Black despair Part 5 titled "Forgotten"

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Black despair Part 5 "Forgotten"

BLACK despair

PART FIVE
"Forgotten"

Narrator: A grapple initiated by Kou seemed to invoke or awaken something within the child. In which unleashed a powerful light that was in the process of enveloping the area completely, though in a gradual pace. The assailant quickly moved in range, kneeling down to the floor, stretching out his arms, he then formed a ram hand seal with his hands. The jutsu was invoked.

Kou: (Shouts) Shintenshin no Jutsu!

Jutsu Insight - Kou:

● Jutsu Name: Shintenshin no Jutsu (Mind Body Switch Technique)
● Classification: Ninjutsu
● Rank: C-rank
● Class: Supplementary
● Range: Short to mid-range
● Hand seals: Ram
● Description: Allows the user to enter the mind of another person or even an animal by transferring their consciousness. This gives them complete control of the body for a short period of time. Their original body is left defenseless while this jutsu is active, leaving it susceptible to attack until they return. The mind transfer is slow-moving, moves in a straight direction, and takes some time to return to the user's body if it misses. Because of these reasons it should only be used on immobilized targets. If the opponent's will is strong enough, they can force the user from their body. Should any physical injury befall the victim's body while the mind-link is active, it would cause the user's body to also receive those same injuries. However, this can be rectified if user cancels the jutsu before the victim's body receives the damage.

Narrator: As Kou’s consciousness slowly transferred in a straight line did his upright body slightly leaned forward.

Kou: Why is his body rejecting me?

Narrator: The shinning body reflected his consciousness back into his mind as if like a barrier that protected the child.

Kou: What…what is he?

Narrator: Kou arose from the floor and faced in the direction in which led to Danzou.

Kou: (In thought) I have to alert Danzou-sama and anyone else I cross…

Narrator: As he started to pace through the corridor did he catch sight of someone coming from the other end heading towards his direction.

[Setting change: Konohagakure no Sato forest]

Narrator: Two shinobi evenly matched were at a standstill. One bides time as the other searches the other out.

Ryuuta: (In thought) We are at a stalemate, I need answers and what is his alterative motive?

Ryuuta: (Continued in thought) He is bound to seek me out at any moment

Narrator: Ryuuta kept hidden thinking of a way to immobilize him for an interrogation whilst the shinobi initiated his sensing abilities. He was then able to sense out Ryuuta’s location.

Unknown Shinobi: (In thought) There you are…

Narrator: With his whereabouts exposed, the shinobi invoked a few words.

Unknown Shinobi: Sanran Ryuushi no Jutsu

Jutsu InsightUnknown shinobi:

● Jutsu Name: Sanran Ryuushi no Jutsu (Scattering Particles Technique)
● Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
● Nature Type: Muriton (Smoke release)
● Class: Offensive
● Range: Long-short range
● Hand seals: Unknown
● Description: Chakra is kneaded within the body and then changed into special solid and liquid particulates and gaseous substances. It is then ejected through the mouth. These particles are poisonous and can be controlled by will via the mind. When inhaled, will it begin to suffocate the target and is followed by death.

Narrator: The shinobi proceeded to open his mouth and excreted the poisonous particles which in turn dispersed into the air, below the trees finally reaching behind a huge boulder engulfing the area.

Unknown Shinobi: (In thought) I cannot sense you any longer.. *snicker*

Unknown Shinobi: Hmm…weak

Unknown Shinobi: (In thought) Hmm..I am dying to see his disfigured body *snickers*

Narrator: Upon arriving, what is viewed is the encasing of his smoke release as it continuously encircled and he then de-activated his jutsu by opening his mouth to suck up the particles.

Unknown Shinobi: (In thought) Insects!!!

Narrator: His eyes widened as he gradually saw a lot of insects.

Jutsu InsightRyuuta:

● Jutsu Name: Nanosaizu no Dokumushi (Nano-sized poison insect)
● Classification: Unknown
● Class: Unknown
● Range: Unknown
● Hand seals: Unknown
● Description: These types of insects are used by some members of the Aburame family as part of their Kikaichuu no Jutsu.

Jutsu InsightAburame Ichizoku:

● Jutsu Name: Kikaichuu no Jutsu (Destruction Insect Technique)
● Classification: Hiden, Ninjutsu, Fighting Style
● Class: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
● Range: All ranges
● Hand seals: Unknown
● Description: Kikaichuu no Jutsu is a practice exclusive to the Aburame family. When children are born into the clan, their bodies are offered to insects to be used as a nest. Over the years, as the child grows up, they are instructed in the hiden jutsu of the clan, and learn how the insects may serve them in combat.

