cero Gigante of such magnitude it could destroy for miles.
Tamo: Holy shit!? Get out of here!
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Kalin: Oh wow.
Kalin uses the lightning to gain speed to run. All three get the hell out of there... As soon as it ends, they come back.
Tamo: Looks like I'll have to take it down. Cero Herida!
Tamo launches a large scale version of Cero Herida. It leaves a small dent in the dense armor. Kalin forms a lightning blade.
Kalin: Shouldn't there be a soft spot?
Kalin starts move her hands to form the Star of David. As she moved her hands, the lightning sword multiplies. Ravi launches a larger scale violet Cero Herida.
Ravi: Cero Herida.
It makes a larger dent, but doesn't quite reach the soft insides.
Ravi: Hmmm....
He fires a fused version of Sokatsui and Shakkahō.
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Kalin: That should've weakened the armor enough that my swords should break through.
Tamo: Go ahead, it's all yours for that shot.
Kalin moves her hands towards her face, then pushes them away from her...the swords disappear; then reappear around the hollow.
Kalin: Hope this works.
Kalin crosses her arms, and the swords fly at the hollow with great speed behind them. The swords make a small explosion.
Kalin: Did I get it?
Tamo: I know what will do the trick. It's a Cero I recently perfected. Cero Perforante!
A cero in the shape of a long and slender cone with a base having the shape of three commas fused together. Cero Perforante shoots faster than any cero, heading straight for the giant Hollow. It pierces the adamantine armor easily, and blows up the Hollow. Kalin was quiet for a bit.
Kalin: So how many hollows do we have to kill anyways?
Ravi: About 3 Adjuchas class Menos, including any other hollows we face.
Kalin: Okay.
Tamo: Why do I get the feeling this Hollow was similar to Yammy Llargo?
Kalin: Who?
Tamo: Yammy Llargo is the most powerful Espada. Normally he's number 10, but when he does Resurrección, his number changes to 0. Espada are ranked 0-9.
Kalin: So how is he an Espada before resurrection?
Tamo: He's weak when he doesn't do Resurrección. Espada are just Arrancar ranked 0-9, but they are the strongest Arrancar. Arrancars aren't Espada unless they're ranked 0-9. For those Arrancar, they are called Números. Some Números Arrancar are specially selected as an Espada's subordinate, known as Fracción. Former Espada are called Privaron Espada. There used to be a group called Exequias. The sole and true member is Rudobon Chelute. He creates Calaveras with his Resurrección, Arbol, those Calaveras make up the Exequias.
Kalin: I see.
One Adjuchas appears.
In a gruff voice; ???: What's all this ruckus?
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(I know this is Grimmjow, but lets just say if this were an Arrancar, he'd have Gato as his Resurrección)
Tamo: Aha, an Adjuchas class Menos.
Kalin: Okay, compared to the last hollow we killed, how strong is he?
Tamo: Oh far stronger, and considering this is a Cat-like Adjuchas, it may be quite nimble.
Kalin: I see, so my thousand swords wouldn't work on this guy.
???: I am Fellis Catos. What are you doing here in my domain?(Fellis is said "feyis", if you remember double Ls being a "y")
Ravi: I am truly sorry, but we are here on a mission to take down 3 Adjuchas class Menos. You are an Adjuchas, therefore we shall take you down.
Fellis: What?! How dare you?
Fellis rushes forward like a cheetah. Ravi merely holds his hand out. Fellis bites it.
Ravi: Did you think biting my hand would hurt me?
Fellis is surprised and jumps back realized he almost fell in a trap. Ravi's hand is undamaged, with the white sleeve a bit shredded.
Kalin: Ravi, are you okay?
Tamo: Ravi is the only person I know who has the toughest skin. He has a Hierro that's hard as diamond.
Kalin(relieved): Oh. Just let me know when you want me to attack.
Tamo: Your attacks would be good for distractions. I'll let you know. Hey, Ravi, can I take this one by myself?
Ravi: Go ahead.
Tamo: I am Tamo.
Fellis: Tamo, the one who took down 10,000 Hollow?
Tamo: Why, yes. I'm surprised you know who I am.
Fellis: It would be an honor to fight you, Tamo-sama.
Tamo: I don't have to resurrect, do I?
Fellis: Maybe.(growls, tail wagging in anticipation to strike)
Fellis strikes.
Tell me what you think so far. Any critics, or helpful tips much appreciated.
