GrimReaperoftheHiddenLeaf
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Hello there, my few fans. I'd like to know how you like the story so far. If there's anything that should be changed, I'll consider it. Well then, today's chapter is a bit of a flashback.
Chapter 14: "Kalin's past"
After the blast went off, Kalin turns ands looks at Tamo then flies off toward the cave. Kalin landed right in front of the cave, and walked in. Nel follows her. Kalin coughs because of the smoke.
Nel: You okay?
Kalin: Yeah, I'm fine.
Nel: There's nothing here.
Nel follows along.
Kalin: Nel, stand back.
Nel stands there. Kalin turns her sword into razor sharp wires.
Kalin: Dance of the Marionette.
Kalin spins 5 times then stops. Everything in a 5ft radius falls in pieces.
Nel: What was that for?
Kalin got angry, and flew back out of the cave at Tamo. Nel sonidos to catch up. Kalin growls.
Nel: What's wrong, Kalin-kun?
Kalin: Such a childish game.
Tamo: What is?
Kalin: Let's just go.
Nel gets a concerned look on her face.
Nel: Kalin-kun, something's the matter with you. What is it?
Kalin looks ahead of her with a stern look on her face.
Kalin: It's nothing.
Nel: Kalin-kun, sweetie, I won't know how to help you if I don't know what is the matter with you.
Kalin: I said it's nothing.
Kalin flies up.
Nel: Please tell me.
Kalin kept flying up. Nel sighs, and sonidos up.
Kalin: Why do you want to know what's wrong?
Nel: So I can help you. You can tell me anything.
Kalin: Why do you even care to help? It's in the past, and I'm not going to bring it up again.
Nel: You can trust me with anything.
Kalin: You're going to keep asking about it until I tell you?
Nel: I wouldn't do that.
Kalin goes upside down and willingly falls back down, but stops just before she hits the ground. Nel sonidos back. Kalin lands on the ground.
Kalin: Fine, but only to you, Nel...no one else.
Nel: Wha... Okay.
Kalin walks back over to the cave.
Tamo: Going back there?
Kalin: Coming, Nel?
Nel: Yes, I'm coming.
Kalin went into the cave. Nel follows in. Kalin sits on the floor.
Kalin: Where to start...My mother was an arrancar. She lived in the Forest of Menos, and my father was a Soul Reaper. One day my father was sent to kill my mother, so he followed orders until he saw her, and they fell in love, and after a few months my mother had Linka, and father gave her half his necklace, but he was worried that they would be found so he hid her in the floor. Then she right after Linka, she had me. She died, and father gave me half of her necklace then hid me as well.
Kalin took a breath.
Kalin: When we were 7, father told us to stay quiet, and he went to the door as soon as he did he screamed in pain...I remembered his scream, and ever since then I've been having flash backs of that moment in time, and every time it scares me, but it didn't bother my sister. When we were about 10, we went to Soul Society, and started in the academy. My sister got out of the academy faster than I did. I couldn't pass the exams, and she would pick on me because of that, but now she's dead as well, and now I'm left here with no one to call family...I have no family.
Kalin's eyes tear up.
Kalin: I have no one. I am alone.
Nel: I'll be your elder sister.
Nel hugs Kalin. Kalin's eyes go wide.
Kalin: Really?
Nel: Sure.
She smiles. Kalin starts crying.
Kalin: Linka always calls me a cry baby.
Nel: It's okay to cry, even I would too.
Kalin stopped crying after a few minutes.
Kalin: Thank you, Nel.
Nel: You're welcome, Kalin-kun.
Kalin got up.
Kalin: Maybe we should continue the training.
A huge reiatsu spikes up.
Kalin: What was that?
Nel: Let's go see.
Kalin nods, and walk to the exit of the cave.
Kalin: Do you know what it might be?
Nel: Seems like a battle just ended.
They investigate outside the cave, but find nothing. Tamo and Ravi come in.
Tamo: Just took down another Adjuchas.
Kalin: You okay?
Tamo(chuckles): Why wouldn't we be?
Kalin quickly turns around.
Kalin: No reason.
Tamo: I didn't notify you two cuz I knew you were talking about "something".
Kalin: So how many more hollows do we need to kill?
Kalin turns back around.
Tamo: Just one more Adjuchas and any others.
Kalin nods, then turns to Nel.
Kalin: So want to continue my training?
Nel: Sure.
Kalin smiles and walks out of the cave.
Nel: So let's start on the next step. Cero.
Kalin: Okay.
Nel: Each Arrancar finds their own way to fire a Cero. Usually it's the hand.
She demonstrates a Cero.
Kalin: Okay.
Lightning gathers in her right hand.
Kalin: Hope this works.
