Bi-Han

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Basic Info..

Name:Bi-Han (璧漢)
Nickname:Saibot Of Konaha
Gender:Male
Age:60
Clan:N/A
Looks:
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Personality:Reincarnated in the darkest of all Villages.Noob Saibot is the very incarnation of evil.Doesn't Talk Much.

Village Info..
Village Of Birth:Konaha
Village of Alliance: Akastuki

Rank//Chakra Info..
Ninja Rank: Gennin
Specialty: N/A
Elements:
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Lighting(Needs Training)
Your ninjutsu:Basics

Background Info..
History:
The 3rd Ninja World War Arc
Bi-Han was born to Lee And Mei during the 2nd Ninja World War.He was a talented ninja.As his rival tobirama was.during the 3rd War his parent got killed by kumogakure ninjas.he wanted to bring peace to world.when he was 18
he went to the war and he met the third raikage(when he was not the raikage).
Third Raikage: So you are the Saibot Of Konaha!.Rumors Say that you are the one of the most talented ninja
Bi-Han:[/CENTER]Hmm.and you are the black lighting sage of kumogakure right
Third Raikage:Hmm!Waate of time get ready to die.
Bi-Han:Not so fast summoning tech:Black Snake
Third Raikage:Black lightning release:Black panther
Six paths of Six Pains:Shinra tensei
Bi-HanHuh?
Third Raikage:Eh?
After the attack of six paths of six pain Bi-Han escaped,and he thanked six paths of six pains:
Six paths of Six Pains:So you want to bring peace to world then join me together we will find peace
Bi-Han:Hmm
Six paths of Six Pains:From Today on we have to bring peace to the world.so the akastuki is now formed.and akatsuki's goal is to get peace by collecting the 9 bijju's
Bi-Han:So which one we should get first?
Six paths of Six Pains:Three Tailed Beast.
-To Be Continued-​

Other..

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Theme Song and Background Music:N/A

Battles

Won::shrug:
Lost::shrug:
 

SQY

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Less colours, make it more neat.
Also more background info and personality would be nice..
 

Kettei

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Nice for first bio.
Maybe more pics
 

Beifong

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It's six paths of pain ( btw nagato was a child then ( or he wasn't born )
 

Thoth

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It's okay for a girst bio. :)
 

Riku..

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Sorry, but I'm not going to accept the history as it is. Tobirama being your rival, battling the Third Raikage, and joining up with Pain and getting into the Akatsuki is simply too much altering of the cannon storyline. I'll accept a battle with the Third Raikage or a short meeting with Pain and apparently being with him when he formed Akatsuki? All while being a genin without any training? Whatever you do with the history, it cannot conflict with the manga storyline that majorly, nor can you add in techniques like the black snake thing that you mentioned in your history unless it's a cannon technique or approved custom.
 
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