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(Suiton: Zerasu-jū no hara) - Water Release: Belly of the Zealous Beast
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (-80 per turn to the target)
Damage: N/A (80 if used Offensively)
Description: Tobirama, with his legendary mastery of water release, will send his water chakra at an area within mid-range. With the use of his water chakra, Tobirama can materialize an orb of water from thin air, which would quickly grow into a large blob of what appears to be a plump goblin made of water. The size of it would be about two times the size of the user, with a fairly large stomach and a body that is about 3 meter wide. The goblin itself is a sentient entity, capable of acting on its own accord. The water that makes up its body has similar properties to (Suiton: Uramiame no Jutsu) - Water Release: Grudge Rain Technique, therefore its ability focuses on absorbing chakra from targets that make contact, including Smaller summonings, Clones, Humans, etc. The main usage for this water blob is to utilize the unique ability of the water to absorb the target's chakra. This is done when the blob would race towards or attempt to approach the target and upon reaching short-range, it would open up its large belly, in which four long whips would emerge to grab a hold of the target's limbs and abruptly pull the target in the stomach. The whips are dense and almost solidified, allowing it to grab a hold of tangible beings despite being made of water. As it is pulled in, the blob's stomach would close, shutting the enemy inside. While the target is inside, he/she will lose chakra from the physical contact with the water, and any raw chakra created inside will be ineffective, like Rasengan, but elemental chakra would still work. The blob itself stays on the battlefield for three turns, however, if it successfully traps a target, the user will be able to manipulate it to stay on the battlefield for longer. Doing this would require a constant stream of chakra, therefore the user will be unable to perform any other techniques while the target is successfully trapped inside the belly. Absorbing chakra if the target is inside the belly has no turn limit, so long as the target is trapped inside. However, if the user deems necessary, with a single handseal, he/she can cause the walls to squeeze in together, trapping the target in an extremely pressurized orb of water that would easily crush anyone inside.
Notes and Restrictions:
- Tobirama bios can use this without hand seals or a water source. Alternatively, bios that don't have his water abilities will have to perform a set of five hand seals.
- The blob itself lasts for three turns, and if the user does not successfully trap the target within the stomach, or if it is destroyed, it will disperse back to water.
- Can only be used once and no water techniques above S-rank while this technique is active.
Perform five hand seals so you can materialize water within mid-range, anywhere within mid-range from you, so if your opponent is at mid-range, you can materialize the water to have it form behind the enemy. The water grows into a large blob of water, appearing to be a plump goblin-like creature made of water, and it is the size of 2x the user with a 3 meter wide body. Its body is made of special water that allows for absorption to happen, so basically it would, once forming, open up its stomach so four whips of water would emerge to try to grab the target, and pull them. Once that is done, it would pull you into the belly of the stomach, closing it in. With a single hand seal, you can crush the enemy inside or keep them there to absorb their chakra; any raw chakra within the belly is neutralized and completely ineffective. It is a sentient entity so it can act on its own, so you can perform other techniques while this is active.

Any questions?
 
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Nothing what so ever the explanation is quite elaborate and clear.^^
Although nowhere in the description is it mentioned that one needs a water source to use it, so even a normal bio can use it without a water source, right?
 

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Yeah but mastery in water so 1 handseal :p

(pa-fekuto-shi-rudo) Perfect Shield
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:While the user is in possesion of his sword he holds it with one of his hand and tranfers pure chakra in it and rotates it in a circular motion and a shield of pure chakra is formed which is capable enough of blocking all the elemental jutsu upto A rank(shield is broken completely)
and below (Shield suffers a little damage but can take on one more attack)
~need to be taught by gitanshu~
~Can only be used 2 time~


So moving on to my technique, well its core is very basic and it is best used in scenarios u have less time to react.

It can defend from a single A rank attack which means A= 2B = 4C and so on but the shield in not movable and we can't maneuver it so once created it stays at the same position.

Fell free to discuss anything.
 
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Yeah, it's a simple yet useful technique. Take out a sword and rotate it a full 360 degrees, while releasing raw chakra through the sword and releasing it as you rotate the sword to create a shield made of chakra. It basically can take any elemental techniques up to A-rank, which is awesome. So, it can take on more attacks if you use it to defend against weaker elements.

I don't have any questions, i like the simplicity of it though, and how easily performed it is.
 
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