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Basic Information

Name: Zatak Sarutobi
Nickname: Leaf's Shadow
Gender:Male
Age: Classified
Clan:Sarutobi

Looks: Short brown hair, Medium build, All other features are masked or hidden by ANBU Uniform, identifiable by his usage of a whiskered mask, and a white ANBU leader Cloak.

Personality:A very serious shinobi, who thinks before any action is taken. He is a renowned among the ANBU units, all of which are Classified other than his works within Konoha, and the Land of Iron. Being born directly after the Third Great Ninja War, Zatak was raised within the Sarutobi clan to honor the peace, and at all costs defend it. He is personal friends with Kakashi Hatake, and Yamato.

Village Info

Village of Birth:Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: None

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank:Chuunin
Specialty: /
Elements:
Fire - needs training


Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

Background Info

History: Not much is known about Zatak other than before his entrence into ANBU, all that is known is currently. Back in the academy, Zatak passed all tests with ease, and quickly proved to be top of his class. Eventually, graduating and put into a Genin squad. The squad was on a D-Ranked mission, and where prompletly attacked by Sound Ninja. After the Captain being incapacitated, and his teammates captured. Zatak managed to awaken his Captain and assist him in the elimination of the sound ninja and liberation of his teammates. After this incident, Zatak was offered to be train into ANBU, and work as an Infiltration Unit. Zataks only known declassified mission where:

1) His defense of Konoha, during the Sound/Sand Invasion.
Mission- The defense of Hokage, redirect by Hokage to protect Villagers. Success.
2) His defense of Konoha, during Pains invasion.
Mission- The defense and evacuation of Villagers. Success.

Zatak has earned the trust and recognition within the ANBU unit, for his dedication to his comrades and then the mission. Zataks current mission count is
13 D-Ranked, 2 C-ranked.


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Theme Song and Background Music:
[video=youtube;mjjkHg5FOhk]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mjjkHg5FOhk[/video]

Battles

Won: None
Lost:None


Please, if you see anything that should be changed mention it and it will. My VERY first one, there might be problems with it and would love any feedback (helpfull only please)

~Approved~ edited a lot of stuff. You didn't learn any elemental ninjutsu nor kenjutsu, so don't say you did, you don't have any specialties either. Have fun RPing.
 
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Cosidering most of them would be Academy i only put in 2. Unless i need to train them then i can remove them.

Decent bio, but a Chuunin can't possibly be learning all five elements, you need to be S-Class for that.
Ty so should i just remove the others because i figured Fire, and starting wind.

Link on where you learned all le elements cause Chuunins can only learn up to C-Rank and your Fire is B-Rank.

However, it's a good bio.
Will change that ty very much :)

Anyone see anything majorly wrong with this that i need to change?
 
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you dont get any elements at all unless you train in them and as this is your first bio you cant have possibly had any training.

other than that its decent bio take out the bolding though.
 
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you dont get any elements at all unless you train in them and as this is your first bio you cant have possibly had any training.

other than that its decent bio take out the bolding though.
THANK YOU! i kept getting people saying why elements, or jutsus. Didn't know that.
 
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