Bettenchi - Chapter 12

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Bettenchi

( 別天地 )​


Chapter 12 - Winged Angel : Beginning


Scene shows unknown Demon coming from the entrance of Shadow Gates in meadow

Demon turn around and stops. He's staring at one spot , not making any moves


Demon : *Mabataki...

Suddenly Demon dissapears

Meanwhile

Hitsuga tells Miyuki to try short release like Hisashi did minute go

Hitsuga : Just do what I say , put your hand on your necklace and concentrate , try to free it .

Miyuki : Mmm...ooookk

Miyuki places her hand on the necklace

Miyuki ( thoughts ) : ...necklace spirit... I free you !!! ...be free...

Miyuki lets down her hand

Miyuki : I dont think it...works

Hitsuga ( thoughts ) : Damn, cmon...make it happen

Hitsuga : Try again Miyuki .

Miyuki trys again

But all of a sudden they have felt someone near them

Hisashi : !!!

Hitsuga : !!!

Miyuki : !!!

They turned around and saw a demon staring at them

Hitsuga : Sh** !!! Get ready , he's no ordinary demon !!!

Hitsuga ( thoughts ) : Damn it !!! They are not this level...

Hisashi : Whats wrong Hitsuga ? Lets attack him together !!!

Miyuki : ...its so cold...

Hitsuga : *Aisu-kurisutaru !!!

Hitsuga throws ice spear at demon

Demon : hmh...

Demon moves away and avoids it


Hitsuga : *Aisu-hirogari !!!

Ice spear trasforms into many small objects reaching demons arm

Some ice crystals got attached to it


Hitsuga : *Furi-zu !!!

Suddenly demons arm gets frozen , it looks like ice crystal

Hitsuga : Hisashi !!! Do it !!!

Hisashi appears near demon , part-released

Hisashi : *Akari !!!

In a big surprise Demon moves his frozen hand , and ice falls into small peaces .

Demon catches Hisashi had which he wanted to hit with

Hisashi : What !!!

Demon pulls Hisashi closer and hits him with his right knee

Hisashi : Uh !!!

Hisashi is flying away from hit

Demon : *Mabataki...

Demon vanishes and appears behind Hisashi hitting him with his right foot

Hisashi : Gwah !!!

Hisashi spits some blood from his mouth and falls on the ground

Miyuki : Hisashi !!!

Miyuki : Come on !!! Necklace spirit I need your help !!!

Hitsuga is shocked after seeing Demon beating up Hisashi

Hitsuga : ... Ahrgh !!!

Hitsuga starts running towards demon


Hitsuga : *Aisu-kurisutaru !!!!!

Hitsuga throws two spears at demon and continues running at him

Demon : ...too slow

Demon catches both spears and cruches them

Hitsuga : *Rikka !!!

Hitsuga starts glowing in white

Glowing dissapears and his clothes gets covered in hoarfrost

Demon is waiting for Hitsuga to get closer, he's standing still

Demon : Lets see what you can...

Hitsuga : Aaaaa!!!

They grapple each other with hands

Demon : ???

Hitsuga punches Demon , demon hands covers in hoarfrost and begings turning into ice

Hitsuga ( angry ) : ...freak!!!

Hoarfrost continues covering demons body , demons fingers turned into ice

Demon : I have a name ... its Reko...

Suddenly Reko's tail end appears in front of Hitsuga's face

Reko : *Kuro-raikou...

Black energy ball starts gathering on tail's end , dark lightning covers it

Hitsuga : o.o

Hitsuga : *Aisu-toku !!!

Black beam and lightning covers Hitsuga , making him fly together with beam .

Hitsuga falls on the ground

His head is bleeding a little


He's standing up

Reko : You managed to make a shield that fast... not bad

Miyuki ( scared ) : ...I cant...I cant do anything...

Hisashi appeared behind Reko

Hisashi : *Akari !!!

His fist attack reached

Hisashi jumps back

Hisashi : O.O

Reko : ...weak...

Reko runs near Hisashi and appears in front of him in a second

Hisashi : Damn...

Reko punches Hisashi's stomach with his right hand and throws him away

Miyuki ( almost crying ) : No...please ...help us...

Hitsuga : Miyuki take Hisashi and get out of here !!! He's much more stronger than those you met before !!! Go !!! Now !!!

Hitsuga ( thoughts ) : That demon, he's one of them... It seems I will have to use that...

Reko uses Mabataki and teleports near Hisashi , he's unconscious.

He lifts him up and throws near Hitsuga


Hitsuga ( thoughts ) : I cant wait any longer...

Miyuki runs closer and stand up before them , wanting to protect them

Miyuki : STOP !!! Dont come any closer !!!

Reko : hmmm... do you wish to die ?

Hitsuga : Get out of here Miyuki !!! Its too dangerous !!!

Miyuki : No !!! I wont be able to get away ... I cant let you die...

Reko : You three have accepted the death...

Reko rises his hand

Reko : Meet your death...

Scene ends with Reko gathering a red/yellow ball in his left hand

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Attacks :​

*Mabataki - twink , Demons ability to use kigai for a teleportation to some areas .
*Aisu-kurisutaru - ice crystal , user concentrates his kigai and makes spear shaped ice spear . User can throw it and stab the enemy .
*Aisu-hirogari - ice spread , transforms thrown spear into small ice objetcs.
*Furi-zu - freeze , if crystal attaches to an opponent, with this ability user can froze opponents body parts .
*Akari - a light , gathers kigai in one of your body part ( leg ,hand , fist etc ) . May couse high psychical damage .
*Rikka - snow , level 1 power release . Increases users speed , power . Allows user to use more dangerous attacks.
*Kuro-raikou - dark lightning, user gathers dark/black energy on his tail's end and strikes his opponent with black beam and lightning around it .
*Aisu-toku - ice shield , increased soul shield . Good against direct attacks.



Next time : Chapter 13 - Winged Angel: Flutter

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yay i'm the first one here:overjoy:
this fighting started to be so excited^^
now i'm worried about Miyuki &Hisashi will they be alright :confused:
good that u explained the names cuz i was kinda confused whlie i'm reading but now i got know every thing xD
great job as usual ^.*
 
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yay i'm the first one here:overjoy:
this fighting started to be so excited^^
now i'm worried about Miyuki &Hisashi will they be alright :confused:
good that u explained the names cuz i was kinda confused whlie i'm reading but now i got know every thing xD
great job as usual ^.*
=) hehe , glad you liked it , I will keep making those explanations from now on =)

Thank you , Hatake
 

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yay i'm the first one here:overjoy:
this fighting started to be so excited^^
now i'm worried about Miyuki &Hisashi will they be alright :confused:
good that u explained the names cuz i was kinda confused whlie i'm reading but now i got know every thing xD
great job as usual ^.*
yea agree with explained names good one... but i like hisashi character ...plz more hisashi part on story:D be careful abt hisashi ..i don want him dead:D
keep up good job *hi5*
 
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awesome job as usual dude
Thank you =)

OMFG this just gets better and better each chapter

you are the real deal my friend!!!!!!!!
=DD Happy to hear that =) Thanks

yea agree with explained names good one... but i like hisashi character ...plz more hisashi part on story:D be careful abt hisashi ..i don want him dead:D
keep up good job *hi5*
Well Hisashi's character is still waiting to be developed , he will have to wait a lil more =)

Thanks

Very nicely done God, I'm going to have to take some lessons from your action scenes for my fan fic. :D

Ok Nanaki ^^ Thanks
 
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