Beginning Diary Entry of Petals of the Past? The title needs work I think.

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(This will be a Kakashi fic) Petals of the Past
Name: Yuri Tsukino
Hair: Honey blonde
Eyes: Slate grey/cobalt
Birthday: July 3rd
Bio: (Aka a diary entry at age eight) I am the eldest of three children. Father left on a mission but has never come back. Higher ups say he was killed, but that just doesn’t feel right. He’s got to be out there somewhere. Mother didn’t take the news of Father’s supposed death too well and took to drinking bad water to comfort her. She didn’t think of her children. My little sister, Hana, is only four. My little brother, Itsuki, is six, but I’m only eight and I don’t know how to take care of two other children. Ninja academy is hard when you don’t have anyone to ask your questions to. No one really talks to me because everyone knows about my mom’s drinking. I tell her to stop, but she just gets really angry with me and makes me clean more. She never was like this. She loved to garden before Dad “died”. We used to be close with the Yamanaka family, she worked with them. Now we're just a shattered memory of what happiness was.


Feedback is always welcome! Just keep the criticism constructive but thank you for reading.
 
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awesome :) I'll look it up later, I have to get to sleep. (it's 3:30 a.m. here) so I'll do that when I wake up and thank you very much Yuka! Chapter 1 will come soon :)
 
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