Bettenchi - Chapter 2

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( 別天地 )​

Chapter 2 - Creatures from the past





Hisashi ( looks serious ) : I wanted to ask you ...

Miyuki : About what ?
Hisashi: As you know, yesterday I was visiting my cousin Kanashi in Bantako village, it was night when I was walking home, and near our village I heard a voice , it was terrible and sounded weird... like its not there ...
Miyuki : ?.? You stupid, walking at night in the middle of "nowhere" , hearing voices ! Is that some joke Hisashi ?
Hisashi: Its no joke ! And I'm not crazy ! It felt cold when I heard that voice... that voice was whispering something about shadows and fear...
Miyuki ( thinking ) : No, that must be coincidence.

Flashback

Miyuki is sleeping , voice is coming closer , its louder, louder
Voice Soon... darkness will come ....
Miyuki awakes
Miyuki : ah... that nightmare again...that cold...that feeling...

Flashback ends

Hisashi: Miyuki ? Whats wrong ?
Miyuki : No , nothing...
Hisashi: ?.? Oh , forget what I said , I guess iI'm crazy afterall =D
Miyuki : ...
Hisashi: Wanna go have some lunch together ?
Miyuki : ...ok
Hisashi ( thinking ) : Did she just said "ok" !!!??? o_O

Two friends are walking in the Aisho street

At the same time near the village

Black narrow entrance appears in the air , theres a black hand coming out .

Creature comes out of the entrance and dissapears in shadows


Creature : Hahhah...

Miyuki (thinking) : This feelings is stronger than before ! Whats happening ?

Creature : Hah...theres one

Creature attacks villager who was standing in the shadow under the tree
Villager : Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!

Creature : Hahahaha !!! This spirit is weak... but atleast it tastes good, I never felt this enjoyment before...hahahaha

Creature : Bah ! This damn sun... I have to wait for night to hunt free .

Hides in the forest shadows

Miyuki ( thinking ) : That feeling is gone... ah... I dont understand, what does it mean , why do I feel it...

Hisashi : Hisashi to Miyuki ... pfff... repeat Hisashi to Miyuki ... your soup is geting cold ...
Hisashi : WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU TODAY !!!???
Miyuki : Nothing !

Miyuki eats soup

Hisashi ( thinking ) : Jeesshhh... I know her for 8 years , but I never saw her acting so weird.

Later that day


Miyuki : Thanks for a tea. Umm... Its getting late , I'm going home.
Hisashi : Let me accompany you

They both leaves Hisashis home

Creature : Theres some pray...haha

Miyuki : That feeling is coming back

Someone runs behind the trees

Hisashi : What did you said ? What the hell was........ t--h-a--t ???!!!

Someone jumps out the trees and runs straight to Hisashi


Creature : : Give me your soul you little brat !!! Hahahahaha !!

Dark creature hits Hisashi and trys to take out his soul

Hisashi : D...am...n

Creature : ( thinking ) : This brat ... his soul is strong enough to keep my hand away of his body... thats must be a Soul Shield made of soul energy.

Hisashi : Uhh... get off me

Creature : : I will break your shield and eat your soul !!! You pathetic human !!!

Miyuki stands shocked , she's shaking .

Hisashi : Uh ...!!! Miyuki !!! Run away !!! Save your..s..el ...

Next time : Chapter 3 - Demon


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