MinatoFLASH
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Ok so I am finally writing a ff. In my fanfic, the setting is in a time period a 100 years after the 4th great ninja war.
The main character Blaze has a power which is his own kkg called the Dailegan.
So basically this is about a guy named Blaze and his life, ENJOY!
BLAZE OF THE CLOUD
Chapter 1
“Danny, Danny, are you listening”? said Danny’s mom. “I am coming mom” said Danny. “What is it”? “Well today your dad is going on a very important mission so say goodbye to him before he leaves” said Danny’s mom. “Bye dad, good luck on your mission and I know you can do it” said Danny with concern and pride. “Of course son, after all I am the great Yura the captain of the Anbu squads” said Danny’s father in a very happy and exited look on his face. “Well good luck dad, see ya”. Danny was always a very talented and determined child, but more than that was he intelligent. His IQ was said to be like 200 and he learned how to read well at age 2. He was the kind of boy his father wanted. Danny’s father is the leader of the anbus and is in charge of every anbu or jonin in war. His Dad almost made the Raikage but was turned down because the current Raikage did a heroic deed and was also the last Raikage’s son. Danny’s dad Yura was respected just as much as even the kage of the village. Danny’s real dream was to be the best Raikage ever and make peace to the Cloud like no one else has. Danny hates violence and would be a very merciful Kage.
Danny has great determination to be the Raikage. As a matter of fact even Danny’s grandfather wanted to be Raikage. Danny would complete his family’s dream. This was his goal, and with his abilities Danny was right on his way from the start. Danny had a kekkia genkai or KG that was the most amazing ever to be seen! Although at this time people did not know what it can do but it gave Danny amazingly incredible powers. Like his speed, intelligence, and chakra. Danny also had a little brother named Sora who was 4 years younger and did not contain talents and determination like Danny did. This is why Danny’s father is so proud of Danny because unlike his brother Danny is WAY above average in many things.
At just age 3 Danny graduated from the academy and became a genin, he knew he had to work hard and pushed himself through genin easily and at age 5 he became chunin. Due to his great IQ, Danny at age 5 has enough sense as your average 10 or 11 year old. At the chunin exams though he encountered someone that was also around his age, just 6 years old who became chunin. This kid’s name was Riku and he later became Danny’s best friend.
“Hey Danny whats going on with you man, you seem to be acting strange” said Riku. “Its nothing, its just that you know how much war sucks man, we would barely get the time to hang” said Danny. “Keeping the village safe is much more important then hanging out dude” said Riku. “I know but, its not just that” said Danny with a sad look on his face. “People are going to be killed and we cant do much about it, we are just kids” said Danny. “What are you saying, have you forgotten how strong we are”! “I mean I am almost 12 and I have already been chunin for 6 years and so have you and you’re only like 11”! said Riku with an angry look. “Danny, come here now” said Yura. “But Dad, I am with Riku and we are talking about stuff”. “No time for that” said Yura. “Just bring Riku with you”. “Fine we’re coming” said Danny with an annoyed tone. “Listen, you 2 are very strong talented ninja”. “Even though your just kids, at a desperate condition like this we are going to make you jonins and use you for war power” said Yura.
“What, you don’t care about us even though we are kids”! said Danny. “Shut up Danny, the sand and rock have both teamed up against us”! “We need as much as power as possible, it’s like the 10th great ninja war! “ Almost every village is involved, and we have to be as strong as possible”! said Yura. “But dad”! “your Dad’s right” said Riku interrupting Danny. “Let’s do this, we have no choice you see” said Yura. “You and Riku are gifted ninja” he said.
Just like Danny, Riku was very intelligent, maybe even more than Danny. But unlike him Riku wasn’t gifted with a KG, he worked extremely hard to be the ninja that he is. He was a genius and worked much harder than anyone, even Danny. These 2 kids were the most gifted in the cloud. Although there was one more that is probably even stronger. Danny’s cousin Chase.
