[Approved] Bio: Tylor Yakumo

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Tylor Yakumo

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Basic Information

Name: Tylor Yakumo
Nickname: Tylor
Age: 15
Clan: None


Looks:

Tylor was an emo guy from the start. His thin body, cool hairstyle and his perfect shoes often made him different from others.He had long, black nails and wore thin T-Shirts. He also wore his Ninja Gear during battles and a neck-band.

Personality:

s opposed to his two talkative team-mates and hot-headed brother, Tylor is mature, calm, and generally silent, only speaking when needed. He also appears to be very respectful towards powerful ninja.The word he has a tendency to say most is "cool", but he managed to prevent himself from saying it against Sannin or higher-grade members.

Village/Ninja Information:

Village Of Birth:
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Kirigakure
Village Of Alliance:
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Amegakure
Ninja Rank:
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Chuunin
Speciality: None
Elements:
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Ninjutsu


(Mizu Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.


(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Information:

Born with a normal body, he was the first from his family to be able to perform the physical activities required of a ninja. excited about this,his father petitioned the Amekage to grant Tylor a special tutor to allow him to become a exceptional ninja.This tutor was a genjutsu user like Tylor. Inspired by the legend of the Sharigan Tylor believed he could become a ninja through simply being born into the family.Being Born Durning The peacefull period between the 3r and 4th Great Shinobi wars,into the yakumo family,Tylor never had to experience the hardships of war.He spend most of his childhood ignoring his family's expectations,To join the ranks of the elite ANBU.Sleeping the whole day and sneaking out at night from the manor to play with his friends on the rooftops of the heavy industrilized Amegakure.He had a fine life and nothing was going to change that.One evening upon discovering Tylor's malice at night,his Father forced him to join the Ninja Academy in order to learn some dedication,amused by this idea Tylor become angry,not wanting to be molded into his family's idea of a future.Afterall,the war was over,life was peacefull..What more could you want..After Cooling down,Tylor accepted his father's request and finally joined the Ninja Academy.Here he met a suiton tutor,a jounin female named Ruko,whom he had a crush on.Tylor grew quiete attached to her,to the point where he started dedicating his training towards her,He trained vigourisly night and day in order for her to acknowledge him. He soon passed the student exams and got promoted to gennin.He was put into Team 3,as one of Ruko's gennins, becoming Ruko's right hand man.Having been trained by Ruko for years, Tylor was a very dangerous ninja for his age. According to Ruko, Tylor possessed such prodigious talent that, in many ways, Tylor had become more dangerous than her.
In battle, he wields a tanto. He also got very knowledgeable, as demonstrated by his in-depth knowledge of the Shinobi war weapon collectors.Team 3 had exceptional times together,things were looking in his favour,Ruko was Starting to notice him...After completing several succesfull missions they were assigned another one..The retrieval of a secret technique scroll from a small village ouside Amegakure.Team 3 left and quickly arived in the small village,it was abandonned..obviously it was a trap..Amused Tylor screamed out for the enemy to show itself since they knew it was a trap..A small platoon arose from the ground.Otagakure shinobi..Easily Team 3 finished them off.The mission was succesfull.Upon returning the scroll back to the village they were intercepted..Bounty hunters with kakuza among them,they werent interested in the scroll but actually the bounty from Rukos head..A former ANBU member.A very valuable target according to the Bingo Book..80 000 kumi for the retrieval of her head.Things were looking bad,Th whole team knew it,They didnt have a chance..the man wore a akatsuki cloak.and he had subordinates,plus Tylor and them were sill exhausted from the previous fight.For the first time in his life Tylor was afraid,for the safety of his team.


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Battles:

Won: None
Lost: None


 
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You can place the E-Rank Jutsu under spoiler tags.

Space out your paragraphs so it doesn't look like a wall of text.

:)

I'll keep reading and see if I see anything that doesn't belong there.

You can't excel in water since you haven't done any previous training here on Narutobase.

Don't think you can put anything on alliance unless you are part of a official narutobase village.
 
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Under elements you need to state what element you would like to train in.

Follow my suggestions and I think it should be okay unless I missed something.

:F

Nice history by the way.
 
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Remove everything related to the Yakumo clan, it does not exist. Only official NB sages can make custom clans.

Remove water walking and tree climbing, you don't get those by default.

You do not excel at water jutsu's. Follow the template, which means in your case

Ninja Rank: chunin
Specialty: /
Elements: water (needs training)

etc.
 
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