Bettenchi
( 別天地 )
Chapter 1 - Little girl
Somewhere in Ashumi Tomb
Miyuki : Dad ! Where did you go... uf ?!
She's walking in dark corridor
Satoshi : I'm over here Miyuki !
Miyuki : uf... I want to go home
Satoshi : I think its enough for you to be here , get back home and wait for me there . I will stay here for a hour longer.
Miyuki :( cleaning her eyes from tears ): : Umm... ok
Little girl walks in dark corridor again , searching for exit ladders...
But in the dark she spots a spider
Miyuki : Spider !!! Whaaaa... !!!
She touches the wall and suddenly the wall cracks and Miyuki falls into small hidden room
Miyuki : Auch ! That hurts ! Whats that...?
Miyuki comes closer to the center of the room and finds a dusty box
Miyuki : ( thinking ) : What a pretty box...
She trys to open the box , but it seems its locked , thought theres no lock on it
Miyuki : Please.... op...e...n , gffff !!!
Tomb walls and ceiling starts to crumble
Miyuki : Daddy !!!
Mysterious box opens and strong light starts to come right from inside of the box
Miyuki wants to run , but her eyes catches the necklace in the box
Miyuki : Whoah !!!
Her hands trembled as she lifted it. She fastened it round her neck
Her face was happy , but ...
After few minutes necklace starts to shine and Miyuki falls on the ground
Miyuki wakes up surrounded by people
Crowd : Shes fine !!! Shes isnt hurt !!!
Crowd : Thank God...
Miyuki : ( shocked ) : Wha... what... happ... happened ?
Satoshi's brother : Tomb is completely destroyed , it collapsed .
Miyuki :( starts crying ): : Where's my ...dad ? Is he ok ?
Satoshi's brother ( with sad face ) : I'm sorry Miyuki , we are doing what we can to find him... but all we found since tomb collabsed... is his diary and bunch of papers.
10 years later
Doshi : Hey Miyuki !
Miyuki : : Hi Doshi .
Hisashi : ( runing closer ) Hi , what are you doing this Friday ?
Miyuki : ?.? Hi ... is that a date ?
Hisashi : : Ehehehehe ... you will hit me again if I say right ?
Miyuki : ^.^ Nope
Miyuki hits right to Hisashi's face and runs away
Hisashi : What the hell !!!
Hisashi starts chasing Miyuki
Hisashi :: Come here !!! You will pay for it !!!
Miyuki : Catch me first !!! Hahahaha
Somewhere in the shadows
Silhouette in the darkness : Time has come...
Next time : Chapter 2 - Creatures from the past !!!
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=) My first story , I hope someone likes it
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