Chapter 2
Chase was just 1 year older than Danny and was about as smart. Unlike Danny and Riku, Chase was not as merciful and did whatever that was necessary to keep the village safe. “So you guys are becoming anbu jonin like me huh”? said Chase. “Yup”! said Riku with excitement. Since Danny was becoming an anbu jonin he had the option to pick a nickname for his missions. Chase told them to stick with their names because in war like this, hiding your identity is the least concern. But Danny found a name he thought was cool. The name Blaze, Danny wanted it because Blaze was the hero of Danny’s favorite childhood manga. Riku just stuck with his name and they head out for war. While they were there they ran into many rain ninja that weren’t much of a match for them. But later, a very large group of ninja attacked, there was around 30 of them, all were from the sand and were at least jonin level. “Oh, this is bad” said Riku.
“Tell me about it” said Danny. “Guys just don’t get soft or scared and stay on your guard and we will be fine” said Chase. “Alright”! “Who is ready to die first”- rain ninja. The rain ninjas were very skilled and attacked to kill. Danny dodges most of the attacks and almost stroked back for the kill until he stopped himself. “I don’t think I can do this” said Danny. “Oh wow, whatever I will just do it then” said Chase. “Oh really, you stupid kid get ready to go shit in your pants, your daddy won’t come save you today”- rain ninja. “You donkeys ready to get shiit on with"?, by my snow” said Chase.
“Hahaha, bring it kid”!- rain ninja. Chase’s has a very powerful KG, the snow. Normally snow is soft but Chase can make his snow harder than diamonds, and crush his opponent, similar to Gaara’s sand. His snow is also incredibly powerful and faster than almost anything! His chakra is even more than Danny’s whose chakra is at bijuu level. So Chase can produce as much as snow as he likes, tons and tons! “You’re dead kid”!- rain ninja. The rain ninjas attacked Chase with hundreds of shuriken that were on fire. But just like Gaara’s sand Chase’s snow forms a shield that protects him from almost any damage. “Wave of snow”. Instantly a huge wave which looked similar to the sand tsunami except it was made of snow and was much larger and faster came rushing, the snow in it was hard, very hard. Chase single handedly crushed all 30 ninja and buried them in snow. “That was, amazing” said Riku. “Amazing”! “You just crushed a whole bunch of lives like they were insects”! said Danny.
“And are you saying they were innocent lives” said Chase. “Or are you saying that insects aren’t lives, because they are, they maybe worth less than human lives but to me so were these guys”. “You see Danny, my love for the village is similar to yours except I won’t ever let my emotions get in the way of serving my village, my hands never shiver when I am doing my job” said Chase. “That’s because you were never emotional in the first place, and are you saying you love the village more than me”! screamed Danny. Chase was always an incredibly calm and powerful person, he was very popular with girls, similar to Danny but even more and even though the other kids were jealous of him they never talked bad about him due to his merciless personality.
Chase was the kind of person that if you talk trash about, he would do it much worst in a calm attitude and will usually try to do this in front of people so you get humiliated. When the other kids realized that they can’t hurt him with their words they tried to attack and got trashed even worst physically. Danny could do the same things as Chase does to kids but was a lot kinder so he never did. People took advantage of that and usually talked about him in a bad way because they were jealous of his talents. Also almost everyone even his own brother would use Chase as an example of a better Danny and teased him of how he doesn’t even compare to Chase. “That’s it Chase you just crossed the line by saying you like the village more”! said Danny. “Let’s see who is stronger”! As Danny charged at Chase the snow shield blocked the hits and Chase attacked with spikes of icy snow.
But it was a clone and the real Danny attacked with his giant fireball jutsu which he increased the power of by a wind style jutsu. Chase was not touched because of his snow and caught Danny of guard. Danny thought Chase would at least be down right now and he will be able to tell everyone that he beat Chase. “What he is still up”! said Danny. Right then Chase’s snow came from underground, wrapped around Danny’s feet and took Danny underground to where only his head was above the ground. “You aren’t a match for me” said Chase. Chase’s glare was so intense that Danny didn’t say another word, Chase released the jutsu and left. “I can’t stand him”! said Danny.
“It’s alright man, lets go chill somewhere for a bit” said Riku. “He thinks he is sooo cool” said Danny.
After Danny and Riku took a break they went back to training. Danny read about this jutsu from the leaf he wanted to master. Since Danny had the Dailegan he can master any element! So he learned about this jutsu and started working on it to make it very powerful. The rasengan!!
The main character Blaze has a power which is his own kkg called the Dailegan.