Narrator: The shinobi was unable to hear the vibrating humming sound that the insects gave off due to the masking of his own particle enclosing jutsu.

Jutsu InsightRyuuta:

● Jutsu Name: Mushi Kame no Jutsu (Insect Jar Technique)
● Classification: Hiden, Ninjutsu
● Class: Defensive
● Range: Short-range
● Hand seals: Unknown
● Description: This jutsu uses the Kikaichuu or Nanosaizu no Dokumushi living in the user's body as a shield by having them fly in a dome shape at high speed. The dome is strong enough to destroy incoming attacks but can be disrupted with sufficient explosive force.

Note:
Hiden translates to secret. It means that it is a secret jutsu passed down from certain regions or families. Kikaichuu translates to destruction insects and is the type of insect mainly used by the Aburame family.

Unknown Shinobi: (In thought) Shit!

Narrator: The shinobi quickly backed up and sprung onto a nearby tree branch. In that instant, insects began to surround the shinobi. Ryuuta’s objective was to immobilize him for questioning.

Ryuuta: (Shouts) Thrive!

Narrator: With his given command did the insects begin to quickly envelop the shinobi.

Jutsu InsightRyuuta:

● Jutsu Name: Hijutsu: Mushidama (Secret Technique: Insect Sphere)
● Classification: Hiden, Ninjutsu
● Class: Offensive
● Range: All ranges
● Hand seals: Unknown
● Description: Using either the Kikaichuu or Nanosaizu no Dokumushi, members of the Aburame family surround their opponent with thousands of insects, making a globe of insects around the opponent beforehand to completely trap them. Once trapped, the insects would normally drain the chakra and swallow their victim. The insects covering the victim’s body prevent movement, but if they escape, the insects will follow them.

Narrator: However, the body dispersed into smoke having been another clone technique.

Ryuuta: Che!

Note:
Che is used to express disgust and is very similar to the slang word shit.

Narrator: Suddenly, the shinobi appeared incoming air-born above Ryuuta’s head with both arms in the shape of a scythe via his Smoke Transformation Jutsu. Although, just before he could land his attack, the ANBU’s insects intervened and absorbed the blow thus guarding Ryuuta.

Unknown Shinobi: Not bad!

Narrator:The two back off onto a branch facing opposite of one another and were both somewhat panting.

Ryuuta: (In thought) Che…

Unknown Shinobi: You are by far the most exceptional adversary I have faced in my run as a ninja and as a reward for satisfying me beyond my expectations..I will grant you information about me

Ryuuta: (In thought) Truly?

Unknown Shinobi: You do not believe me?

Unknown Shinobi: (Continued) Well…first of all I traveled here in search of a child that belongs to my organization

Ryuuta: …

[Setting change: Root sub-department division corridors]

Narrator: Kou squinted his eyes in an attempt to make out the silhouette from afar but to no avail.

Kou: (In thought) Who is that?

Narrator: The ANBU then slightly turned his head and looked back. Just inches before his face did the light reach. He quickly turned around to out run it. Although, the radiant brightness increased in speed and consumed him. In that moment did the light instantly resume back into the child’s body. What took place in the aftermath had been an unconscious Kou on the floor and the child’s hair changing color. Upon regaining consciousness the child looked down to his hands and around the area.

Child: …Ww..w.ho am I and what is this place?

Sixth part will be released next week, same day, titled Revelation (Look for it!).



















 
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As always you're fic defies expectations and is always a pleasure to read. Keep 'em coming:D! Btw are you like Japanese? Because I noticed that you use a lot of japanese formalities :D
 

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@Minna-san (Everyone formal), I would like to first off start by saying arigatou gozaimasu for all of your insights as they have been a delight for me to view ^.^ Now, I moved several days ago and that is precisely why I have not been on. This occurrence has also made it impossible for me to work on my next Fanfic part and so I ask that you all be patient as it might be released on Saturday or Sunday. Although, I will definitely attempt to finish either before or on the due day. I do have my doubts -_- Sumimasen (excuse me) for any inconveniences and arigatou.​
 

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Finally managed to read it. Your describtion of the jutsus and surrondings are exeptional!:D Are you searching the internet for them or are you making them up and transelating them to Japanease?:p

Looking forward to next part my friend;)
 
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