Kalin brings her hand up and closes her fist then casts her hand out with her hand open, but nothing happens.
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Chapter 14: "Kalin's past"
After the blast went off, Kalin turns ands looks at Tamo then flies off toward the cave. Kalin landed right in front of the cave, and walked in. Nel follows her. Kalin coughs because of the smoke.
Nel: You okay?
Kalin: Yeah, I'm fine.
Nel: There's nothing here.
Nel follows along.
Kalin: Nel, stand back.
Nel stands there. Kalin turns her sword into razor sharp wires.
Kalin: Dance of the Marionette.
Kalin spins 5 times then stops. Everything in a 5ft radius falls in pieces.
Nel: What was that for?
Kalin got angry, and flew back out of the cave at Tamo. Nel sonidos to catch up. Kalin growls.
Nel: What's wrong, Kalin-kun?
Kalin: Such a childish game.
Tamo: What is?
Kalin: Let's just go.
Nel gets a concerned look on her face.
Nel: Kalin-kun, something's the matter with you. What is it?
Kalin looks ahead of her with a stern look on her face.
Kalin: It's nothing.
Nel: Kalin-kun, sweetie, I won't know how to help you if I don't know what is the matter with you.
Kalin: I said it's nothing.
Kalin flies up.
Nel: Please tell me.
Kalin kept flying up. Nel sighs, and sonidos up.
Kalin: Why do you want to know what's wrong?
Nel: So I can help you. You can tell me anything.
Kalin: Why do you even care to help? It's in the past, and I'm not going to bring it up again.
Nel: You can trust me with anything.
Kalin: You're going to keep asking about it until I tell you?
Nel: I wouldn't do that.
Kalin goes upside down and willingly falls back down, but stops just before she hits the ground. Nel sonidos back. Kalin lands on the ground.
Kalin: Fine, but only to you, Nel...no one else.
Nel: Wha... Okay.
Kalin walks back over to the cave.
Tamo: Going back there?
Kalin: Coming, Nel?
Nel: Yes, I'm coming.
Kalin went into the cave. Nel follows in. Kalin sits on the floor.
Kalin: Where to start...My mother was an arrancar. She lived in the Forest of Menos, and my father was a Soul Reaper. One day my father was sent to kill my mother, so he followed orders until he saw her, and they fell in love, and after a few months my mother had Linka, and father gave her half his necklace, but he was worried that they would be found so he hid her in the floor. Then she right after Linka, she had me. She died, and father gave me half of her necklace then hid me as well.
Kalin took a breath.
Kalin: When we were 7, father told us to stay quiet, and he went to the door as soon as he did he screamed in pain...I remembered his scream, and ever since then I've been having flash backs of that moment in time, and every time it scares me, but it didn't bother my sister. When we were about 10, we went to Soul Society, and started in the academy. My sister got out of the academy faster than I did. I couldn't pass the exams, and she would pick on me because of that, but now she's dead as well, and now I'm left here with no one to call family...I have no family.
Kalin's eyes tear up.
Kalin: I have no one. I am alone.
Nel: I'll be your elder sister.
Nel hugs Kalin. Kalin's eyes go wide.
Kalin: Really?
Nel: Sure.
She smiles. Kalin starts crying.
Kalin: Linka always calls me a cry baby.
Nel: It's okay to cry, even I would too.
Kalin stopped crying after a few minutes.
Kalin: Thank you, Nel.
Nel: You're welcome, Kalin-kun.
Kalin got up.
Kalin: Maybe we should continue the training.
A huge reiatsu spikes up.
Kalin: What was that?
Nel: Let's go see.
Kalin nods, and walk to the exit of the cave.
Kalin: Do you know what it might be?
Nel: Seems like a battle just ended.
They investigate outside the cave, but find nothing. Tamo and Ravi come in.
Tamo: Just took down another Adjuchas.
Kalin: You okay?
Tamo(chuckles): Why wouldn't we be?
Kalin quickly turns around.
Kalin: No reason.
Tamo: I didn't notify you two cuz I knew you were talking about "something".
Kalin: So how many more hollows do we need to kill?
Kalin turns back around.
Tamo: Just one more Adjuchas and any others.
Kalin nods, then turns to Nel.
Kalin: So want to continue my training?
Nel: Sure.
Kalin smiles and walks out of the cave.
Nel: So let's start on the next step. Cero.
Kalin: Okay.
Nel: Each Arrancar finds their own way to fire a Cero. Usually it's the hand.
She demonstrates a Cero.
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Kalin: Okay.
Lightning gathers in her right hand.
Kalin: Hope this works.
Kalin brings her hand up and closes her fist then casts her hand out with her hand open, but nothing happens.