The powers of th Dailegan: Multiplies every jutsu's damage by 5, Incredible speed, intelligence of about 200, INCREDIBLE CHAKRA, immune to genjutsu, poison, ability to fly. And more! Also amazing jutsu!!
This is when you have it mastered.
This is when you have it mastered.
So basically this is about a guy named Blaze and his life, ENJOY!
BLAZE OF THE CLOUD
Chapter 1
“Danny, Danny, are you listening”? said Danny’s mom. “I am coming mom” said Danny. “What is it”? “Well today your dad is going on a very important mission so say goodbye to him before he leaves” said Danny’s mom. “Bye dad, good luck on your mission and I know you can do it” said Danny with concern and pride. “Of course son, after all I am the great Yura the captain of the Anbu squads” said Danny’s father in a very happy and exited look on his face. “Well good luck dad, see ya”. Danny was always a very talented and determined child, but more than that was he intelligent. His IQ was said to be like 200 and he learned how to read well at age 2. He was the kind of boy his father wanted. Danny’s father is the leader of the anbus and is in charge of every anbu or jonin in war. His Dad almost made the Raikage but was turned down because the current Raikage did a heroic deed and was also the last Raikage’s son. Danny’s dad Yura was respected just as much as even the kage of the village. Danny’s real dream was to be the best Raikage ever and make peace to the Cloud like no one else has. Danny hates violence and would be a very merciful Kage.
Danny has great determination to be the Raikage. As a matter of fact even Danny’s grandfather wanted to be Raikage. Danny would complete his family’s dream. This was his goal, and with his abilities Danny was right on his way from the start. Danny had a kekkia genkai or KG that was the most amazing ever to be seen! Although at this time people did not know what it can do but it gave Danny amazingly incredible powers. Like his speed, intelligence, and chakra. Danny also had a little brother named Sora who was 4 years younger and did not contain talents and determination like Danny did. This is why Danny’s father is so proud of Danny because unlike his brother Danny is WAY above average in many things.
At just age 3 Danny graduated from the academy and became a genin, he knew he had to work hard and pushed himself through genin easily and at age 5 he became chunin. Due to his great IQ, Danny at age 5 has enough sense as your average 10 or 11 year old. At the chunin exams though he encountered someone that was also around his age, just 6 years old who became chunin. This kid’s name was Riku and he later became Danny’s best friend.
“Hey Danny whats going on with you man, you seem to be acting strange” said Riku. “Its nothing, its just that you know how much war sucks man, we would barely get the time to hang” said Danny. “Keeping the village safe is much more important then hanging out dude” said Riku. “I know but, its not just that” said Danny with a sad look on his face. “People are going to be killed and we cant do much about it, we are just kids” said Danny. “What are you saying, have you forgotten how strong we are”! “I mean I am almost 12 and I have already been chunin for 6 years and so have you and you’re only like 11”! said Riku with an angry look. “Danny, come here now” said Yura. “But Dad, I am with Riku and we are talking about stuff”. “No time for that” said Yura. “Just bring Riku with you”. “Fine we’re coming” said Danny with an annoyed tone. “Listen, you 2 are very strong talented ninja”. “Even though your just kids, at a desperate condition like this we are going to make you jonins and use you for war power” said Yura.
“What, you don’t care about us even though we are kids”! said Danny. “Shut up Danny, the sand and rock have both teamed up against us”! “We need as much as power as possible, it’s like the 10th great ninja war! “ Almost every village is involved, and we have to be as strong as possible”! said Yura. “But dad”! “your Dad’s right” said Riku interrupting Danny. “Let’s do this, we have no choice you see” said Yura. “You and Riku are gifted ninja” he said.
Just like Danny, Riku was very intelligent, maybe even more than Danny. But unlike him Riku wasn’t gifted with a KG, he worked extremely hard to be the ninja that he is. He was a genius and worked much harder than anyone, even Danny. These 2 kids were the most gifted in the cloud. Although there was one more that is probably even stronger. Danny’s cousin Chase.
Chapter 2
Chase was just 1 year older than Danny and was about as smart. Unlike Danny and Riku, Chase was not as merciful and did whatever that was necessary to keep the village safe. “So you guys are becoming anbu jonin like me huh”? said Chase. “Yup”! said Riku with excitement. Since Danny was becoming an anbu jonin he had the option to pick a nickname for his missions. Chase told them to stick with their names because in war like this, hiding your identity is the least concern. But Danny found a name he thought was cool. The name Blaze, Danny wanted it because Blaze was the hero of Danny’s favorite childhood manga. Riku just stuck with his name and they head out for war. While they were there they ran into many rain ninja that weren’t much of a match for them. But later, a very large group of ninja attacked, there was around 30 of them, all were from the sand and were at least jonin level. “Oh, this is bad” said Riku.
“Tell me about it” said Danny. “Guys just don’t get soft or scared and stay on your guard and we will be fine” said Chase. “Alright”! “Who is ready to die first”- rain ninja. The rain ninjas were very skilled and attacked to kill. Danny dodges most of the attacks and almost stroked back for the kill until he stopped himself. “I don’t think I can do this” said Danny. “Oh wow, whatever I will just do it then” said Chase. “Oh really, you stupid kid get ready to go shit in your pants, your daddy won’t come save you today”- rain ninja. “You donkeys ready to get shiit on with"?, by my snow” said Chase.
“Hahaha, bring it kid”!- rain ninja. Chase’s has a very powerful KG, the snow. Normally snow is soft but Chase can make his snow harder than diamonds, and crush his opponent, similar to Gaara’s sand. His snow is also incredibly powerful and faster than almost anything! His chakra is even more than Danny’s whose chakra is at bijuu level. So Chase can produce as much as snow as he likes, tons and tons! “You’re dead kid”!- rain ninja. The rain ninjas attacked Chase with hundreds of shuriken that were on fire. But just like Gaara’s sand Chase’s snow forms a shield that protects him from almost any damage. “Wave of snow”. Instantly a huge wave which looked similar to the sand tsunami except it was made of snow and was much larger and faster came rushing, the snow in it was hard, very hard. Chase single handedly crushed all 30 ninja and buried them in snow. “That was, amazing” said Riku. “Amazing”! “You just crushed a whole bunch of lives like they were insects”! said Danny.
“And are you saying they were innocent lives” said Chase. “Or are you saying that insects aren’t lives, because they are, they maybe worth less than human lives but to me so were these guys”. “You see Danny, my love for the village is similar to yours except I won’t ever let my emotions get in the way of serving my village, my hands never shiver when I am doing my job” said Chase. “That’s because you were never emotional in the first place, and are you saying you love the village more than me”! screamed Danny. Chase was always an incredibly calm and powerful person, he was very popular with girls, similar to Danny but even more and even though the other kids were jealous of him they never talked bad about him due to his merciless personality.
Chase was the kind of person that if you talk trash about, he would do it much worst in a calm attitude and will usually try to do this in front of people so you get humiliated. When the other kids realized that they can’t hurt him with their words they tried to attack and got trashed even worst physically. Danny could do the same things as Chase does to kids but was a lot kinder so he never did. People took advantage of that and usually talked about him in a bad way because they were jealous of his talents. Also almost everyone even his own brother would use Chase as an example of a better Danny and teased him of how he doesn’t even compare to Chase. “That’s it Chase you just crossed the line by saying you like the village more”! said Danny. “Let’s see who is stronger”! As Danny charged at Chase the snow shield blocked the hits and Chase attacked with spikes of icy snow.
But it was a clone and the real Danny attacked with his giant fireball jutsu which he increased the power of by a wind style jutsu. Chase was not touched because of his snow and caught Danny of guard. Danny thought Chase would at least be down right now and he will be able to tell everyone that he beat Chase. “What he is still up”! said Danny. Right then Chase’s snow came from underground, wrapped around Danny’s feet and took Danny underground to where only his head was above the ground. “You aren’t a match for me” said Chase. Chase’s glare was so intense that Danny didn’t say another word, Chase released the jutsu and left. “I can’t stand him”! said Danny.
“It’s alright man, lets go chill somewhere for a bit” said Riku. “He thinks he is sooo cool” said Danny.
After Danny and Riku took a break they went back to training. Danny read about this jutsu from the leaf he wanted to master. Since Danny had the Dailegan he can master any element! So he learned about this jutsu and started working on it to make it very powerful. The rasengan!!
